Date: 04/23/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Slipping Deeper
Poor Bill. I hope Tom and Bill can make up and they'll both be fine.
Author's Response: Hehe, soon soon soon <33
Date: 04/23/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Slipping Deeper
MORE :)
Author's Response: Of course ;]
Date: 04/10/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
Great chapter!! I've been reading this for a while now and I've been procrastinating on the last chapter since I wanted to have time to give you a nice review.
The whole concept of the story, I think, is just amazing. I'm pretty sure Bill really doesn't have Erotomania? well, i really am hoping since the only endings I can imagine in my small head is associated with wrong diagnosis O.o
Aaaanyways, the plot is really great. Very well developed and everything flows nicely. I'm glad division of chapters doesn't hinder the transitions and it makes the different ideas connect with each other to create a great story. (I'm sorry if I'm not making sense)
Bill is just too adorable! He's so caring and understanding about Tom. Like, everything he does himself and he does not really expect Tom to do much except to just be there. I think it's so sweet how he's always sleeping in Tom's bed because he can't sleep on his own. I like how he wakes Tom up in the morning by poking him in the neck XD
Tom on the other hand is kind of annoying me. "Don't push Bill awayyy" ToT; that's my reaction all this time. I'm glad to hear he's finally breaking up with the Barbie doll. ack, just her description makes me want to stick my tongue out at her (I'm not very violent, you see lol) Tom's reaction to the diagnosis, I can quite understand since it's not really normal (except for us twincest fans) to find out that your twin brother is in love with you.. I just wish he'd talk to Bill already! :D Oh, and I'm quite psyched about Tom and Nathalie's friendship/love relationship.
Andreas.. OMG He's just awesome in this story.. I love how he's high and drunk all the time and soo freaking clueless about everything Haha..
All in all, I am looooving this story. I read up to 16 in one sitting and waited until I don't have schoolwork to continue and review it. I'm happy to hear you're from England. We've been talking about England in school for some time and well, it seems really interesting there.. And omg, you're 15 :)) *high five* me too!! but ssshhh it's a little secret ;D haha..
I can't wait for the next update!! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Your making total sense to me, like Bill having the illness isn't the WHOLE story. There are other things involved right? Yeah, I mean you read the fics on here, and twincest is normal. But in the real world, people would just not accept it. Oh yes, Andreas is a very important character. Without him, the story would be much too serious and boring. Thank you so much for such an amazing review, they brighten up my days!
Date: 04/09/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
OMG, I love this!! I feel bad for Bill though and kind of want to rip Tom a new one for lying to his twin, but I'm just glad Bill is slowly realizing that he was lied to. Can't wait for that confrontation.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :] Yes, more will be revealed!
Date: 04/09/10 10:44 am Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
Im glad I brightend up your day!:)
Your so amazing. Really. =D
Oh and btw, This chapter was REALLY good :D
Hope Bill and Tom get together or something like that .. :O
GOOD WORK AGAIN HUN :D
Author's Response: *Smile* You're making me blush ^.^ Thank you so much <33
Date: 04/07/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
u mean girl
u left us here...where it got important
i'm happy that Bill found out the truth,he deserves to know it
can't wait to see them face to face,fighting *grins*
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I have no idea when the next update will be T_T Yes, I can't wait either!
Date: 04/07/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
Oh, Tom your so dead, Bill knows now. Anyways, as always an other great chapter and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Very dead ^.^ Thank you sooo much <33
Date: 04/07/10 08:04 am Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
awwh this is awesome! i need more please! love it :)
Author's Response: Next chapter will be over a week, sorry. I wish I could post it sooner but I'm going on holiday...
Date: 04/07/10 08:04 am Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
:( aww poor billa. plz more and fix this love :)
Author's Response: Hehe, next chapter will take a while.
Date: 04/07/10 07:53 am Title: Chapter 16 - Casino Night
im loving this story, it has to be one of my faves now! and lucky you i was gonna go see flyleaf last week but tickets were sold out! and woot another English person! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it makes me smile like crazy that this story is one of your favourites! Flyleaf was amazing, I booked the tickets in like January, I was that excited! They're doing quite a big UK tour now, I love it!
Date: 04/07/10 07:17 am Title: Chapter 15 - Diagnosis
omg this is sooo good!
Author's Response: Thanks you <33
Date: 04/07/10 06:33 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
oooh this is amazing!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/07/10 06:20 am Title: Chapter 10 - Promises
that was well good! im really loving this story! :)
Author's Response: Yay!
Date: 04/07/10 06:10 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Morning After
wow this is a brilliant story and you're a great writer! :)
Date: 04/07/10 05:58 am Title: Chapter 8 - Surprises
awwwh poor bill! this is good!
Author's Response: I feel bad for Bill in this story T_T
Date: 04/07/10 05:47 am Title: Chapter 7 - Mondays.
this is brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you ^.^
Date: 04/06/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
oh no, andi is telling Bill stuff he shouldve already known! and Tom needs to fall in love with Bill soon or Bill might actually crack...
Author's Response: Yes, it's like a wake up call to poor Bill. Toms working on it ;]
Date: 04/06/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
Hi
It was a nice chapter. Bill's finally coming to realize that something is off. I imagine Bill's gonna go to the hospital. If I'm correct they should give him his own results, right? What will he do when he discovers the true? Will he panic and push himself away from Tom? Or will he man it and start a treatment.
Tom surely will regret his actions, I just can believe that his heart doesn't feel sore for the absence of his brother.
Great chap! I will be waiting for the next.
Kisses!!
Author's Response: Ohhhh good prediction! You'll have to see what happens, but your close...very close. *Smile*
Date: 04/06/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
damn..i wish it was longer lol update soon!!^^
Author's Response: Sort of soon, it's going to take longer than a week. I'm going on holiday T_T
Date: 04/06/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Loosening Lies
*Sputters* Is Tom just going to LEAVE Bill there forever?! ASSHOLE! *Kicks Tom's shins.*
Although, I do think Tom's going into the phase where he's starting to second-guess his feelings for Bill. *Dances*
And if not, I'll just pretend. XD
GREAT JOB! Sorry I didn't review last chapter, btw.
I can't wait for more! :D :D
Author's Response: You're on to me! *Cries* is the story that predictable? Gosh...I'm going to have to re think a few things!