Date: 05/27/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 28
mommy time, thats so cute. congrats on the As. =)
Author's Response: thank youuu!
Date: 05/16/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 27
OMG I just finished reading this and was in so much shock as to what poor Bill had to go through. But glad that Jorg finally got what he deserved. Well done hope to see more.
Author's Response: thank you so much! you definitely will see more, if you stick around xD
Date: 05/16/10 05:37 am Title: Chapter 27
first off, i fucking loved everything about this chapter. secondly, i prefer ground as a past tense to grind. last but not least, i love you sugar!
Author's Response: haha thanks so much! love u too :)
Date: 05/14/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 27
and i am the friend maria addicted! and i am! seriously! this is so good! i totally love it! when i started to read this i cried several times, and i sat up whole night, i just could't get myself stop reading! tou are really good, and thank you for writing this! :D(sorry for bad english, i am a little tierd now.. but hopefylly you'll understand)
Author's Response: thank you for reading! i am so glad that you like it so much :) and i totally understand you, haha
Date: 05/14/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 27
absolutely fantastic. that is all i can say.
Author's Response: and that is enough! thank you so much :)
Date: 05/14/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 27
-nods- tis a word :D also OH SO YUMMI SEX -fans self- ya know, i love this story. its like cupcakes with icing... just amazingly sinfully awesome :D
Author's Response: well, jee! thanks so much xD 'sinfully awesome'!! thats a great compliment! haha
Date: 05/14/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 27
Nope 'grinded' isn't a word. Many on-line dictionaries and translators are soooo far off. The past tense of grind is 'ground' which oddly enough is the same word you would use for the floor. Great job on the story tho. Is this the end? If you don't mind me saying, this is actually a really good place to end it. The reader is at a point where they can picture the rest themselves. You did good.
Author's Response: ah, thank you. um, no it isnt the end...theres a bit more drama ahead, not all happy stuff. but...lol, if you want to stop you can?
Date: 05/14/10 08:34 am Title: Chapter 27
Your soooooo amazing o.o
make more and good luck with school 8D
Author's Response: thank you!!! I will make more :) and thanks for the luck
Date: 05/14/10 07:35 am Title: Chapter 27
YEY UPDATE! -does happydance- AND YEY THEY WON! -does another happydance-
This is turning out so beautifully -content sigh- Love it, love it, love it. And I was the 300th reviewer, that's awwwesome: 3 And about the summary thingy, I actually agree with you, you should spice it up. This fic deserves a whole lot more readers. I kind of just started to read it because I had nothing else to do, and then I was like : WOW, this is so good! And then I asked one of my friends who also reads fanfiction if she had read it, and she was like, no? But I told her about how awesome it is, and now she's practically addicted! Seriously, it's not possible to not like it if you first have started reading it. You're and awesome writer, keep up the good work:' )
Author's Response: thank you so much! hmm, now the only problem is, how to spice it up? haha. contact me if you have any ideas...:) thank you for addicting your friend xD
Date: 05/13/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 27
Normally its ground, but maybe I'm wrong. Thanks for that amazing smut...it was...WOW!! and the end of the court shenanigans...YAY! The car touching was... (i'm running out of three letter words that express my internal joy!)...OMG! I hope the story isn't over yet....I would be so lost!
Author's Response: thank you! you're so welcome, yah the smut...it was really hard for me to get into it, but once i did it seemed to form itself quite nicely if i do say so myself :) don't worry, its definitely not over yet, i still have a few events planned...;) a little more drama is inevitable at this point
Date: 05/13/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter!
and I love the banner, i dont think its the banner that turns people off, I think people just dont like rape
Author's Response: well thank you :) hmm, well rape in itself is horrible, yes, but I at least really like stories when someone abused is found and helped :)
Date: 05/13/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 27
Hi!
Justice was made... well at least the one that can be done, obviously it doesn't heal or erase the crime, but helps the victim to move on.
I definetely love the after-trial celebration! OMG they were so teasing all day long, that the final reward should be felt twice as good.
Justice was made!!! Yes I'm happy about it. Good luck with your finals.
Receive the best vibrations and a big hug.
Bye
Author's Response: thank you! yess, as much justice as possible was served :) oh yes, the final reward was more than twice as good xD
Date: 05/13/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 27
The past tense of grind is ground.
Author's Response: thanks thats what i thought but...oh well, i reworked it to use neither anyway :) thank you!
Date: 05/13/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 27
*squeal* I've been waiting for this chapter all month!!! I love it!!!
ps: I'm wondering about grinded to. I can't figure out if it's grinded or ground and it drives me nuts cause I put a lot of grinding in my stories...
Author's Response: i know, right?? neither sound right!
Date: 05/13/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 27
Damn girl, that was so HOT! Guh! *fans self* You've turned my brain to mush, so my review might not be all that coherent or long, but I loved the last scene, I adored the urgency of their need. I loved that Jorg got convicted, that Bill and Tom have such good friends in the G's, the stolen kisses in the car and the teasing touches in the restaurant. It was an awesome chapter! Good luck with your exams!
And yes, grinded is a word, although I prefer to use ground, instead.
Author's Response: haha thank you so much xD im glad i was able to turn your brain into mush :] thanks again for the help. thanks for always reviewing so thoroughly, even when your brain has been mushed xP
Date: 05/03/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 26
EEEEEEK! I THOUGHT THEY WERE GUNNA GET CAUGHT! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha i actually didnt realize how suspenseful that part would be when I wrote it xD
Date: 05/02/10 08:53 am Title: Chapter 26
OK so as long as they weren't caught in the bathroom...I was having a panic attack that everything would go wrong. I held my breath so long it was ridiculous! I thought that was a fantastic chapter but too many cliffies and not enough Bill/Tom elation sex...that is a MUST. Great job, hun. good luck with finals and everything.
Author's Response: hahaha im sorry that you worried, but they might have been if it werent for having such responsible friends :) it must have frightened you when gusti opened the door then...aaw. yes yes, well this section is proving SO LONG that i have to stop it somewhere. yes, i know elation sex is necessary! specially after the half-week of celibacy! ahah
Date: 05/02/10 07:50 am Title: Chapter 26
Aww, Bill and Tom are so cute! I love your characters, they are so.. perfect. This story is beautiful:')
Author's Response: *love love* thankssss
Date: 05/02/10 07:29 am Title: Chapter 26
YOU TOTTALY ROCK, I MEAN IT YOUR LIKE BRILLIANT
make more
Author's Response: I will x] thankkssss
Date: 05/02/10 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1
great first chapter...its very well written and i will read the rest of the story when i have time xo
Author's Response: thanks so much!