Date: 03/22/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Friday Night
Noooooooooooooooooo >.<
He can't.... UGH!
He can't just do this to Bill!!!
He can't love Nathalie! No. I won't stand for it.
*sits down*
There. I've proved my point.
*blinks*
...I think.
Author's Response: Don't worry, he doesn't love Nathalie. I promise it has a happy ending <33
Date: 03/22/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Friday Night
hmmmm don't like that Tom has a 'thing' with Nat
i only want him for Bill,i'm selfish i know
that's the main point of the story i guess
thanks 4 the early update, i want more
Author's Response: Yeah don't worry about that. He's all for Bill <33
Date: 03/22/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Friday Night
Aaaaaaawh. Tom, poor thing.
But at least Bill's there for him.
I'm so excited, when will the Tom/Bill stuff come in? Or am I currently waiting for the floodgates to overflow? :D
Author's Response: Soon, I hope :]
Author's Response: Soon, I hope :]
Date: 03/22/10 02:01 am Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
awwww sweet! im falling in love with this story~
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it <33
Date: 03/21/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
:) darling more plz
Author's Response: Tomorrow, I promise <33
Date: 03/21/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
Hey! Waiting impatiently for the next chapter :) I liked this one, the friendship between Bill and Andy is really well written, plus the bit where Andy hugged him made me smile :D Gonna go check out the preview of chapter fourteen now! Keep it up :D
Author's Response: I love Andy, he's such a fun character to play around with. He does care for Bill as a best friend. Thank you for such a great review!
Date: 03/21/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
okay so i loved the quick update!:) must people take weeks even MONTHS! to update! so yea...
hm...i wonder whats gonna happen next?!?!? :)
Author's Response: Well be even happier, chapter 14 will be up tomorrow. Gosh, I write a lot when I have no homework. I do hope you like the next chapter ^.^ Thanks for such a kind review!
Date: 03/21/10 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1 - Poke Poke.
another review from mee.. well i do kinda owe you 13 XD but i rather read alot of chapter in one than read like the first chapter and have to wait like a month before you get to the plot line XD but ive been away for quite a long time due to friend problems =/ so i was happy when i found this story... its realllllyyyy goood :D
Author's Response: I get what you mean, yeah sometimes you start traking a story after one chapter...then you really don't like it. I'm glad you like my story so much <33
Date: 03/21/10 02:48 am Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
can't wait for the real action
i want angst,drama,passion *grins*
i can't wait for Tom's reaction when he'll find out about Bill's not so brotherly feelings for him
shame on Tom for not telling Bill the truth
more
Author's Response: Oh yes, it's about to get a lot more exciting!
Date: 03/20/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
i just started reading these, and im sorry i havent reviewed them all but ive been eager to read the rest... i LOVE this story so much!! i was sad when there wasnt another chapter i was like NOOOOOOOO MOREEEE but take your time =] i dont want you to feel you have to rush this story its perfect though i love it =DDD
Author's Response: Your read all 13 Chapters in one go? Wow! I was worried people would be put of by how much there was to read before catching up. But you've seem to have done it ^.^
Date: 03/20/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
Finally got to catch up! I really like this progression...things are moving quickly enough to keep things entertaining but not so quick that it's unrealistic. I'm so loving this!
Author's Response: I often worry its too slow or too boring. But reviews like yours make me feel more confident about my writing. Thank you so much <33
Date: 03/20/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
Aaah, Tom let a good chance to get rid of Melisa pass him by and more lies? Never a good thing. I have a feeling Bill will need Andy's friendship more than ever when it all blows up. *sighs* Loving this, even with the impending feeling of doom and gloom on the horizon. And yay for your essay on Hamlet! Congrats! *rushes to read the sneak peek*
Author's Response: I'll just have to make her leave in another way, trust me, she will leave. Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy the preview! <33
Author's Response: I'll just have to make her leave in another way, trust me, she will leave. Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy the preview! <33
Date: 03/20/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Phone Calls
Tom, you liar.
But at least Bill's diagnosis will be soon. *looks hopeful* :D
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: He's a big lair, shame that Bill always believes him. Yup, that chapter will be soon. But there's still drama to come before hand!
Date: 03/20/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Poke Poke.
I'm on a devil mood today.
towards Tom atleast.
You know what would be fun? *rub hands*
To make Tom jealous *evil grin*
...
Great job!
Author's Response: We can hate on Tom together, but I still love him <33 Yeah, I keep thinking that Bill should make him jealous. But that's been written how many times? It's just too easy.
Date: 03/18/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :))
its....different! ha and i love it! :)
please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope it's different in a good way ^.^
Date: 03/17/10 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
Yay, quick update! I love the chapter :) Gonna go and read the preview now. :D
Author's Response: Yay, hehe. Thanks so much :]
Date: 03/16/10 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
tension between the twins is building....
Author's Response: Yup, things are going to get interesting!
Date: 03/16/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
awwww poor Bill~ at least Tom doesnt really find the barbie interesting~
Author's Response: Hehe, yep. She'll be leaving soon :D
Date: 03/16/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
Bill is so inncent and has no clue what Tom has done. Can it be keep secret a little longer? And I guess if Bill finds out Tom tells Bill he was worried for him and wanted to make sure he was ok like he used to when the were little. I'm just saying and whatever I just said barely made sense. But I really love the way the story headed right now. More please! :)
Author's Response: It made sense to me, don't worry ;] I'm glad your enjoying this story, it means the world to me that people want to read more!
Date: 03/16/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
awwww, poor Bill~ sok tho, as least things will make more sense soon! love you babe~
Author's Response: Yes yes, everything will fall into place soon. Thanks so much <33