Date: 06/28/11 12:40 am Title: Chapter 45
Great chapter! Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: thanks!!
Date: 06/27/11 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 45
great chapter
cant wait for more
please update soon
Author's Response: soon as i can :)
Date: 06/27/11 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 45
pfft, that proves nothing. I have seen two people with lip piercing make out and not get tangled. My brother's friends used to watch me at night when I was 11 because my mom switched to 3rd shift for a while. Couldn't keep their hands off eachother for much. But you're right, we are in a nice little bubble here, in reality I know enough twins to know that stuff prolly doesn't go down. My aunts for instance hate eachother more often than they like eachother...like 98% percent of the lives is spent hating. And the two percent they didn't was when they were into drugs an promiscuous group things...so I have wondered about that...*twitches*...the images they haunt me...
This was a wonderful chapter. I really hope the teacher's decide to give Tom a break and let him make up the work for the day he was suspeneded, he was after all in defense of another.
I'm reeally proud of Tom that he is willing to do that with Bill, but that was really not the time, or way to broach the sunject...I suppose it was as good a time as any to let Bill know he would be willing, but not the time to consider actually doing it...if that makes any sense at all.
I really enjoyed this. Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response: yahh, i looked it up on yahoo answers and it said it doesnt really matter, i was just speculating. esp. since tom wears the open kind so it'd catch bill's loop easier :) aw, well, i know some twins that sorta hate each other also, but i knew some that mostly didn't. and there are these super gay twins at my college that wear the same everything as each other everyday, wear their hair the same, and ride matching scooters xD they look pretty happy with each other. but yah, twincest...i only know of (for males) these czech porn star twins that do each other, and while they say they are like boyfriends and seem to be enjoying themselves, it could easily just be a ploy to shock and amaze (and look damn hot ;). i know plenty of twins do lesbian porn because they're that lacking in self-worth, but yah, in real life...probably not. maybe experimentation at the most. ew don't think about relatives like that xD god, who told you about their clandestine past? not something you needed to know hahaha.
thanks so much! oh, i didnt even think of that! do they normally not let them make it up? i know nothing about suspension...lol.
yah, Tom's a good kid...only, idk if i can write that, TBH. but i'm gonna bite the bullet and hope nobody gets tooo turned off. i'll try to make it good and in character, i'm not a fan of Tom suddenly being all girly and moan-ey and unlike himself the second someone's gonna put dick in him. exactly, it was the time, but not the time. haha.
Date: 06/27/11 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 45
hero Tom to the rescue!
Author's Response: x]
Date: 06/07/11 01:27 am Title: Chapter 44
lol nice
Author's Response: lol thanks...xD
Date: 06/06/11 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
you are so welcome :D cookies for everyone!
Date: 06/06/11 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
nifty, still though, if you ever wanna be cast in one of my chappies send me an email. I try to cast 3 main types of people (but all are welcomed). 1)my friend i have irl 2)people whose fics draw me in 3)Those who don't mind being in a het fic..('m currently experimenting with slash)
Author's Response: okay, thanks.
Date: 06/05/11 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
can i use it? i'll give you all credit! oh i know! If you want I can somehow give a role (minor if you wish) in my newest chapter of Angel In Disguise. (sorry i get excited over words that peak my interest)
Author's Response: haha, it's okay, take it. it's a real word so I don't own it :)
Date: 06/05/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Anything that has to do with standing up for what you believe in moves me. ~wipes tears away~ and the word was miffed, i liked the way it sounded
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/05/11 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 39
this chappie made me cry ~grabs a tissue~ oh and i saw a word that you used that i liked...
Author's Response: aw, i'm happy i could move you like that. *hands tissue* and what word might you be referring to...?
Date: 06/05/11 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 44
=) cute chapter. thanks for the update!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewingg
Date: 06/05/11 02:27 am Title: Chapter 44
Im a faithful reader and ima still here!!!! (but now that i think of it, i havent really reviewed, have i?? Sorry :D)
i loove the story so keep on the great work :D
Author's Response: haha, yay! and that's alright as long as you do it now! since there is only a handful of chapters left, please do! :) thanks so much!!
Date: 06/05/11 01:12 am Title: Chapter 44
I loved this chapter. And Gustab was funny 'Lesbian action at its finest.' lol. Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: hahah thanks!! wont have to wait TOO long this time xD god willing
Date: 06/04/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 44
*huggles* Of course I'm still with you! I don't give up on fics. Ever. I'm like a dog with a bone in that regard.
This chapter was really great. Fillerificness at its best. I muat say, I'm shocked Bill drank so much after his last two experiances with boozing it up.
But at least it lead to good times this go around. I feel kinda bad for Emily. Its so easy to fall for Bill. He is adorable, and I imagine a very good kisser.
Shame on whats-her-face for taking the pics and lets hope she didn't get any of them making out.
Great work! Have a great summer break. Get a little relaxing in. Its good for you. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: yay thankss. yah well, aren't we all shocked we drink so much after telling ourselves "never again"...? haha...
yes! poor cheerleader, he's probably turned her off of jocks, and now what will she do? hahaa, poor chloe, i think people don't like her much...i like her. lol. i wouldnt mind if she did have pics, you know she'd treasure them just like we would...xD but bill wouldnt be a fan.
thanksss, you too. i'm relaxing...with my keyboard and imagination.
Date: 06/04/11 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 44
Soooo Funnyyyy!
Thanks
Author's Response: :D thank you!
Date: 06/04/11 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 44
still with you, and still love this!
Author's Response: thanksss!!
Date: 06/04/11 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 44
lol
the end was funny
please update son
have you been reading my story called "Bill's Story"
Author's Response: haha thanks xD, and I will!! ohh, no i haven't been, didn't know of it, but if you want me to update soon maybe it's not a good idea right now! lol. i'm writing for the Big Bang, too
Date: 05/04/11 03:39 am Title: Chapter 43
more sex = more reviews lols
I like how happy they are but now I'm scared again. Everytime Bill gets happy something awful happens. This is what I call the Harry Potter Clause- when the protag is happy shit goes down.... eeps.
Author's Response: LOL the Harry Potter Clause, i'm gonna steal that. it's amazing. love harry potter....lol more reviews? you'd think, but idk, doesn't go down that way. i guess a lot of ppl just get off and logout. ;P
as far as shit going down, I really am trying to bring this to a close by around 50 chapters, so I don't think any major shit will go down...there is something, though ;)
Date: 05/02/11 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 43
yey, update!
bill and tom are going public! *giggles* i just hope noone finds out they're related.
nice, hot smex too :)
Author's Response: not just yet, but yes, someday in the near future.rn
rnyah...they need to watch themselves if they make any really observant friends...
thanks!!
Date: 05/01/11 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 43
Amazing. I just read it all in one sitting and it was simply mind blowing. This concept is AWESOME and so well thought out and so well written that I am so thankful that it wasn't butchered by an immature writer.
Please add something about Jorg escaping from jail and coming after Bill. That would be a BIG twist when you add all the protective services and every thing that such a situation entails. Also I would love it (if you add this idea) that Jorg succeds in getting Bill and torturing him some more to add an even more heart breaking twist to the story.
ps. Collin has to die along the way (or you can make him come to worship Bill if you desire(maybe even fall head over heals with him).
Thanks for writing this story and reading my rant of ideas!
Author's Response: hahaha, thanks for getting so involved! well, as fun as it might be to throw a little more jorg into the mix, it's honestly not very realistic. federal prison generally manages to contain even the most hardened criminals, and jorg is a simple, albeit fucked up, ordinary man. it's something to think about, though...
as for collin, lol, he's not gonna die. but i don't think you'll be too disappointed...;) thanks for the review! i hope you continue to give me feedback as we go along. don't abandon me, i faithfully post at least...once a month. not as quickly as i would like of course, but i never forget about this story :) school is really intense right now, but summer is three weeks from reality! bear with. thanks again