Date: 03/26/25 08:12 am Title: A Brother's Love
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 06/02/13 01:38 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Oh, what a sad story. Poor boys...
Date: 06/03/12 02:47 am Title: A Brother's Love
Wow.... That is all i have to say
i like *scratch that* love it!
i like how you made it seem as if it was yourself but in the story it was Tom. Seeing it from Tom's perspective, i love it :)
Date: 11/20/11 04:56 am Title: A Brother's Love
finally! something new!
Date: 08/15/11 09:25 pm Title: A Brother's Love
I guess I read this last year and started reading it again, only realizing that I'd read this before halfway through.... but I read the review I left u last year and I think I feel a bit different now.
I think you've created a whole world here and I love how complex the emotions are. Its a really sad story I think. We read so many stories where Tom thinks Bill is beautiful in so many ways, even if he's not sexually attracted to him, and you've painted a distinctly opposite picture here. I think its sad that even tho here Bill seems rather self-involved, glorified, and almost fake, he really is a real person who loves someone (Tom) and I think he cruelest saddest part is that that's the one person who doesn't love him back. It's a bit heartbreaking, really.
I think I didn't like this fic cuz it made me sad, but I think it's complex and deep and I actually admire the writing in this fic. So yeah, I actually did like it. Well done. :)
Date: 07/15/11 03:53 am Title: A Brother's Love
Really amazing. Could be the start of a great story.
Date: 04/18/11 06:01 pm Title: A Brother's Love
While reading I realized I've actually read this before, but never reviewed. And even though I really hate twin sex, I love the way you described it here, because you can almost feel how Tom feels. Nice one :)
Date: 12/30/10 02:14 pm Title: A Brother's Love
"...and he’s lying beneath you moaning like a whore, his legs spread and cheeks flushed, but you still don’t find him beautiful. Instead, you see him as just another failure, a Hollywood train-wreck, reduced to begging for sex from his own brother’s bed."
Wow. that paragraph broke my heart quite a bit. Poor Bill.
Even though I do not like my boys depicted this way, I love this story. It is beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it with us :)
Date: 11/28/10 05:42 pm Title: A Brother's Love
wow, i dont know how you did it, but you kind of managed to make me hate Bill. He seems so pathetic...and poor Tom, having to put up with that for the rest of his life. It sucks for both of them, because Bill will never know he isnt loved, and if he did who knows what could happen. and Tom has to pretend to love his brother because he loves him like a brother adn doesn't want to hurt him or lose the life he has. so sad and twisted. and btw, i totally didnt know this was from another fandom. great job
Date: 10/05/10 08:59 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Wow! Diferent, a cool diferent. :)
Date: 08/01/10 06:35 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Ah. That made Bill look like a monster. O.o
Author's Response: Can you really call him a monster if Tom never tells him how he feels?
Date: 07/28/10 04:37 pm Title: A Brother's Love
again i love this, and i just wanna say that i looked at your profile-and i totally agree O: twc should always be related! :D
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Oh and btw, high fives for twincest!
Date: 07/22/10 05:51 am Title: A Brother's Love
So, I just read this again and... Ugh... It just breaks my heart. I went through and read your author responses for everyone and it just made this that much better for me. You are so amazing, Rach, I've missed you.
Author's Response: It cracks me up that people like this one so much! I wrote it when I was actually upset with something Jared Leto of all people had done, and due to a twisted turn of fates it ends up my most popular Tokio Hotel fic posted to date. lol Guess that's life though, ey?
Date: 06/26/10 10:30 pm Title: A Brother's Love
what was the previous fandom? ;D loved it btw
Author's Response: Previous fandom was 30 seconds to mars! And Im glad you loved it. <3
Date: 06/20/10 03:53 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Wow.This is brilliant
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, dovie!
Date: 06/10/10 04:54 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Great story! I don't really like the way in which you pictured twins, but I adore your writing style :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! And I don't like thinking of them that way either, but I wrote this when I was going through this really bad stage where I hated happy endings x.x so everything i wrote was more bittersweet. lol
Date: 05/24/10 09:53 am Title: A Brother's Love
.real.
Author's Response: thank you?
Date: 04/23/10 04:28 pm Title: A Brother's Love
LOVE LOVE LOVE !im loving the angst
amazng!so well written!
what fandom did you write it for?
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ And the original fandom was 30 Seconds to Mars, Jared/Shannon Leto
Date: 03/30/10 07:30 am Title: A Brother's Love
Oof... That made me cringe! It was written brilliantly but definitely not how I expected the fic to be when I read the summary.
And not really how I like my boys to be, if I'm honest. I think you have a lot, lot, lot of talent, but it just was not my scene. I'm all for fluffy twin love, with angst from the outside world. Oof.
Author's Response: I'm all for fluffy twin love too! This was just for one of those "reverse emotions" type things that I originally wrote for Jared/Shannon Leto. Believe me, in my book the twins are the complete opposite of this! I promise. -hugs you super tightly- I'll write something nice and twincesty in a good way to make up for this, I promise!rnrn<3 Shin
Date: 03/24/10 10:55 pm Title: A Brother's Love
I LOVED IT!!!! amazing wirting. deffinitly different, raw and something new from the continous stories were their love always seems to be perfect and happy half of the time. I like reading where one of the twins doesnt feel the same way, and no matter what he won't, not the eventual.."oh i feel the same too" stuff. so long story short. this was basically..AAAA MAZING!
Author's Response: Wow, Amazing? Really? -hugs you super tightly- This fic started off as a challenge for another fandom, and really wasn't expecting anyone to take that much interest in it once I had changed it over to Tokio Hotel! I'm really glad you liked it though and didn't think it was "too different." I was afraid I would get a bunch of reviews like "No he DOES love him! What are you saying this is all wrong!" Like I had received in the other fandom. Thank you so much for leaving such a nice review! You've made my day. <3 Shin
