Date: 08/02/10 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
Hi.
Great chap, full of emotions! Full of an obsessive Tom, who tries to collect the spilled milk trying to solve his earlier behavior behind the excuse of a 'headache'
I'm awaiting for the moment they know for sure that the long separated twins are sleeping under the same room. Tom's reaction will be interesting to watch/read
You've picked my curiosity up with the contents of the package.
Hugs and kisses!
Velia
Author's Response: I love your reviews! :3 They're both on their way to figuring it out, they should both know by the end of next chapter.
Date: 08/02/10 03:04 am Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
I would much rather bill end up with tom. isn't it weird that i think his relationship with his dad is totally bad and wrong. but with tom it wouldn't be near as bad. they weren't raised as brothers...and tom isnt his dad!! looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I don't even know how this will end up anymore ._. It was originally supposed to be Bill/Tom with a side of Bill/Jorg, but I've become attached to Bill/Jorg now...
Do you totally hate Bill/Jorg? Or do you just like Bill/Tom better?
Date: 08/01/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
ANNA YOU UPDATED! *squees* OH HOW I LOVE THIS!
Author's Response: *happiness abounds* yes, yes I did ^^ It was a totally unexpected update, too lol I wrote most of it in a few days. I'm so glad you love it ♥ ^^
Date: 08/01/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
Oh wow... I really enjoy this series of yours. I read it for the first time today. I really hope you take this fic of hiatus since you updated, and I hope to read more soon :3 I really like this universe you have them in, and hope Tom gets his head out of his ass soon. XD heehee.
Author's Response: Thank you! He's already starting...just by being around Bill more :3
Date: 08/01/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
more please
Author's Response: Working one it...in between admining the new RP and playing, of course :3
Date: 08/01/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
.........*does a dance for this update*.........
Author's Response: *moshes* :D Thanks!
Date: 08/01/10 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5: Seed Of Doubt
REALLY GOOD, make more
Author's Response: *will do so soon...after she roleplays more* >.>
Date: 07/30/10 06:14 am Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
Very god. Prithee! Carry on!
Author's Response: *does so and posts* ^^
Date: 07/13/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
damn i want more!
Author's Response: Here you go! ^^
Date: 06/28/10 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
I really like this! It's so realistic; I love how we're four chapters in, and Tom has still yet to change his feelings about Bill for the better. It makes it all the more realistic; homophobia isn't a "get over it in two seconds" sort of issue, so I'm glad you didn't portray it that way.
I really, really hope you continue this, but I did read your profile note. I'm tracking it, and hoping for the best. =)
Author's Response: I honestly am trying to work on it, but I just haven't been feeling this one. I WILL continue it, it might just take a little while :)
I hate writing him so homophobic, but we all know Simone was crazy, so nyah xD
Date: 06/21/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
I'm in love with this fic! :D I love how you have written both Bill and Tom. I've been hooked from Te Gusto XD
Only thing I'm sad about is now that Bill wasn't raised in Germany he doesn't have his German accent.
Can't wait for another chapter :3
Keep up the awesome work!
Your faithful reader,
Kit
Author's Response: Awww...no, he doesn't have a German accent...but he'll probably develop one form hanging around the Germans all the time, if that helps :3 Won't be the same, of course, but it's better than nothing? ♥
Date: 06/13/10 03:39 am Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
:O dont discontinue it lol i still find it interesting xD
Author's Response: Thanks ♥
Date: 06/06/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
I really like it... please update soon:)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll see what I can do.
Date: 06/06/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
Pleeeeeeeease continue this!!! I really love this fic. Ever since I started reading I've been completely caught up. I think that the whole situation is so complex and I can't wait to see how things turn out! :D To trap 2 people, who obviously don't get along, in the same country, in the same school and in the same apartment is absolutely hilarious xD I love your idea and I can't wait for the next update.
Hugs and lots of support from here ;)
Author's Response: Wow, I somehow missed this xD But I have been updating :) Thank you for the review ^^
Date: 06/06/10 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
OH OH OH OH OH OH OH OH
MAKE MORE!!!!!! Holy fuck this is awsome
Author's Response: lol on order of Super Skittle cookies coming up!
...Wait. Right. Chapter >.>
Date: 06/06/10 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
*glomps with love* Noooooo, keep writing. Please? *puppydog eyes*
Tom`s going to um, "defagify" Bill? Good luck with that one lol XD And also, I can just imagine the awkward Tom/Jorg conversations.... it brings a smile to my face lol :D
And you tease! I was so excited that they`d find out, but I guess you can`t rush genius, right? :) At least they`re putting the pieces together, yeah?
Anyway, loved, loved LOVED, so please do keep going with this if you can. I would really appreciate it, but if you just aren`t really feeling it anymore, than trying to just *do it* is worse than not finishing it all all, I think. So do what you think is better, yeah?
Author's Response: I intend to...eventually...working on the next chapter of ME now xD
It's going to get even more awkward when Bill has to choose between them xD
I thought they would, too, but like you said, didn't want to rush it ^^
Thanks ♥
Date: 06/06/10 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
can't wait to find out what happens when Bill and Tom find out hehe :) i'll be looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: I'm looking forward to it, too ^^
Date: 06/06/10 03:19 am Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
ja! cant wait.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Date: 06/06/10 01:23 am Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
I missed this story!
This was great! I really can't wait to see what Tom is going to do to 'degayify' Bill =)
Author's Response: I can't wait either. Any ideas?
Date: 06/06/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 4: Brothers
Love.
I hope Tom gets over himself.
Author's Response: He will...eventually >:D But the journey's the best part, as always.