Date: 09/25/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
“It’s a perfect night for shadows, don’t you think?” She said happily.
that kinda punched me in the throat. in a good way.
some parts of this fic, i gotta say.. some parts are painfully brilliant
Author's Response: THANK YOU! :)
Date: 05/27/10 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
Ummm wow. He is going to kill David o_o next chapter please! This is killing me!
Date: 05/27/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 24
I think he should tell the cops about David but find out about his connections first >.< this is so intense.
Date: 05/27/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 23
Bill van help her :)
Date: 05/25/10 05:06 am Title: Chapter 21
Does he know that the evil bastard David raped her? zomg.
Date: 05/02/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 22
I will put a smiley face, 'cause i liked the chapter, but don't know what to say. :)
Author's Response: That's sweet. I can admit I'm kinda stuck right now.
Date: 04/24/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 20
O my god I did not see that coming. Please update soon I need to finish this story. I need to see what happens. Please please please please!
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. Working on the next chapter.
Date: 04/24/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 17
I honestly don't like how people always put David as the bad guy but I really really like this story. Even if I David is really very nice in real life and not creepy at all.
Author's Response: Honestly wasn't intentional he just kind of fell into the part most of the stories I've seen have coined Tom or Bushido as the bad guy.