Date: 03/23/10 02:21 am Title: A Brother's Love
.....wow...that...is....wow....
Author's Response: lol Thank You!
Date: 03/14/10 01:04 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Wow. Such a different perspective. You captured Tom's point of view so well.
Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad you liked it : )
Date: 03/06/10 08:20 pm Title: A Brother's Love
ooh interesting. a new take~
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/08/10 01:47 pm Title: A Brother's Love
oh.... this is so saaaad! i feel sorry for both of them; for Tom because he doesn't seem to have much of a choice and is kinda a pushover, and Bill because he loves Tom and thinks Tom feels the same way.... I really loved this fic! Thank you so much for writing this! One of my favourite parts:
"And as he smiles up at you, you can’t help but wish the smile was fake instead of genuine. Because if it was fake, the same smile that he uses for everyone else, then maybe you can pretend that he’s pretending as well, that you are both using and humoring one another, that he isn’t actually in love with you."
and um, does this other fandom happpen to be Harry Potter? .... :P
Author's Response: -hugs- Thats one of my fav lines in it too. One of the few lines I didnt have to change at all from the other version too. I was happy I could keep it. ^_^ And if you're curious, the original fandom was 30 Seconds to Mars Jared/Shannon Leto. -hugs you again to just make sure you know you're loved- hehe thank you for reading and reviewing and im really happy that you liked it so much!! <3
Date: 02/07/10 03:37 pm Title: A Brother's Love
this is the most beautiful os i ever red.
i thik i cried. thank you.
:D
Author's Response: Aw, don't cry! -hands you tissue- I'm glad you liked it that much though, but don't cry! That would make me sad. -hugs you tightly-
Date: 02/05/10 05:49 pm Title: A Brother's Love
This was amazing, I love it completely. It touched me a lot.
I'd really like to see Bill's point of view though, because this is so interesting, original and a whole other outtake of their 'relationship'.
Umm, other fandom, Harry Potter? Unless its like from an anime or manga or something. I dont know that many fandoms.
I reeeaally want to read more of this, it ended too soon in my opinion cus its so good :)
Author's Response: You're not the only one who's asked to see Bill's POV. Even before I switched the fandoms, that was the side alot of people were curious about. "What was HE thinking?!" But the more I think about it, the more I wonder if -- if it was in his pov -- the fic would appear any different from all the other sappy twincest fics at all... Whether or not he truly believed Tom loved him and enjoyed their time together, or if he knew the whole time and got off on knowing... or if it was just as hard on him... theres so many ways it could go. But I kinda like it being open for interpretation.rnrnThe original fandom was 30 Seconds to mars btw! Jared/Shannon Leto. Love those boys. ^_^rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing! Love you!rnrn~Shin
Date: 02/05/10 04:23 am Title: A Brother's Love
Wow, nice job! No, it wasn't too angsty, because it was mostly silent, passive, torturing angst instead of big drama. I love to read twins like this - sick and twisted and so far beayond anything normal - even if this always makes my heart ache a little. And the worst part is that I actually understand, why they act and feel like this.
I think you wrote pretty unique characters for them and I wasn't actually expecting roles to be like this, but then again, it kind of makes sense. Very cruel and brutal to write so harshly of Bill's dominance in love and how even Simone prefered him over Tom. Very heartbreaking - especially because Bill IS so much more in spotlight, so much on a lips of everyone and it can't be denied.
In overall very well written and interesting, yet painful fic to read. Made me want to hug Tom :D. Good job!
Author's Response: You felt more sorry for Tom then Bill? I've always wondered who the real one the pitty should fall on was: Tom for being forced and unable to say no, or Bill who possibly believes Tom really does love him? It's always interesting to see why peoople picked which side. ^_^rnrnI'm really happy this has gotten so many reads on here! I wasn't expecting that at all, wasn't sure how the fandom would take the twins rolls they way they're portrayed in this fic. So glad you liked it and left such a NICE review too!rnrnMuch Love,rn~Shin
Date: 02/05/10 01:35 am Title: A Brother's Love
well written...
Author's Response: Thank You
Date: 02/05/10 12:22 am Title: A Brother's Love
Wow.
I haven't read anything like that on THF before. I don't really know what to say, and that's lame but it's rare that an author renders me speechless. Hell, it's rare that ANYTHING renders me speechless... But, Rhea-mus, my love, you have. Great job as always.
Author's Response: Did I really render you SPEECHLESS?! -feels happy- You txt'd me but I didnt know you'd reviewed!! -gives you love- You rock my socks, dovie! b29;
Date: 02/05/10 12:19 am Title: A Brother's Love
Interesting idea to approach the twins relationship that way, not my fav, but it was well written. I think what made this story stand out was that it was written in 2nd person. It kinda made me pouty and sad that Tom doesn't really love Bill.... faker. :(
Lol. Thanks for writing. :)
Author's Response: I adore 2nd person... Any fic that I write just for the hell of it, to write to relax is in 2nd person... It just comes natural to me. I have to actually plan out and THINK about 1st or 3rd. lol And it is sad that Tom didn't love bill in this, but at least we know that Tom loves Bill in real life, hum? -huggles-
Date: 02/04/10 11:00 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Dude, anytime, anywhere! I wubs you moar!!
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 02/04/10 10:42 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Love it!!!!! Awesome jobbbb
-random
(from da boxiee!!)
Author's Response: Ha! More Boxie love! -loves the Schrei!Box girlies-
Date: 02/04/10 10:33 pm Title: A Brother's Love
This is amazing. I will continue saying that until...forever. Amazing, amazing, amazing.
Author's Response: -laughs like a maniac- Amazing?!! Ha! -spins in circles with you- We should work together more often, you helping me turn stuff into Tokio Hotel fiction! haha b29; you!
Date: 02/04/10 10:32 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Leto brothers! Am I right?
Anyways, this is great, Remus. It's a little on the sad side, but ja, it's great. :D
Author's Response: Ha! You so don't count, Amy! You KNEW the answer before you even read this! haha -hugs tightly- and Thanks for reviewing and reading though hehe
Date: 02/04/10 10:17 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Naruto? It's just a guess, like you said, but I find a lot of people write slash for that particular show. I thought this was unique; the way you described it makes me wonder if Tom does ever feel this way, because everything is absolutely true. It makes me sad, in a way. But I liked it and enjoyed it. :)
-Trigger
Author's Response: Yes, I wonder sometimes too how Tom and Bill REALLY feel about one another, how much of the Twin thing is faked. I mean, don't get me wrong. I ADORE the twins and I love the sweet sappy romance stories betwen them, but realisticly? What would the chances of it being that perfect be? ^_^ -hugs you tightly- Im really glad you enjoyed it though! To be honest I was expectin to get flamed for talking bad about twincest or something! -hugs you again just for good measures- rnrnLove You! ~Shin rnrnP.S. Naruto? Really? Several people have said that! I've never even seen Naruto. haha The original fandom was 30 Seconds to Mars Jared/Shannon Leto. ^_^
Date: 02/04/10 09:56 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Wow :) I loved this! Awesome story :D
Author's Response: Awww Thank you!
Date: 02/04/10 09:51 pm Title: A Brother's Love
It's very different to read something in which one twin doesn't, on some level, love his other so much as he loves despising him. I enjoyed this. And I pick...My Chem as the other fandom.
Author's Response: It is different, but I think that's why it was so much fun to write. Because it wasn't the same ol' same ol'. Y'know? And nope, not MCR even though I love me some waycest. ^_^ Was 30 Seconds to Mars. Jared/Shannon Leto. rnrnMuch Love,rn~Shin
Date: 02/04/10 09:50 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Aww, I'm so sad for both of them! :( Well done. :)
Author's Response: -hugs- I know... Hopefully they're not that way in real life. ^_^
Date: 02/04/10 09:36 pm Title: A Brother's Love
Amazing. Love the unusual hate/love you have going on here. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/04/10 09:12 pm Title: A Brother's Love
i love it, i love it , i love it!
i could key board smash *kfjdklfjdsalfkjef* kays, done!
wow, it was just unbelievably good~ i hope you write more of these *heehee*
Author's Response: You loved it so much you smashed your keyboard? haha I'm glad you liked it though! Wasn't expecting a review so quickly! -hugs you super tightly- I'm also glad you didnt thik it was too dark or whatnot. ^_^rnrnMuch Love!rn~Shin