Date: 02/04/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
i loved it. my favorite part was how you describe the dream.
Author's Response: thank you! actually, the next two chapters begin similarly...
Date: 02/04/10 11:01 am Title: Chapter 2
this awesome...when are u going to have chapter 3? soon i hope
Author's Response: im glad you're interested! very soon, promise! unfortunately when I post it still has to await verification tho, so that takes a while...
Date: 02/04/10 07:15 am Title: Chapter 2
So far this is really good! Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: wooooooooo! I'll try XD
Date: 02/03/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
loooooove it ! update soon please ?:D
Author's Response: yay! okay, if you insist XD *hopefully I'll get validated soon so updates won't have to be pending for hours*
Date: 02/03/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
it was amazingly well written and thought out. Great job so far!
Author's Response: XD thank you so much
Date: 02/03/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is really getting good-hope Tom can get Bill to talk more and hopefully Tom will find out Bill's secret before too long-thank's for the fast updating!
Author's Response: ooh thanks! yes, he will find out soon enough, can't rush it too much ;) yes, i love it when people update often so I'll try to do so, probably won't be every day, but it will progress quickly :)
Date: 02/03/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to read more
Author's Response: thanks that means a lot!
Date: 02/03/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
I cant wait till the next chapter
keep this going, its good
Author's Response: yay! thank you. woo my tenth ever review <3 i can see why people love them now :3
Date: 02/03/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting! The idea seems a teensy bit overdone, as many other fics have had the same plot, but I hope this story ends up being different and unique! Keep up the good work ;].
Author's Response: aah sorry about that. i havent read another with this plot, but it makes sense because bill lends himself well to the 'wounded spirit' type, and naturally tom would be his knight, yes? i'll try not to dissappoint!
Date: 02/03/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really well written. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: yayy!! i slaved over the text, i really wanted to make it flow well because I can't stand having to constantly gloss over errors when I want to be engrossed in the plot
Date: 02/03/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor bill.
i cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: yay! you wont have to wait long :)
Date: 02/03/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohh i care! for sure! i like the idea well not the fact that bill get's raped or so but i mean .......Tada!!! there's Tom who will help him... i hope so!
anyway interesting!
and that Jorg!why is he always the bad character!??? oh god is someone finds out i dunno gordon or a teacher or so please beat him up! :P
Author's Response: I guess he's always the bad character cuz he's the flake person...and yes, tada! Tom :) yah, dont worry, Jorg will have consequences
Date: 02/03/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes please please please update:] i think this story has huge potential!
Author's Response: ooh thank you! *blush* I hope I can live up to it XP
Date: 02/03/10 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I cant wait to see what happens wilth Tom and bill keep writing
Author's Response: yay thanks! XD
Date: 02/03/10 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh yes-update soon please~ Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: XD yayyy
Date: 02/03/10 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, poor Bill...
But I really like it! Keep at it!
And I don't think it's short. It's a perfect chapter length.
Update soon, pleeease ^^
Author's Response: Aw thank you! yah, I feel bad for Bill too, but he'll be okay ;)