I tottaly love this, my number1 fav story at the moment ;) keep up the good work :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review is golden, it makes me smile when you say it's your number 1 story at the moment <33

Aww this was kinda sad! I can't believe Bill is so calm about all of it. And definetely I can not believe that Tom has the nerve of not even calling his mother to know his twin is ok.

BArbie's coming back? will Tom be able to keep up the facade that everything is fine?

We'll see. See you next chapter!

Hugs!

Author's Response: Tom is so mean in this story, it's so fun to write! Barbie...meh. She'll be back, then gone. *Hugs*

Aww poor Bill.. can't believe he still doesn't realize what's up. o.0
Tom is... in a way, an ass, but it all makes sense for him to act that way. :P

the chapter didn't have much excitement, but it filled in some important stuff. Nice job. :)

Author's Response: Yes, Bill is just so innocent! More excitment next chapter...I hope :]

*Shakes head* Tom, you asshole.
Anyway, I'm 17. I live in Kentucky (yes, like the fried chicken,) and my brother is currently reading over my shoulder going "Who's Tom and why is he an asshole?"
I am in LOVE with this story, and I can't wait for more! Maybe we'll see some brothalove soon? :D

Author's Response: Hehe, very nice :D Thanks for such a great review!

im 27, live in texas, been to japan and all over europe. i thought you were done with het, you said you were some time back. id prefer it if you either made Tom less bitchy and more caring or make things more interesting on Bills side of things. i hate how you make Tom such a douchebag. seriously babe, stop making Tom screw up(its old already and most of your readers would rather not read het)and get this story back on track.

I just read the entire thing up to chapter 16 all in one sitting. The 'het' was a turn off for me, but this actually just wonderful. :D Really, the entire idea. And I was never annoying with boy/girl throughout it. :3

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bout ch. 16:
Tom's a bad boy. He left Bill like that. -.- *tears*

but wonderful job.
and Lucky Charms taste icky. : The marshmallows stick to your teeth and get your mouth all blue&pink. xD It's all incredibly sugary and just blah.

Author's Response: *Applause!* I often feel like people won’t be interested in reading this story now because it would just take so long to catch up, but you’ve proved me wrong! Thanks so much for your kind review. Haha, so would Bill and Tom like Lucky Charms? <33

I know it really freaked me out to thinking I accidentally clicked on the wrong page. Justin Bieber really gets on my nerves even though I've never really heard any of this music. Anyways, I love this story but I hate Tom in this, I seriously do. He makes me so mad hopefully he doesn't do anything stupid like sleep with some skank. Can't wait for more.

Here's a bit about me, I love Tokio Hotel but I live in Canada which is pretty lame cause Tokio Hotel has only been to Canada like once I think and I live no where near Toronto, which is where they played live like 2 or 3 years ago. I am a pro Bill/Tom ship. That is my fave ship. I am 25 years old, I want to move to Australia for fashion plus that is where all my cousins have been moving to, so I want to as well when I have enough money. I used to be obsessed with Twilight but then the movie came out and all the little girls were going insane over it, it just kind of went down hill, but I still like the books. Anyways, my bio on here probably says way more, so if you'd like you can look at that. And again can't wait for another chapter.

Author's Response: Haha, creepy thing is I actually like some of his music. I was like 'Oh shit how did anyone find out?!'. I tell all my friends I hate him ^.^ I promise you he does not sleep with Electra :D Then again, this story changes so much from what I have planned out in my mind. So yeah, maybe I shouldn't promise things! rnrnI'm the same, they played in London in 2007. I hadn't heard of them then, and I live miles away! Oh Twilight, I loved it years ago too. But then like 11 year olds become obsessed with it! I still like the books, but the films are very bad. Good luck with moving to Australia!rn

OMG alison I love you! This is fiction is amazing but poor little billa! Tom is such a whore! Grrtrr
Oouhh guess what I'm 15 and live in England too! ( yes we are in Europe tokio hotel so come pay us a visit sometime) oh and lucky charms taste a bit like golden nuggets cereal with marshmallow in! I think you can get it in cyber candy in covant garden I'll check and get back to you
Much love xXx

Author's Response: Yay other English person ^.^ I know yeah! Why is England not on their European tour?! I almost cried T_T I saw Lucky Charms in Sweet Heaven once, but they were like £12....screw that :D

I love the story. And I love horses and dogs. But I love all animals!

Author's Response: Thank you so much <33 I also loves dogs ;]

AH!! Cliffhanger, lol, I can't wait to find out where they're going. Tom's face-off against the nurse was amazing, although the nurse really creeped me out O.O Gotta read the preview now :) I really love this story, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Yes, Tom had a nice little yelling session with the poor doctor :] Thanks for such an amazing review <33