Interesting ! But I don't get your side pairing... Georg/Bill/Tom/Gustav ? And you just have one character listed (Bill)... So it's a relationship between all four of them but only Bill appears in the story? lol
But other than that, seems like a cool story ;)

Author's Response: Hey thanks. I'm new on THF so I get things wrong easily - to answer your question: Bill appears mostly in the story but in the beginning (the following chapters) the boys appear as a whole band as well and the focus will be on Bill again ;-) bye