Date: 03/07/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 19
Love the father-son bonding time.
The G's are awesome with how thing's are with Bill.
The twin's together-holyhottness!
This chapter was sweet and sexy-thank's!
Author's Response: you're welcome XD yayyyy
Date: 03/07/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 20
cant wait for the next chapter
hugs
Author's Response: thank youu ^.^
Date: 03/07/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 20
I really liked that nurse, wish the psychologist would've been as keen to twins as she was. It would've made things easier for the boys, although that wouldn't be half as angsty, hee. Loved Tom's reaction to how Bill looked, it must have been quite a sight! Absolutely adored how tender he is with Bill and how he helped him through his fear of needles (ugh, needles *shudders*). And I'm so happy Simone seems a bit less suspicious for now. I'll be looking forward to more on Tuesday!
Author's Response: thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes, ughhhhh needles XP. Simone is working with what she's got...lol, and I'm off to work on Tuesday's chapter!
Date: 03/07/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 19
I don't think you can really waste time on details. I do it too in the fandom I write in, I spend way too much time researching sometimes, but I believe that's what makes a story stand up from others. Going that extra mile if you will.
I'm not sure how I missed this chapter, but the good thing is that now I have two chapters to read/review in between corrections to my thesis. ;)
Loved the G's once again, they're so wonderful with Bill and just what he needs right now. LOVED the twins playful, scorching hot time together and of course, the fact that Bill bonded so well with Gordon and learning more of him and his background was simply awesome. Loving this story sooooo much!
Author's Response: XD thank you so much, good luck with your thesis!!!! and yah, i do enjoy my details, it just found it a bit funny that I was making a timeline in Economics :)
Date: 03/07/10 11:02 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh my godness I am fully devoted to this story Iove it eepz !!!!!! And I'm sure I got a chick boner reading this sexy sexy ficccc I love it keep up the great awesommeeeneeesss work :) :*)
Author's Response: wow that is so amazing to hear XD (i give myself a chick boner writing smut too!) I will do my best!
Date: 03/07/10 09:03 am Title: Chapter 20
yay............ bill is way to cute! and tom can say it too...
----- "What if I…wore huge, baggy clothes and never, ever brushed my hair? Would you still love me then?” he said with a grin.
“That’d be even better,”----- omg..... i died of laughing here! is so funny! thanks....
Author's Response: ;) hehe thank you!
Date: 03/07/10 07:36 am Title: Chapter 20
omg i hate needles.. anytime they need blood or a needle in me i tell them "u have one chance make it work!" i promise they get it right
Author's Response: hahaha yah, they freak me out too. i havent had to give blood, thank god, tho my doctor suggested i do it to make sure nothings wrong with me XD, maybe later....lol.
Date: 03/07/10 06:30 am Title: Chapter 20
OMG I LOVE IT.
Author's Response: OMG THANKS! XD
Date: 03/07/10 05:13 am Title: Chapter 20
"manfully" is a spectacular word!!!! and i am dying for this date and its..."outcome" perhaps smut? :) anyway, Mystery Review Baked Good: Homemade FUDGE, because I love you!!!
Author's Response: yay! manfully is a great word, isnt it :) hmm smut, well it is always fun to write~as long as you dont think it's too much XD. omg i LOVE FUDGE it is like....the mother of all deserts!
Date: 03/07/10 04:59 am Title: Chapter 19
Well all the work you put into it shows and I can only speak for myself but its probably the reason I like this story so much. Work, effort, and dedication! Hope the movie was awesome! This chapter was awesome and that smut was OMNOMNOM times 100!!! I melted inot a pool of reviewer goo!
Author's Response: XD yayy thank you so much, and alice in wonderland was superb!
Date: 03/06/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 18
i don't know why but my earlier comment didn't remained or didn't even posted here!?: anyway i rewrite it: simone is going insane with this two!
Author's Response: hahaha yes, and for good reason
Date: 03/06/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
oh........ what situation bill's in!
ohh... but tom is there. God they are really in love! i read the chapters before and i'm sorry i didn't comment[busy, time is killing me] and they're pure lovely! Bill is... idk, tom dies after him! i'd die too! ^^
Author's Response: ooh thank you, im so glad you like it XD i would die as well haha
Date: 03/05/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
im seeing it tomorrow! Lol after the New moon midnight premiere my mother was all like hellz no!! because i went to the 1:15 showing and i got home around 3;45 and went to bed at 4:30 and woke up at 5:30.... so i was SOO FRIGGI tired, i Hit a kid in the head with a water bottle for saying "hi" to loudly and i slept through my entore 3rd and 4th hour classes lmao so my mother was like "alice in wonderland midnight showing my ass." Haha
Author's Response: aah the beauties of college :] *but actually, my dad met us there to see it...my parents are chill haha*
Date: 03/05/10 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
OHHHHHHHHH god whenever i read that simone is suspicious about the boys or is about to catch them i have the BIGGEST spazzy attack lmao
Author's Response: hahaha yay
Date: 03/05/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
aw, simone and gordon are just the sweetest parents in the world! I hope they won't flip when they find out about bill/tom though.. lol! please update soon!
Author's Response: thanksssssssss!!! XD
Date: 03/05/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
Awesome
and thanks
Hugs
Cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: thankkkk youuu <3
Date: 03/05/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 19
ahhh....... lovely...... father and son time!
not to forget the brother-lover time at the beginning ... just like tom said : he missed the brother brother time! ^^ a lot
Author's Response: XD yes, there must be balance....tho sex is always good :D
Date: 03/05/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 19
i loved the eager sex~ it was perfect! i just back from percy jackson... again... i like it but dont love it. love this story babe~
Author's Response: haha yayyy thnxxxx, alice was amazing tho ^.^
Date: 03/05/10 03:55 am Title: Chapter 19
sorry about the test grade, better luck next time. keep up the great work here!
Author's Response: yahh...but I think I got an A, if not an A+ on my international business test, so that makes me feel better :) I will keep up the great work as well as I can :]
Date: 03/05/10 02:01 am Title: Chapter 19
no no no!i LOV Ethe details!. i love that Bill now has a solid male father figure that he can count on. i hope it stays that way. i can't help but be a bit nervous for him, but i'm sure it's just in my head. keep upi the GREAT work and update soon!
Author's Response: thank youuuuu~ :3