Date: 04/22/10 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Don't Panic... OK, PANIC.
I want to know what Creepy Gary said! I love this story, it's so great! Keep updating, I will keep reading!
Date: 04/14/10 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
Where's the next chapter???? Can't wait to read the next chapter to this. Tracking this and adding story to favorites.
Date: 04/14/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Don't Panic... OK, PANIC.
Still loving this story. Great descriptions. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.
Date: 04/14/10 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Brat attack!!
Awesomeness. Will she find him before something happens? Great descriptions of course. Can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 04/14/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Occam's Razor. Really??
Liking this more and more. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.
Date: 04/14/10 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Friday night; how all the cool kids are doing it.
Sounds interesting. Great and very-detailed descriptions. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 04/11/10 05:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
OMG :-D I love this story :o) I love Hannah, she is perfect fan! :-D J. :o)
Date: 04/10/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
Aww I loved it!
Date: 04/10/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
Aww I loved it!
Date: 04/10/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
ROFL
that was great
cant wait for more
Date: 04/10/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Friday night; how all the cool kids are doing it.
yeah, I just found out I had that song on my media player list... LOL... It is funny.....
Date: 04/10/10 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
omg i loved it! its so cute and fluffy and fun!
Date: 04/10/10 03:06 am Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
this is soo damn awesome. i thought u could add the english curse of 'fck you' because bill actually says it in one of the schrei songs. forget which though, maybe he learnt it from hannah. XP
Author's Response:
Thank you!rn
Haha, you're right! I'd forgotten about that! I think the song's Beitche (cannot remember how to spell it right now - it's the one that means "confession") You know, Hannah has actually already screamed it at him (whilst she was flipping him off) so that's probably where he learnt it from. Poor boy, she's such a terrible influence!!
Date: 04/09/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
Which song was it he sang in this chapter?? I'm kinda sick and can't think straight right now...
I really liked the chapter the way it is.. Good job on the re-write.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :) rn
It was an early Devilish track, 'It's So Hard To Live.' Youtube it if you haven't heard it before but be warned, Bill's English accent is NOTHING like it is today (and also, he didn't seem to have realised at that point that the key to singing well is based on trivial things like being in tune. Bless him...) I had that EP playing as I wrote this and was giggling like a madwoman at how BAD it is. It's a complete day-brightner! XD
Date: 04/09/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking in and entering? I'm not sure this counts as a GOOD idea.
lol great chapter
Date: 03/08/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Don't Panic... OK, PANIC.
Actually I was gonna say that, if you need any story Ideas for this one, I have a few of my own.... If you want..
But I really do like this as it stands now...
Mabey you could do a Bill present day 20 year old, and how it affects him....
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :) I'd love to hear your ideas - I've got the vague plot outlined but if you can come up with some other ideas, like various things Bill and Hannah could get up to or what could happen (hahah, that sounds like some daft sitcom voice-over, doesn't it? "THIS WEEK, on Thirteen, Bill and Hannah go exploring the old Ice Rink and get a BIG surprise!!") then I'm all for it, hehe!! Message me or drop another review!! :D rnrn
It's funny you should mention doing Bill as a present day 20 year-old - I actually had the idea of continuing this or doing a sequal of sorts after it ends, where Hannah and Bill's paths cross again, though maybe not quite in the way that people might expect... *mysterious smirk*
Date: 03/08/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Don't Panic... OK, PANIC.
good chapter
OH COOL!
Date: 03/08/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Brat attack!!
HAHAHA
Just picturing Bill with that face when looking at the panties....so funny
Date: 03/08/10 01:48 am Title: Chapter 4 - Don't Panic... OK, PANIC.
Seriously lol'd on this entire thing. Thanks for that! :D
Date: 03/08/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4 - Don't Panic... OK, PANIC.
This is quite alot of fun to read. And young boys do act funny around older girls. But most times, they're sweet, in that odd way...