Date: 03/03/17 10:52 am Title: Chapter 17: Cordoba
please update soon
Date: 12/13/14 10:16 am Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
I'm confused about the "love letters" are they from some one else that Bill keeps in contact with or is it, as said earlier, a incestul kind of thing...
Author's Response: Oh gosh, make me re-read my own writing! Yes, he is in a consensual, incestuous relationship with his father.
Date: 01/03/13 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
I seldom dislike Tom but god I hate him here! Everytime he says fag I cringe and want to slap the shit out of him. Ok, I just adore gay people, but still.. I hope Bill remains with Jorg though, this pairing is cute! Cant wait to see some reunited sex :)
Author's Response: THANK YOU! So many people are automatically Bill/Tom and it's like...Tom's a jerk! Bleh, I might have to work on another chapter now :) Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 11/12/12 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: Cordoba
I hope u update soon *bill pout* *puppy eyes* please *bill pout* ;-;
Date: 07/28/12 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 10: Nothing To See Here
no phone sex? u.u
Author's Response: Not yet! Maybe in the future :)
Date: 07/28/12 03:36 am Title: Chapter 17: Cordoba
You have no idea how loudly i screamed when i saw this XD I love this story. And ominous chapter. :o I'm dying for more!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Which is more than I could say a few months ago haha. I'm so glad you're still reading!! ^_^
Date: 07/27/12 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 17: Cordoba
Hi! Thank you thank you thank you I love you I love you I love you!!!!!! :)... aand just wondering...is this a one thing...or more to come int the future?
Author's Response: More to come in the future, definitely :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ^___^
Date: 04/23/12 01:20 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
it said completed. wtf?
Date: 02/26/12 01:33 am Title: Chapter 2: Roommates
Tom's ridiculous imagination kind of amuses me. But strictly because it's ridiculous.
Date: 01/15/12 01:43 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
more...
Author's Response: Less ^^
Date: 01/05/12 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
Ahh you're completely right xD
Author's Response: I try to be :P ....crap. Now I gotta write TWO chapters for next time I post xD
Date: 01/05/12 06:42 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
Oh Tom >_> he's slooowly getting over it but not in the right direction lol
Author's Response: *sigh* What can I say...I guess this just means more chapters, huh? ^^
Date: 01/05/12 06:25 am Title: Chapter 15: Angst
hahaha idek if i should be bothered still by the father/son thing but if im on Tokio hotel fanfiction, what other excuse do i have? XD
Author's Response: There's no 'should'...you either are or you aren't ^^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/03/12 11:41 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
Hi, I was so excited of seeing a new chapter that I didn't ask how you were. So, how are you doing? I read you got a job, cool! Where do you work? How's everything in your life?
Oh my! I don't know if laugh at Tom's thoughts or just cry over them thinking there might be a lot of people who truly believe that homosexuality is a disease.
I deal with a lot of people who are kind of gay people are fun (talking about boys who are over feminine and cute) but when confronted with a real life situation they show their true colors and ignorance.
It seems that for Tom it'll take a lot of of re-educating himself in respecting others to accept what his brother is.
Hugs!!!
Author's Response: I'm great, thanks for asking ^_^ And I work at a bank now lol, so things are kinda busy.
Yes, sadly Tom's case is all too common in the world :/ Hopefully someone (probably Bill) will knock him upside the head!
Date: 01/03/12 10:50 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
Hello!!! Long time no see you. Happy to say hi though ^_^
Did they really...really make out? They are gonna be crushed after this.
Is Janie not connecting the dots yet about Bill's relation with his father or is she just this upset she really didn't listen between lines?
I'm going immediately to the next chapter.
Hugs!!
Author's Response: Hi! Yes, yes they did make out XD And Janie doesn't know about Bill and his dad...she thought what had happened was a one time thing and that was it. Now it looks like the same thing was happening again with Tom! =)
Date: 12/31/11 09:45 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
I was actually re-reading the entire story this week, and then you update twice? :D I'm thrilled to get more of these complicated relations between the twins and those around them. Looking forward to what happens next always :)
Author's Response: Surprise! ^_^ I'm working on the next chapter now, believe it or not. I'm so glad you kept up with the story. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/31/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
I really like this story, but I do sincerely hope that at some point Tom realizes/learns how stupid he has been. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Just when you think he's learning...he decides to go hide a makeup case. *sigh* This is taken longer than I thought >.>
Date: 12/31/11 12:05 am Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
I wanted to tell you that your story is very well written and you have a great talent, its not my cuppa tea per say, Only because Ive seen and known way to many homophobes in my lifetime and seen my 2 friends who are tranny go thru their surgeries , the thing that has me not able to continue is the father son incest thing. I know its hypocritical, cause of the brother thing but the other is just abuse and thats all I see. Please continue the story you are a really good writer and I really think you see your characters clearly. So I wanted to say that Im not reading on because of your writing its my own issues. Your doing great.
Author's Response: I understand. Thank you for being frank :) I know this might not help at all, but Bill was the one that seduced his father, oddly enough. Thanks for the wonderful review ^^
Date: 12/30/11 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
OH MY GOD YES XD I had a mini heart attack when I saw you updated!Please please pleaaas bonus chapter XD
Author's Response: Working on it right now ^_^ Just a few more reviews!
Date: 12/30/11 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Bus Ride
Now see, I want to keep reading this, but I'm thinking I might have to stop because I really don't like all of the homophobia and use of hateful words. I get that it's supposed to be this way, but it's really rather distasteful and I really don't appreciate this story.
Author's Response: You're entitled to your opinion, of course =) There is a warning for discriminatory language, and I'm only trying to show what Tom is thinking and feeling during the story. I can promise that it will get better, but the language will most likely be around for a little bit as Tom gets over his homophobia. THEN they have to meet their mother. Won't that be fun? XD