Date: 08/10/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Birthdays
-flops around-
THIS IS AWESOME. JUST... AWESOME.
Seriously, I love this. :]
Author's Response: *snugglecuddles* I love YOU (for reviewing) :3
Date: 08/10/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 7: Birthdays
-rubs eyes- You got me all sentimental now, uhh... At least Tom's going to try, Bill better see how much his twin cares.. Well, a bit anyway.... Great chapter, I look forward to more from you!
Author's Response: Bill DOES have a point, though...It isn't Tom's actions towards him so much as Tom's actions/words in general :3
*hands a tissue* Here you go :3 Keep that for later ^^
Date: 08/10/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: Birthdays
LOVE YOU ANNALAS! This story is amazing and I can't wait to read more :D
Author's Response: Wooooooooooooooot :D
Date: 08/10/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 7: Birthdays
"Sure," Tom retorted, "I'll just go out and buy him a sparkly stuffed unicorn, he should love that. Seriously? What do you even get a gay guy for his birthday?"
That made me LMFAO
Author's Response: I honestly thought about have Tom get him one, but I couldn't decide if it would be pink or black xD Hence the real gift (which you should see next chapter!)
Date: 08/09/10 05:26 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
daaaaamn Bill certainly killed Tom at the end xD
Author's Response: Yes well...it's not like Tom didn't sk for it xD
Date: 08/08/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
Yay I've been waiting for u 2 update :D thank u! It's so sad that the 2 of them can't get along when they both miss each other so much. Can't wait 2 read what will happen next ! :)
Author's Response: Well, the update should be coming soon, so...we'll see ^^
Date: 08/08/10 02:41 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
Hi
Thank you for the bonus chapter! That is what a call "give Tom a piece of Bill's mind," I shoulnd't team any on this, but, I team Bill, I've always thought that blood does not make you relative of no one but love and care.
What will Tom do after being rejected so blatantly? (I hope I didn't mispelled the word u.u )
You left me with 1000 questions popping in my head.
See you next chapter, beautiful!
Hugs
Author's Response: You're so right! Hopefully Tom will get his head out of his ass now and realize what a jerk he's been. And hopefully Bill will give him a chance to make it up to him! ^^
Date: 08/07/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
so short! -whines- More?
Author's Response: I know >_- Working on it! :)
Date: 08/07/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
Yaay im the 100th reviewer if nobody sends it quicker..
I LOVE YOUR WORK
Author's Response: You sure are! Thanks! I'll try to get another chapter up in the next week for you :3
Date: 08/07/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
-wipes at his eyes- poor Bill... Tom needs to get that stick out of his ass...
Author's Response: *nodnod* I wish Bill would give him another chance ♥
Date: 08/07/10 09:01 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
O.o omg can't wait it's so intence :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next part now! ^^
Date: 08/07/10 04:33 am Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
To answer your question from my last review...I like your pairing of Bill and Jorg somewhat now that Bill is an adult, more or less. But still, can't get past the pedo/incest part of it. I can get past the incest for Bill and Tom, it doesn't bother me. But no matter how well written, or how much I like the pairing, I cannot be ok with a father son relationship like that, esp since Bill grew up with his Jorg, and it started so young.
Plus, in this story, Bill and Tom could realistically be happy together, and live somewhere where they could be together openly. But the father son thing is never ok. So, I am totally rooting for Tom to fix things with him twin, and then Jorg to end things with Bill so Bill can be happy.
However you write well enough that I know I will follow the story to the end no matter what you do with it. =)
Author's Response: Thank you, that's a really big compliment :3 I'm not going to reveal what happens in the fic, though (since I honestly don't know myself). Thanks for answering my question! ^^
Date: 08/07/10 04:27 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
Ooh, I loved what Bill said to Tom. I hope Tom really takes it to heart. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I hope he does, too! He has a bit (more) thinking to do.
Date: 08/07/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
I love it! Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^
Date: 08/07/10 02:13 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
awww..ewwww though jorg and bill. just bill and tom :P
Author's Response: Well, Bill/Jorg is a pairing in this fic, so there will be more...
Date: 08/07/10 12:59 am Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
this is a very interesting fanfic and i starting to really like this fic, and thank for writing this and please update soon :]]
Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^^ I'm glad you like it :3
Date: 08/06/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
How did I miss that last update? I've been waiting for this fic like crazy, and you posted chapter 5, and I didn't even realize it. *facepalm* But on the plus side, I had two brilliant chapters to read through tonight. =)
I'm loving this, and how slow they're moving in even getting along with each other; now that Tom is making attempts to be nice (even though he *does* have ulterior motives), Bill doesn't want to hear a word from him.
I feel bad for Bill; he must be hurting, knowing thaT Tom is his twin, but not the boy that he'd once known. I'm really interested in seeing what Tom has to say, now that Bill has (calmly) told him off.
*patiently waits* =)
Author's Response: I'm proud of Bill, and I really think Tom deserved that. Now I have to somehow get Bill to give Tom a chance xDD
Date: 08/06/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Arrival
You're cruel, :P BUT IT WAS STILL AWESOME! And the final thing I will say, GO BILL!!!
That is all. :)
Author's Response: Wasn't it? :3 Tom SO deserved that xDD
Date: 08/06/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
Damn, that's cold.
Honestly, that was my first impression.
Great chapter!! Update pleeeease?
Author's Response: It really is, but I think Tom deserved it xD Hopefully they'll make up soon?
Date: 08/06/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Rejection
OMFG! they finally rfealized it! poor bill, realizing his brother was a complete and utter ass....i am SO glad that you started writing again :D
Author's Response: I know...hopefully they'll make up soon, yes? xD