Date: 02/09/10 10:55 am Title: Surprise me
Hmmm.. It was pretty good, even though the metaphors were too abundant IMO, it was well written. I think you know that it was a bit short, and a bit rushed, but it wasn't a turn off. I think you made it work. Well done.
Author's Response: i didn't want it to turn out to be a major make out session (i have a thing for light stuff heh) :p and i wasn't sure how else to turn it into.. aha! and thank you loads for your insight! :D i really appreciate it :>
Date: 02/09/10 09:31 am Title: Surprise me
That was really sweet
Author's Response: :> we all need something light once in a while~
Date: 02/08/10 04:32 pm Title: Surprise me
awww that was adorble, i wna try that something new hehe XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: xD i'm glad i inspired you, in some way, ;D
Date: 02/08/10 02:56 pm Title: Surprise me
aww, this was really adorable :)
Author's Response: thank you! :> glad you enjoyed it!