Date: 03/16/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
Very awesome :) I can't wait for the next chapter, wonder how Bill will react when he finds out? I really love this story, it's the first one I check when I sign in every day for new chapters :D The plot is awesome, and the pace of the story is just right. Definite 10/10 from me :)
Author's Response: This review is so kind, probably one of the nicest I've ever received! Thank you so much, it makes me so happy to know you like my story.
Date: 03/16/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
I'm glad Bill will find out why Tom took him there, I'm not too sure how he'll react, though, I guess it all depends on how it's dealt with. I'm truly enjoying this story, loving Bill so much. :) Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I have it all planned out in my head, for a first. Thank you for such a kind review <33
Date: 03/16/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
Yay!!!!!! Great update!!!!!! I loved it, as always!!!!!!!! :D Can't wait for more!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More will be soon <33
Date: 03/16/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
Yay!!!!!! Great update!!!!!! I loved it, as always!!!!!!!! :D Can't wait for more!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 03/16/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
Everywhere I turn, I feel like there is a possible love connection for Tom. And none for Bill. If I hadn't just found chips and salsa, I would be very angry right now.
But seeing as I did,
ZOMG I LOVE THIS STORY!
And Tom and Bill and this Nathalie thing. I'm just waiting for her to slip up and tell him. I'm waiting. I'm waiting. I'm waiting.
But yes, this story is like...
these chips and this salsa.
It may be confusing if you take it apart, but when you put it together, it doesn't even matter cause it's amazing!
...I'll just go now.
Author's Response: This review made me giggle. Yes, Tom is getting the ladies in every possible way. Nathalie, she's a very important character, though wait until next chapter (or the one after, I don't know) she crosses the line. I'm glad you're loving this story, it means the world to me that people want more! Haha, enjoy your chips (are they like crisps?) and salsa <33
Date: 03/16/10 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
OHMYGOD, I didn't review the last chapter. D: But I promise, promise that I read it!
Anyway, I can't wait for more, and I'd LOVE to know what Dr. Jones asked when Tom left. Will that be revealed in detail? *looks hopeful*
I also kinda want Bill to be super pissed when he finds out the real reason for the doctor visit. :3
Date: 03/16/10 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Questions.
ohhhh poor Bill
he's so naive
is it me or there's smth going between Natalie and Tom?
hope not cuz Tom belongs with Bill
please update ASAP
Author's Response: Yes, but he doesn't believe that Tom would ever lie to him, that's all. Tom and Nathalie, hmm...we'll have to wait and see ^.^rn
Date: 03/14/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
Poor Bill, Tom saying everyone under 25 has to see a mental health doctor. What a little liar. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hehe, he's sneaky right?
Date: 03/14/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
i really am interested in this story
first i thought that Bill has autism or smth cuz he acted strange but now i get it
poor baby,he's in love with Tom
idiot Tom
i liked that he was a rebel and he smoked weed
maybe he needs to make Tom jealous...and then he'll get a reaction for sure
i got the clue why Tom liked that girl from the club...not the hair,not the eyes...it was the nails
she had them like Bill
Tom's mind is responding to Bill unconsciously
i hope that Bill won't suffer too much
update soon
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you're interested. Maybe Tom's mind is responding to Bill. Ohh that could be interesting...
Date: 03/14/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
I am really really really looking forward to next chapter where they are with the doctor. I am dying to see Bill's reaction when he finally gets what he's seeing the doctor for.
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up very soon, I'm glad your looking forward to it!
Date: 03/14/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
Hey, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the doctor's appointment! I'm still loving this story, and I feel really sorry for Bill :) Thanks for sharing this, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know I'm sorry, people expected this chapter to be the main appointment. The next chapter sould be up very soon, it's almost finished :]
Date: 03/14/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
Hope Bill dones;t freak to much and try to throw things around or try to strangle someone. Pretty good. :)
Author's Response: Haha! That would be funny!
Date: 03/14/10 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
Omgsh!!!!!!!! Nooooo Cliffhanger!!! :( Welllll I love it!!! XD XD XD XD XD PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon, I hope you can wait a little while!
Date: 03/14/10 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
O... this is going to be interesting...
Author's Response: Hehe, I hope so!
Date: 03/14/10 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
OMG nein y the stupid doctors. plz more :)
Author's Response: The doctors is a good thing, well sorta.
Date: 03/14/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Poke Poke.
i really dont like melisa, and i feel sorry for Bill. I hope he will get free from his sickness
Author's Response: Melisa is needed, but sure annoying ;]
Date: 03/14/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
I'm getting so anxious about the doctor's appointment already! And I don't know how I feel about Tom fibbing so much to Bill...I know he kinda has to, but the fact that Bill believes him so readily makes it sad....
Author's Response: Yes, I don't like how easy Bill believes everything Tom's tell him. Though that's just Bill. The chapter at the doctors will be posted very soon, I've pretty much written most of it!
Date: 03/14/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
Oh God, what a tangled web of lies Tom's weaving. I don't think Bill is stupid at all, he just trusts Tom to tell him the truth. At least that's how I see it. And Tom's crush is lessening a bit now, thank God. I so don't like Melisa. :/ I'll be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: That's exactly it! Bill's not stupid, he just wouldn't think Tom could lie to him. And yeah...Melisa. She'll be going soon. Probably.
Date: 03/14/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Doctors
Wow, this is gettin' exciting. :) Loved the chapter and now I can barely wait to see what happens in the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks. The next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 03/08/10 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Promises
I almost forgot to review this chapter! *facepalm*
But anyway, GOSH the tickle scene was SO CUTE!
Doctor's visit next chapter, right? I'm SO looking forward to it. Will Bill's Erotomania be diagnosed quickly, or will it be like an episode of House? Where everything but the right thing is figured out until the end. XD
*Throws confetti* I can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Chapter 12 will be the main doctors visit, but chapter 11 will bring things together :]