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Reviewer: 30061995xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/10 09:42 am Title: Chapter 2

Hahaha lol Georg and Gustav :) you just got to love them

Reviewer: 30061995xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/10 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh David and Lindsay seem like good friends :)

Reviewer: xRawrrxRawrrxRawrrx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is so intruiging. Can't wait for the next update :D

Author's Response: Thanks :) Hope to update soon.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 18

short and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I apologize for the writer's block.

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/10 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 16

Maybe he has this "something" for Lindsay. Euhm, just guessing you know.

Can you please write longer chapters? Danke Schon!

WRITE MORE!

Author's Response: I promise to write longer, working on the next chapter right this minute.

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 16

Is he drunk??!---As soon as I "saw" him answer that way; I was like "Oh shit..." Lol!

 

 

Love the suspension and the cliffhanger!--Keep up the good work! LoL! 



Author's Response: Unfortunately I have to say no :) Glad that you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 16

pedofile lol (i know i didnt spell it right)

Author's Response: Lol nice.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

Hm ... i like this chapter, but i was listing to Love Me Or Not by Dub FX and i thought it kinda went with it too, oh well nice chapter.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

Nice nice.

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 14

Why is David being a prick?--Lol; I wonder what he meant though...

 

 

I love this story--Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review promise to answer your question soon in the next few chapters hopefully coming soon. :)

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 11

LOVE IT!!

So Bill really has "something" for Lindsay...

I wonder where it leads to...

Author's Response: Hey, thank you again for the reviews I promise to update soon. :)

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/10 10:35 am Title: Chapter 10

can't wait!!!


*speechless*

Author's Response: I'll try to come up with an extra long installment soon. Thanks for the support :)

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 9

woooo!!

love it!!

can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 10:39 am Title: Chapter 8

It's GREAT!!

I love it!

I thought Lindsay was mad at Bill but now...

I love the story concept!

Please write more chapters and update faster!

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/10 10:19 am Title: Chapter 6

oooooohhhhhh!!!!!!

what will happen next??

please write more chapters!!!

the story is getting more and more interesting!

please write more and faster!!

LOVE THE STORY!!

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 10:00 am Title: Chapter 4

love it!!

please write more chapters!!!

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Your word choice and tone is just amazing..

 

Just really beautiful and down to earth at the same time...

 

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 3

wow!!!

love the chapter!!!

write more and plese, FASTER!!!

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like it! Lindsay has a good sense of humor!--Keep up the good work kid! Lol!

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