Date: 03/05/10 06:17 pm Title: Six
omg....omg....
bill...i am now soooo hurt broken for u.... my billaa...
who the hell is Tom?!?!?1?!
dear autor- thank u for the update :DDD
Date: 02/28/10 11:33 pm Title: One
Love this story. What a twist!
Date: 02/28/10 03:49 pm Title: Five
The fuck. I do not like this Tom.
But good job :3
Date: 02/28/10 11:47 am Title: Five
"I always wanted to meet you.." ??? WTF??? That ain't Tom...so then who is it???
Date: 02/28/10 10:11 am Title: Five
ooo....la-la damn that boy moves fast
Date: 02/28/10 05:58 am Title: Five
omg im so confuseddddddd
Date: 02/28/10 03:34 am Title: Five
Oh my goodness, I wonder what is the deal with Tom, if that is Bill's Tom. Sometimes I think that, that might not be the real Tom but then at the same time Bill knowing they are identical twins would notice if it wasn't Tom, so I am really curious about Tom's behavior.
Date: 02/28/10 02:40 am Title: Five
:/ whoa...wth is going on ?!?
Can't wait until the next chapter!
Date: 02/28/10 02:39 am Title: Five
Awww this is good. more, please :D
Date: 02/19/10 11:26 pm Title: Four
I'm hoping Georg will help Bill get to the bottom of thing's before it's too late...
Thank's for updating.
Date: 02/19/10 10:53 pm Title: Four
OooooOoo this is getting good... When are Bill and Tom gonna have sex? Is Tom gonna rape him? 0_o
Date: 02/10/10 12:20 pm Title: Three
cnt wait 4 thee rest
Date: 02/10/10 11:56 am Title: Three
*sdajsljfdf*
it's catching on to me *heehee*
i need more cause i need to know more.. tom has grabbed me and bill is torn!
please update soon!
Date: 02/10/10 09:02 am Title: Three
No no, do update more often than once a week! It'll make the readers to stay more in the story :D
I love how there's small things that make you realize the plot, like Tom not realizing Bill was talking to him, and insisting Bill wouldn't go to work. Little things make the big picture.
I don't really have anything else to say, didn't find typos, it's clear. Some things you could explain a little better, more in detail. But I understant it's just not your way of writing, not prolonging things :) It's okay too. It's not a bad thing in my oppinnion.
What else... hmm.. I do hope Bill would't sneak out to work at night, and find out the things going there (wasn't his biggest cliant killed?) I think that's comning in the future though.
Well, I guess I'll just wait for the next chappie to fing out!
Date: 02/10/10 06:05 am Title: Three
uh oh. Either this isn't Tom, or he is up to no good. Either way I don't like it. Poor Bill. he deserves good things, not bad! Keep up the good work!!
Date: 02/10/10 04:53 am Title: Three
OK; first Bill is dirty.
Leaving without shower or brushinf=g your teeth after breakfast is not clena at all.
This apart, Tom is so manipulative and not sure it's the real Tom actually.
And Bill is getting into a lot of troubles.
He's very very fragile I reckon
Date: 02/10/10 01:37 am Title: Three
I rlly don't think you should stick to once a week updates because I enjoy reading this and I wanna know what happens so bad so please. You do an amazing job