Date: 04/18/10 08:12 am Title: Fails To
Is it wrong that I laughed at Tom the whole way through that? XD
Date: 04/18/10 07:29 am Title: Fails To
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck. -.-
gaaaaah. I cant handle it. they gotta have sex soon or im gonna die... XDDD
Date: 04/18/10 07:18 am Title: Fails To
if i was tom i would've murdered someone xD
Date: 04/18/10 04:05 am Title: Fails To
XDDDD Seriously, MY shitty day was nothing compared to Tom's. Poor Tomi just wanted to have s- CUDDLE- mit his Bill but oh no, the world was against him XD I hope it goes better next time :D
Date: 04/18/10 01:44 am Title: Fails To
Oh, poor Tom, the boy cannot win! Except that he still has his Bill, so it's kind of like winning and losing at the same time. =3 I loved this chapter, despite Tom's great suffering. ;)
Date: 04/17/10 11:18 pm Title: Fails To
Yay ! New chapter :) I love how Tom is very direct, it’s funny ! Haha poor Tom just wanna have sex but the whole world is against him!
Date: 04/17/10 10:57 pm Title: Fails To
aww noooo! D: i hate it when it seems like everything bad is happening just b/c you really need it not to, if that makes any sense at all. and i think that this would qualify as one of the worst days ever for tom :P
Date: 04/17/10 10:55 pm Title: Fails To
awww poor both of them haha :) but plz more
Date: 04/17/10 10:38 pm Title: Fails To
Oh my god, I was rolling reading this! Poor Tom and his series of unfortunate events just tryng to get laid. I hope the poor guy gets some soon! xD
Date: 04/13/10 04:01 pm Title: With Jealousy
oh, Tom. Who do you think you're kidding? You are a pussy
Date: 04/13/10 03:57 pm Title: Stepping Out
i'm a nitpicker and it's annoying, I know, but Jon's without an "h".
Other than this little unnecesary comment that you could have lived without I liked the chapter a lot :)
Date: 04/10/10 10:52 pm Title: With Jealousy
Oh my goodness. This is something totally different from you, isn't it? Well, I absolutely love it Soph, so much. It's interestingly written in a way I'm not used to, where I feel like I'm stuck in between being a fly on the wall and not there at all, as though I'm a stranger just passing through their lives. It's really neat and totally unique.
I absolutely adore the way you have written Tom with all of his quirks and obsession with coasters and cleanliness and the origami. It seems so very just... Tom, and it's adorable.
I really look forward to seeing their relationship progress further. :)
Date: 04/05/10 06:39 pm Title: With Jealousy
aww :)
I really like the last line for some odd reason. I think it's the addition of the stars. :D
xx
Date: 04/05/10 03:37 pm Title: With Jealousy
aww :) more pretty plz
Date: 04/05/10 03:34 pm Title: With Jealousy
I'm really loving Tom's character.
I laughed out loud when I read Gustav's "what's wrong emo kid?" haha.I can totally imagine the real gustav actually saying thinfs like that.The end of the chapter is very promising :) I don't know why, but I have the feeling we'll get more awkward moments in the next chapter, not some hot steamy sex(my hopes are up though, because in the end, they'll end up doing something niiice, even if it's not hot steamy sex, not that I'd care much, as long as they're in each other's arms). That sound even more awesome.
Date: 04/05/10 02:37 pm Title: With Jealousy
awww Every chapter of this story are amazing... I really like you writing structure, can't wait to read more !
Date: 04/05/10 12:53 pm Title: With Jealousy
XD this is so cute! update more soon!
Date: 04/05/10 10:34 am Title: With Jealousy
Ah, so it was Anis. haha... oh Tom! I'm kinda loving that Bill says, "Take me to bed." Does that mean...? Even if it doesn't, that's so cute. I'm glad they got it resolved. Can't wait for the next update :D
Date: 04/05/10 08:52 am Title: With Jealousy
This is so gorgeous; simple, but really effective. You should be getting more reviews for the recent chapters. Can't believe I only just started it. *_*
Date: 04/05/10 07:03 am Title: With Jealousy
Awwww! Jealous Tom is kinda cute!
And bring the stars? *wink wink*