Date: 12/30/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
Where did you get the translation from because it would most likely be "me encanta" which would mean "I love"
Author's Response: It would be the same as 'Me encanta Ud.', since the subject is often dropped in Spanish :)
Date: 12/28/11 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 15: Angst
God Tom is so ignorant it annoys me. Glad to see you updating again. =)
Author's Response: Well, I'm trying my best, anyway ^^ Managed 2k more today, so another chapter shouldn't be too far off. And yes, yes he is >.> Also, thank you so much for staying with this story! ^_^
Date: 12/28/11 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
This is one angsty story!
Author's Response: It's not supposed to be T^T Stupid Bill and Tom, messing with themselves and my plans...
Date: 12/14/11 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
This author really needs to get her shit together and update. She left it on a VERY enticing cliff! D:
Author's Response: Alright Miss Pushy, I will work on it today! :P
Date: 11/21/11 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
0.0 wow you just made Bill cheat on his father with his twin brother... that's... WOW! I need a next chapter, DESPERATELY!
Author's Response: That's so weird...today was actually the first time I've written anything on this in months, and then you reviewed! O_O That's creepily amazing.
Date: 06/14/11 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
-gasp- ohhhhhhh hahahaha just ooooohhh hahahaa
Author's Response: I know, right? xD
Date: 06/14/11 03:25 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
yikes! I hope Janie figures out what is going on with Bill and his dad. Maybe she can knock some sense into him.
Author's Response: She tried that in the last story and failed epically xD
Date: 06/12/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
AHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YES YES YES OMGEEEEEEEE AMG!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! if you could only hear my seqeals!!!!
Author's Response: I can here them all the way from the Midwestern US :P
Date: 06/12/11 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
I am proud *raising my hand and smiling proudly at you* Another chapter!!!
So Bill and Tom got a little carried away and blamed it on an overdose of alcohol??? I am sorry about Tom, he will have a BIG panick attack once that his hangover is gone.
You left the chapter at a really hooking event. Bill coming home and facing his brother!!!
Thank you ^_^
Author's Response: Yay! ^_^ And yes, although Bill was most likely drugged. Good thing kissing Tom was the ONLY thing that happened, right? And yes, poor Tom...it will either open his eyes or make him hate Bill >< You know which one I'm hoping for xD
Date: 06/12/11 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
oh...my....GLOB. XO
Author's Response: I KNOW :O
Date: 06/12/11 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
hehehehehehheheheh :F :F this is so good, amusing even
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Date: 06/12/11 11:58 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
AAAAH! IT'S HAPPENING PEOPLE! IT'S FINALLY HAPPENING! soooo excited for the next chapter! XD
Author's Response: I KNOW, RIGHT? :D ...Or not, because come on, this is Tom :P
Date: 06/12/11 03:43 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
That's all it took for Tom's carefully built walls to start breaking.
Well structured. I like the way it's going and thankfully, Bill didn't slip more information about him and his dad. I liked how Bill looked. Must truly have been a knock out :)
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ And yes, it is a good thing Bill stopped when he did...although he no doubt left Janie wondering a little bit, since he didn't know about Tom xD
Date: 06/12/11 03:28 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
Oh gosh, I can't wait to know where this is going... BTW, drunk Tom is really much fun!
Author's Response: I know, right? Bill thought so, too ;D
Date: 06/12/11 02:14 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
LOL I knew IT!
Author's Response: Knew what? XD
Date: 06/12/11 01:39 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
Finally some action! lol. Is it weird that I'm still rooting for Bill/Jorg to work out? I don't know why I love those two together so much, but for some reason I'd perfer to see them work out then Bill/Tom...although Bill/Tom is never a bad thing. Anyway, great chapter!! XD
Author's Response: I know, right? D: I just don't even know what to do know xD I feel like maybe I should write alternate endings or something lol
Date: 06/12/11 01:12 am Title: Chapter 14: At The Club & After
:OOOOOOOOOOOOO
Author's Response: :O
Date: 06/11/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Nerve
can't wait for more. I'm really liking this so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ Working on more now :D
Date: 06/11/11 03:54 am Title: Chapter 13: The Nerve
O.O
Author's Response: o.o;
Date: 06/10/11 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
Oh, I'm loving this. Got straight here from "Te Gusto?" and can't let it go, but couldn't not say something at this point: I really LMFAO'd at the "degayifing" thing... Is it a real word? Hahahaha...
On the down side, unfortunately there are A LOT of people like Simone/Tom around. And, thinking back, I really don't think a plan like Jorg's would ever work, but it is fun to read it anyway.
Keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Response: No, it's not xD Word keeps tell me it's misspelled, but what can you do? *shrugs* XD
No, I very much doubt a plan like Jorg's would /ever/ succeed, but this /is/ fiction, after all xD And yes, sadly there are... I know a lot of it involves religion, but I'm attempting to show an instance where religion has nothing to do with it whatsoever.
Thanks! I'll try! ^^