Date: 02/18/10 02:36 am Title: Swim Trunks!
hahaha this was really really good!! haha ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 02/12/10 10:14 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
bahahahaha! Hysterical. Good read, thanks!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02/10/10 06:50 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
LOL, wonderful!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/08/10 03:29 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
Lmao!
Tom is like his mother, happy that Bill's miserable in hideous swim trunks rather than happy in skimpy little shorts.
This was great and I laughed a lot;; great fic as usual ^_^
Author's Response: Haha...I like the idea of Tom mothering Bill. Glad I could make you laugh!
Date: 02/08/10 03:05 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
lol very well done, made me laugh. thanks, cos i looove to laugh. hope to read more from you soon.
Author's Response: Glad to hear I could make you laugh!
Date: 02/08/10 03:42 am Title: Swim Trunks!
Not a twincest story this time, eh? That's ok. This was so funny! I love how you write stories based on Bill's fashion choices.. it's actually brilliant. :)
I'm kind of hoping that there will be a second chapter to this story where Tom realizes why he was so offended by Bill's swim trunks: because he liked them and found them sexy. Hehe. Just a thought. :)
Author's Response: I realized after I wrote it that I'm beginning to make a habit of these one-shots about Bill's clothes...here's hoping the tour clothes are REALLY ridiculous so I can churn out a couple more. Glad you liked the story--even if it wasn't twincest this time!
Date: 02/08/10 02:50 am Title: Swim Trunks!
HAHAHAHAAHAHHA! I love your Tom, he is so ridiculously hilarious. And sexy.
Sounds like he has the hots for his own brother, rofl.
But then again, I dont think he realizes how good-looking HE actually is. OMFB DID YOU SEE HIS ARMS/CHEST/BODY/EVERYTHING?!?! He's like a German Adonis, meine Gott!
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure the pictures killed me, actually. I especially love the contrast between Tom and Bill...yum. Glad you liked the story!
Date: 02/07/10 03:04 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
Lol!! That was hilarious!! But I have to agree with Tom on this one, I almost had a heart attack when I saw those pictures.. 1. His swimtrunks ARE ugly and way too small. 2. Bill looks so unhealthy in those pictures, it kind of worries me.. :(
I loved the story though :)
Author's Response: They're definitely a UNIQUE fashion choice, but I guess that's what Bill is all about. Glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 02/07/10 01:13 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
hahaha
ROFL LMAO! I can just see Bill struggling against the towal with Tom holding him
Author's Response: Haha...it's a good mental image, isn't it? Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/07/10 10:58 am Title: Swim Trunks!
This was adorable! And really funny too. I so love protective older brother Tom. Aww.
Author's Response: Me too...he's insane, but kind of sweet. Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/07/10 10:14 am Title: Swim Trunks!
This is ridiculously adorable and so very funny! I enjoy that there's a possible twincest undertone but isn't explicit so that it could be anything from brotherly love to BROTHERLY LOVE.
Author's Response: Haha...BROTHERLY LOVE. That's a nice, subtle way of putting it. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, especially as I'm completely incapable of not having SOME twincest (even if it's just twincesty vibes).
Date: 02/07/10 08:49 am Title: Swim Trunks!
Lolololll. This was fantastic! Seven-eighths naked, lol. And the ending was priceless. I love your humor fics. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 02/07/10 08:24 am Title: Swim Trunks!
Ahhahgaa!!! Oh my god, that was hilarious! You never fail to make me laugh. I just LOVED the neurotic Tom and careless Bill. And hey, I can't blame Tom here after the piucs we got... Very enetertaining, thank you! :D
Author's Response: No, you can't blame poor Tom. I'm sure his brain short-circuited when he saw what Bill was planning on wearing. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/07/10 07:50 am Title: Swim Trunks!
THIS. So adorable, so sweet, so funny. I laughed all the way through. You're brilliant. ♥
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad I could make you laugh!
Date: 02/07/10 01:26 am Title: Swim Trunks!
LMAO---absolutely perfect! Straight to fav's~
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/06/10 09:37 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
LMAO!!! and adorable!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/06/10 08:58 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
You. Are. Brilliant. *grinning like a loon*
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
Date: 02/06/10 08:17 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
some people from the resort said Bill throw the little black towel from around his neck on his private when he sunbathed naked. So their saying not speedos or short shorts. and if you look there's no lines it's straight across so it's probably the towel.
but this was a funny story and I could see that happening Tom seems more anal and overprotective and Bill seems to be living in his own world with his own crazy logic and rules.
I have been waiting for a vaction story from the pics and this was great always find general hilarious and cute brotherly dilemmas.
and side note did you notice that both swim trunks were the same colors and plaid. always want to be different through the years with styles but when it comes to vacation they always dress similar and match.
Author's Response: I did hear that suggestion, and I think it might have short-circuited my brain...lol. I would definitely like some conclusive evidence of nude sunbathing. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story, whether the tiny shorts exist or not!
Date: 02/06/10 06:14 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
Poor Tom, it really wasnīt fair. :))) These microscopic swim trunks, oh my, it is clear that Tomīs action must be quick. But I think these longer trunks are cute too. :-)
You are the winner!!! I mean, in my little competition, you know, the first story about twins on holiday. :)))
And the first prize is... is... I donīt know yet. ;-)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm the winner! (I'm okay with it being a prize-less and imaginary competition, as long as I still get to declare myself a winner). I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 02/06/10 04:45 pm Title: Swim Trunks!
aww i liked it!cute and funny!
Author's Response: Thanks!