Date: 12/20/10 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Underage stuff squirks me a lot. I never thought of myself as a sick old woman until I started to read twc and under-age-erotica. I guess I am a sick old woman because I absolutely loved this story. The love they show for each other is so special. I loved this. Danke.
Author's Response: You know, it's kind of become a squick of mine, too. But I'm happy that you could enjoy it, anyway. Thank YOU. <333
Date: 02/06/10 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Not only super sweet, but super realistic. ♥ You're so versatile! I just adored this.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! ♥
Date: 02/05/10 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked the beginning the best, I could picture the whole thing and it made me laugh, plus Simone was so funny.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I liked the beginning the best, too. =) Simone, in this story, reminds me a lot of my own mom. Always worrying about something or another. ♥
Date: 02/03/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was cute. I read it while I had my lunch break at work and it made me all fluffy inside, hehe. Oh, on my iPod touch btw- not some big ol' computer screen where anyone could see me reading underage incest, lmao.
Anyways, it was such an "awwwww" moment when Bill couldn't take it, but they'll try again later, so YAY! lol.
Kinda funny that their mom didn't want them getting into trouble while home alone yet there they are having sex w eachother. I just love that.
Good fluffy smut, Thanks. :)
Author's Response: lol I would never be able to read it on a big ol' computer screen. I'm always afraid of people looking over my shoulder and seeing what I'm doing. haha But I'm really glad you liked it! A little ironic that the trouble they get into isn't quite the trouble she had in mind, huh? Thank you so much for your review. <3
Date: 02/02/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Underage squicks you now? *looks pointedly at diamondicecream*
I adored this. I really did. I didn't expect it to be set at age 15 but it does make sense why it would be. And omg, you really wrote great nervous twins. AND you wrote a failed first attempt. I LOVE that. Much more realistic than fireworks and fountains of jizz on the first time. Just a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it! :D
Author's Response: lol It does, it does. She says it's not her fault, but I disagree. lol I'm glad you enjoyed the failed attempt. I've never even thought of attempting it, so I was really...uh, nervous. lol And LMFAO @ the mental image of fountains of jizz. *walks away snickering* ♥ ♥
Date: 02/02/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_7! Lemme tell ya what I hate, first and foremost. I hate when I- TSOA- Am trying to leave O_7 a review, and it doesn't go thru, and I am left with "Internet Explorer Cannot Display the Page" warning. DAMNIT! So, Imma try to remember what I originally wrote. It went something like this:
O_7! I loved it! It was one, big, fluffy ball of gooeyness, with a hint of smutty-ness! Totes!
*huggles the O_7!*
Author's Response: That does suck. You aren't the only one that seems to have problems with reviews. =( But thank you so much for your enthusiasm. It always makes me smile. =)
Date: 02/02/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww,that was cute!and i liked the fact that they didn't go all the way after all
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/02/10 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww XD It was so cute and fluffy. What Bill wants, Bill gets. So Tom, you know you can't escape him *snickers*
Author's Response: lol That's a lesson Tom is going to have to learn the hard way. haha Thank you for your review! <3
Date: 02/02/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was such a sweet "first time" fic! The twins were so adoring of each other, and I loved how protective and doting Tom was. Such a lovely story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm a little rough around the edges with first time fic, so I'm glad you liked it. <3