Date: 10/08/18 06:38 pm Title: 13:3-6
I have no clue if you're still on this page, or if you'll ever read this, but I found your story through the "random story" section, and it was just breathtakingly beautiful. I really love this style of writing and even though I almost never like first person stories, this was absolutely gorgeously written.
Wonderfully done, I'm so glad I found it!
Author's Response: Oh I'm still here. Thanks for dropping a review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :)
Date: 03/20/11 04:53 pm Title: 13:3-6
Oh my Goddess. This was wonderfully done, I just shed tears while reading this. Its so sad. If this is how you type when your tired than I wanna know how you write when your awake!
Date: 11/12/10 09:12 am Title: 13:3-6
XD I t was cool n amazing haha
Date: 02/22/10 08:32 pm Title: 13:3-6
Sorry! I didn't see that you updated this up until . . . well up until now lol! Aw you killed Bill? Eh, not too bad overall a pretty kickass story. :)
Author's Response: lol and all this time I thought you read it. Yea, I had to kill someone to use the last few verses, Bill's just easier to kill, at least in this story.
Date: 02/10/10 07:41 pm Title: 13:1-2
Wow this was great, you did an amazing job.
Date: 02/10/10 03:16 pm Title: 13:3-6
That was frightening! Well done!
Date: 02/10/10 01:48 am Title: 13:3-6
obviously you should write when you're tired...because this story was amazing!
Date: 02/10/10 01:26 am Title: 13:3-6
Oh, this is epic.
I love this fucked-up shit, except when I write it I usually make Bill love the pain xD But yeah, this is just...wow, I really enjoyed reading this and I think I'm going to favorite :D
Author's Response: Lol, wow I've never had anything of mine be called epic before. Yea, I don't really have the masochism part down yet, but I think I'm pretty good with the torture. Thanks
Date: 02/10/10 01:06 am Title: 13:3-6
ugh i really hate when tom kills him off ;__;
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but someone had to die. Bill's just easier to kill, at least in this story.
Date: 02/09/10 10:44 am Title: 13:1-2
Wow, seems really interesting. I love it how tom's got two sides to him and Bill has all these voices in his head XD
Very dark and twisted means I love it!
Author's Response: Yay! This is the first thing that I've written that has been this dark and I wasn't sure if people would like it. So thank you
Date: 02/08/10 09:45 pm Title: 13:1-2
Wow...this is really good. I faved it and all please continue this was a rather interesting and new take on BDSM with the twins
Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure if anyone would like it beacuse it was new and weird. So thank you so much.