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Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/10 07:49 am Title: Chapter 5

awesome can't wait for next bit, i was so glad Bill told his secrets

Author's Response: yayyy ^_^ it wont be long

Reviewer: LadyAya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love this story...it's my newest drug!! OH NO, sick brain...I've been there! *hands chicken noodle soup and gives best attempt at a Bill-pouty-face* can we have just one moe update?? Please? :)

Author's Response: yayyyy I am addictive!! thanks for the soup. I will give annother update soon...but I really can't trust myself right now XP plus, the next part is so long that it will have to be in 2 extra long chapters...:P don't worry, soon~

Reviewer: Prepsi16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 4

i love it! i hope you update soon. i am quite enjoying watching this relationship unfold. especially when i am not writing it myself. i think you are a very good writer, and your illness doesn't seem to alter that. :) i do hope you feel better soon though. Ciao darling! -Molly ; )

Author's Response: thank you! yah, i feel a bit better, the fire in my throat is gone only to be replaced with a dull-fuzzyness. better tho, and i cant taste right...and i want honey on everything XD

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

i love it~ and i love you for writing it~~~

Author's Response: WOW!! thank you so much! I'm floored

Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

hope you get better soon. so nervous/excited for Bill can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: thank you, i think you won't be dissappointed...;)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yeah-I realized that was a dumb question after I hit submit ^_^ Each chapter make's me love this story more~

Author's Response: yay thank you! and it wasnt a dumb question, it seems a little rude of everyone to not have noticed...haha

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

I very much look forward to tom and bill's get together. keep up the good work, feel better!

Author's Response: thank you so much, I am going to rest as much as possible and hopefully I will get better in time to not screw up the next chapter XD

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

Um...Tom taking care of his "problem" was so HAWT!!!!!!! Looking forward to the firework's once these two do get together! Anxious to see what happen's at Tom's when Bill stay's over.
Nancy- hate her for knowing what's going on and doing nothing! I'm really surprised no one else at school has never noticed anything wrong with Bill!
Thank's for the update!!

Author's Response: yes *blush* i feel a little bit awkward writing sexual stuff, but i know how much we all like it so I have to bite the bullet and try to make it sexy XD. well....people like Nancy have their reasons, it never is right, but i can see why they can let things like this go on. Nobody else noticed anything strange because nobody else took an interest. they figure "emo" and nothing deeper...thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

Cant wait for the next chapter
I love this story

Author's Response: yayy thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

thanks, its alright. how often are you planing to update this? i truly fell in love with it already~

Author's Response: oh my, thank you so much!!! ummmmm, I am going to try to update about every day, can't be sure this coming week though, because I am sick right now and I have a couple of quizzes and a test I am no where near ready for.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

i love it! jorg should have a heart attack or a car crash and die! maybe he could get put in jail or... how old are the twins in this story? update often, please?

Author's Response: haha don't worry, jorg will get what's coming to him. they are barely 17...oops I guess that helps people to visualize, but I have it come up soon so...*blush* sorry

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2

Omg are they twins seperaed at birth maybe?? I like this Tom more than others, he isn't in some angry denial about being into Bill. I think it's great how your writing this. :) your style is really good and ur conventions are wonderful. Everything is perfect. =^.^=

Author's Response: omg *blush* thank you so much! XD that makes me feel good, which is nice because I am sick T-T

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm in love with this. ^_^

Author's Response: XDDDDDDDDDDDD wow!

Reviewer: daphne_always Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 08:28 am Title: Chapter 3

i'm liking this))) more))))))

Author's Response: your wish is my command :) *though I wish they would let me become validated soon, having to wait 3 hrs for an update to go through is a little rough*

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 05:44 am Title: Chapter 3

i do think it seems a little too soon, at least for the L-word, but if you have a plan, i shall not complain. another good chapter. =)

Author's Response: thank you. and the "L word" was just in the dream, and dreams can be quite detached from reality. in this situation the dream is wayyy ahead of them, lol, like I have had dreams having wonderful 'conversations' with people I never had the nerve to speak to in real life....he he. though of course this dream is supposed to be more symbolic...ahh I think i made it worse! forgive me, I'm sick so my brain isnt working right hehe (though some ppl seem to fall in love fast, my roommate fell in love with her girlfriend over a weekend...but I'm not sure how serious it was, tho they have been together a few months now...lol) forgive my babbling

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 3

I think the story is progressing perfectly-I like how Tom has taken to Bill so fast, and maybe Bill see's a friend and a lifeline in Tom...that's just my opinion anyway. Thank you for alway's updating quickly!

Author's Response: Oh goodie, that makes me feel good, thanks!! cookie for you for replying to my end-note XD

Author's Response: Oh goodie, that makes me feel good, thanks!! cookie for you for replying to my end-note XD

Reviewer: perez Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved...the way you describe everything is perfect.
im very happy that your updates are really fast :D

Author's Response: yayy thank you.:)

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

GREAT JOB! I'm really enjoying this so far. Keep it up! :)

Author's Response: ooooooh caps! Thank you!!!! I will try~

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

I cant wait till the next chapter

Author's Response: XD yayyy, but I can't get ahead of myself here...gotta wait at least a day or it'll be gone too fast, yes? plus I don't know how to finish it yet so I need to figure that out before I get there or bad things will happen XP

Reviewer: reireixgrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

awwww i'm wondering if they're twins? :D

Author's Response: interesting thought ;)

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