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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 14

catching up-Gustav just had to plant the seed of doubt-but I don't think Bill is going to listen. I'm so happy that Simone suspect's nothing at this point. Poor Bill-will he ever be truely free from his demon-his evil foster dad? Off to the next chapter..

Author's Response: I think he will, but there hasnt been real closure yet, so...yah, he'll be okay. thanks for reading so attentively XD

Reviewer: dusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oooh, that's not too good for the twins, I guess, even if Simone doesn't want to think about it happening. This will only make her more suspicious of their closeness and she would be entirely right. Fantastically insightful chapter, honey! I just love how realistical it all reads.

Author's Response: oh wow! thank you so much!!! I was hoping it didnt seem too strange XO, I just love you! yah, planting that seed in simone was not a very good thing

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

hehe
love you too
That chapter was good

Author's Response: thank youuu :)

Reviewer: tokiohotelds2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 14

oh my god. i screeched and covered my eyes when i read simone was there and then i looked and saw she didn't see anything and i sighed and said " oh my god, thank goodness " lmao did i say I LOVE THIS!!! ... yes??? well here it is again I LOVE THIS!!!

Author's Response: did I say thank you? well here it is again, THANK YOU!!! XP

Reviewer: tokiohotelds2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 13

I LOVE THIS I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lOL AND billa is just the cutest thing ever!!!

Author's Response: thanksssssss :3

Reviewer: tokiohotelds2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

ohhhhhh i wuhv wuhv wuhv it your stories are the highlight of my day!!!!

Author's Response: WOW thanks!! XDDDD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 14

awwww plz more :)

Author's Response: very soon :3

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMFG this story is amazing i love that they found each other and that the G's r ok with them being together together :) when sim and gord find out i hope they r ok with it as well

Author's Response: thank you!! i'm glad you like it XD

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 14

awwwwwwwww~ poor boys.. well at least they dont have to hide it from the G's anymore~

Author's Response: ahaha as if they ever really were, lol. jk. yahhh, it'll be fine. thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: LadyAya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 14

You've killed the dreams. You raped them with -well- RAPE! No baked goods for you. Ok, no, just kidding, so how about blueberry muffins? Anyway, is this like foreshadowing like the dreams have been? GAH I have sooo many questions..I need a new update! Can you update tomorrow because its short? If not thats ok too! Awesome job per usual!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! blueberry muffins are nice :3 no it isnt foreshadowing, it's just a shared nightmare. they can't only share good dreams :) and the others werent so much foreshadowing as an expression of desire...they were more of a cause than an effect. unfortunately i cant update tomorrow, I am having a bit of a rough patch in the creative process, so i need to regulate what i have...I dont want to get to the end of my ideas before I can think of more~ thanks so much for the review!!!!!

Reviewer: Momiji_Jones Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 14

ohh cnt wait 4 da rest :)

Author's Response: yayy!!thank you

Reviewer: dusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh, thank God Simone missed that last part. *whew* I think it might take her or Gordon a little more to see what's happening between the twins. They see it as if the twins need to reconnect or as Tom trying to protect/comfort Bill so far, which makes perfect sense. The G's are different because they have been seeing it grow since the beginning, it was kinda obvious they had to be the first to notice the change.

Fantastic update! I loved the chapter!



Author's Response: thank you!! wow you always make me feel amazing! ahaha. yah, simone sees their connection as a wonderful thing. something necessary, plus she hasnt seen much of it. Bill hasn't really spent much time with either of the parents yet, which will change soon, so they arent really in sync with him yet~ thanks again!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 14

that was good
cant wait till the next chapter

Author's Response: yayy danke!

Reviewer: LadyAya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/10 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

The adoption thing, we'll just call it creative liberties! :) The 'deed' was smokin'! i think my favorite part was the ending...warm and fuzzy. So for you... *whips napkin of plate* SNICKERDOODLES!

and YAY for the dream! I know I've been bugging you about them...and well I really can't say I'm sorry about it because it was super hot! ;)

Author's Response: hahah, I'm glad you liked it! and YAY COOKIES XD lurve snickerdoodlies.

Yes, and there may be another dream on the way, but maybe not what you'd expect...;)

Reviewer: Prepsi16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/10 07:35 am Title: Chapter 13

you are doing a wonderful job. besides, this is mostly a love story not a formal adoption story. keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!! XD

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/10 01:11 am Title: Chapter 13

okay, that was sexy, steamy, and fluffier than bunnies stuck in a cotton candy machine... i fucking loved it~

Author's Response: XD yayy! omg that was a really exciting review! thanks

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/10 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 13

What an awesome chapter-loved it!
Thing's seem to be going so smoothly, now if it will only last, got a feeling it won't.
Anxiously waiting for next update.

Author's Response: Thank you! now don't be too cynical, haha, but every road has its bumps.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 13

::)) aww more

Author's Response: Friday! <3

Reviewer: salark Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

Cute chapter :) Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: XD thank you muchnesss! more on friday~

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 13

that was great

Author's Response: yayy!!! my first sex scene ever!

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