Date: 03/25/13 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
its ok
most of the fanfics that are not finished that i have liked have not been updated in YEARS
Author's Response:
Me too ;_; it's so sad, so many of the best are left to rot
Date: 03/25/13 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 46
I am still here but *Gibbs smack* that was a ridiculous wait. It was very good though, and I look forward to seeing this finished and whatever you work on next. Keep up the lovely work.
Author's Response:
So so sorry! Thank you so much for coming back to me <3 i am actually working on something I think you'll like, but I wont post until it's done because I am on WIP probation xD
Date: 03/25/13 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
i saw that you updated today and i havent read this in so long i forgot most of it so i thought i would reread it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm sorry I took so long >_<
Date: 03/25/13 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 46
Hallelujah you're back!!! :D
Nice job, good chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! <3 I'll never leave you again!
Date: 07/21/12 01:52 am Title: Chapter 42
Omg this story kicks ass! You're doing a fantastic job with it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! that really means a lot to me, since it's been so long since I managed to update it...I'm currently working on the last 5 chapters of this, I have about three left, but I felt uninspired. This review is really the kick in the pants that I needed. Thanks so so so much! I'll try to finish it quickly, but I don't want to post any until the end is in sight, because I don't want to go on hiatus again! Hugs and don't forget to check back for more in the next couple of months!!
Date: 04/21/12 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 45
So you probably forgot all about me, but I had this saved for the longest time to read and just never got around to it. I finally did and forgot how much I looked forward to it... Are you gonna try and update soon?
Author's Response: aw, thanks so much! that's pretty inspiring, actually xD yah, I've only got 5 chapters to go and I have about two of them written...college has been crazy and before that I had writer's block, but I should be able to finish it this summer. I'm out of school mid-May. I just don't want to post until I'm sure I'll be able to update on a regular basis, because it feels really lame to wait so long ;_;
Thank you so much for reading after all this time, it means a lot. Keep an eye out this summer because I've got a lot of ideas for more, once I finish this one....:)
Date: 09/03/11 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 45
Oh, poor Bill! D: I'm so glad Tom was there to help him, but I can feel Bill's frustration that Tom let himself be hurt.
I can't wait to read the end of this, if you feel inspired again. WRITEZ MOAR NOW!!! ~__^ Just kidding, I had to say it! But, I will be reading when you can continue it!
Author's Response: mhmm, and they can't be all stars and sunshine everyday, right? haha....though it's still not a major issue. i just can't seem to get these boys to fight xD. i might still try, though, i'm not yet decided on the direction i'm going with the next chapter~~~ but i do feel a bit inspired now, thanks! i still need to finish the big bang first, tho
Date: 09/03/11 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 43
Wow! I was wondering how they were going to get out of that sticky point, when people started to learn that they were actually brothers. Good twist you threw in there! Nice way of working out that they could be together and no one would know they are twins. But, they'll have to move away from Gordon and Simone! D:
Author's Response: yay, thanks. yahh, I mean, a lot of the people I tell they are twins to are still like, uh, okay...so I think it'd work as long as no one ever said anything and Bill kept being so fabulous...:) poor Simone is gonna have major empty nest issues, poor dear.
Date: 09/03/11 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 42
Poor Gordon. No matter what goes on, it's going to be awkward! Also, I adore the pic of kitties sleeping! :3 That's how I imagine Bill and Tom sleeping too, only not so blond!
Author's Response: yes, awkward unavoidable unless it becomes a full family orgy party xD NO, jk, that'd be even more awkward. ugh, bad mental images xP
yay, sleeping kitties....yes, a little less fur and a little more black hair :D
Date: 09/03/11 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oh no! D: Why did Bill run away like that without even trying to explain? I guess after everything that's happened to him, he can't handle confrontation. And Simone comes through for the win! What will Gordon do?
Author's Response: ah, yah...plus, he's more thinking what's to explain? it's not really a misunderstanding, only the context is unknown...i guess. (it's been a while since i read it myself) plus, he's a fragile baby~ yup, simone is pretty awesome. i didn't wanna ruin her winning sreak in anyone's eyes. cept maybe Gordon's...
Date: 09/03/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter 33
I like the character development of Simone here. It would take a special mother to not come down hard on them but instead think things through of what might be best for her child and then want to help them.
Author's Response: i like to think she's pretty special, too. she married a good guy and raised Tom really well, in my opinion, so she seems to have made a lot of good choices. I'm glad you like it, some people seem to want it all to be over the top drama, but...idk, i couldnt do that to Bill again. not fully, at least. he needs an ally :)
Date: 09/03/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 32
This was really a nice look at things from Simone’s perspective. She researched, thought about it and reacted, but rationally and like an adult. She seems like she's really thinking things through without over-reacting either way.
You said in your one e-mail that you think your writing has grown, and I agree! There is definitely a big change in this from the beginning chapters, and I think it's a great change! ^__^ Your good writing is getting better and better, I think. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: yah, it's probably because i'm so used to the idea by now, but it seems a little silly for people to go crazy about something like this if they know the facts so I just had her do a little discovering so that she could get a clearer picture on the matter.
awh, thanks so much...i've been blocking this story out of my mind cuz i was uninspired and unimpressed by it so thinking about this story depressed me lol. the compliment means a lot, since Alien was SOOOO good. yah, i think i've improved, only problem is that my inspiration level went down for this one and my pre-planned plot mostly ran out so the last few chapters (in the 40's) are pretty....fillerific. idk if they even go with the flow anymore xP. i need to skim this entire thing over again to get the feel of it back before i can do it any justice, I think. but your reviews have inspired me to finish it off right so i'll do my best once the big bang has blown over...thanksss :)
Date: 09/03/11 12:25 am Title: Chapter 19
I absolutely loved the Bill and Gordon bonding! And poor Gordon was an orphan too. Can't wait to see where you take this! ^__^
Author's Response: woooo bonding...yup, he was. he's a good guy. he'd have to be to land simone, right?
Date: 09/03/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 17
Bill is flowering! ^__^ And poor Simone, now with her doubts.
Author's Response: yay for bill....simone's got a rocky bit ahead, lol...theyre a little overexcited by eachother
Date: 09/03/11 12:10 am Title: Chapter 15
Uh-oh. :o This is going to be interesting.
Author's Response: :S
Date: 09/02/11 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
So great to see them so happy and adjusting. You’re gonna break my heart again later, aren’t you? ;)
Once Tom could breathe again, he sighed, “Erm, well, yah,” he started, and at Bill’s expression of horror, added, “They’d find out sooner or later, and you guys are like brothers to me…oh, you know what I mean, Georg!” he spat when Georg lifted an eyebrow at the analogy. Bill buried his face in the side of Tom’s leg in shame. “We couldn’t help it, we were already messing around when we found out we were twins…were already in too deep—oh, shut the fuck up, Gustav, it’s a fucking figure of speech,” he retorted at Gustav’s pointed cough. “We already loved each other,” he continued, putting a hand on Bill’s head.
This whole exchange was really hilarious! X) It cracked me up! ^__^
Author's Response: hahah, thankssss xD yah....some stuff happened after, lol.
Date: 09/02/11 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
This chapter broke my heart, and then the big reveal made me hopeful again! Please let this work out for Bill! And Simone is a *dear.* I love her!
Author's Response: simone....i'm a fan. based on her pictures and the situation i've created i figure she seems like a sweet woman, and bill deserved a little perfection after the other situation
Date: 09/02/11 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
They’re having the same dreams, right? Hm, what could this mean? ;) I love all the interactions between Gustav and Georg. Too funny! And then you turned around and *ripped* out my heart with Bill’s break-down at Tom’s house. Oh, baby...I just wanna give Bill a hug.
Author's Response: oh yes...i wonder? lol. thanks! i like the G's, they're like...a peanut gallery with perks :) sorry about ur heart...lol
Date: 09/02/11 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
I’ve finally time to read this, and it’s really heartbreaking already! But, I agree with you that teenage infatuation/obsession moves fast like that, especially when one is starved for love and attention, like you said. Poor Bill. I hope things get better soon.
Author's Response: oh no!!! dont read it xD its not good enough for youuu :x
Date: 06/30/11 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 44
Lol, I would personally find it real entertaining if Emily -- that my name, ohmygosh -- did develop a cute crush on Bill ;P
Author's Response: so uncheerleader-y right? hahah, cute. :)