I've been lurking all of your stories for months,yhe best writer here in my opinion,and you ABSOLUTELY MUST write more,please? This series is so good (:

Author's Response: thank you so much! and i'll definitely try to write more. :)

you are the best writer on this site, you know. i love following this bill and tom when they come around.

Author's Response: i'm not quite sure i agree about the best writer part, but thank you so much! (=

Of all of your fics, I absolutely adore this whole universe that you've created in this series. The way you describe things, the things they think, the way they feel, is so unique. It isn't like anything I've ever read. And it stays with me.

I read this a few days ago and I'm only just now finding the time to review, but it's been in my head the whole time. Things like Bill's burning words to Tom, the feel of the rain falling outside (even though I love rainy days, I can feel their irritation), Tom sitting in the bathtub with a plate of spaghetti balanced on his knees, even the girl at the store being so in love with Tom and Tom being so oblivious. And then also Tom biting back at her and then feeling like shit when he realizes that he just made her feel like Bill sometimes makes him feel.

There's just so much packed into every single line that you have to read it a few times to get the full impact of it all. I don't know how you do it, but you leave me spellbound every time I read something from you.

Author's Response: i love rainy days too, so it took some time to get in the right mindset to properly desrcibe their irritation at it, and it makes me so happy that you felt it, too. anyway, thank you so much for your review, as always. :)

You have no idea, how I've missed your fics!!! I was so thrilled to see you posting this! I realised that this is actually a part of a series I haven't actually read, so I don't feel like I'm able to fully review this, because I haven't read the previous parts. However, I want to say few words (and get back to the previous parts later).

I adore your writing style. I've said it before, but there is something so powerful in it that it really affects me greatly every time. It's exhausting, but in a good way. The images, metaphoras and vivid describtions combined to strong story and amazing characterizing in a world, where details do matter makes this not exactly light to read. It challenges the reader, because how I see this, it's not about bouncing from happening to another, but it's all in characters and their verbal and non-verbal communication. And you do it very well!

Interesting to se the characterizion here and you have created a whole new characters to both Bill and Tom, but there is sa tiny hint of real them left. Little twisting and turning, but still balance betwen has something familiar. Just the way I always see Tom being the one being actually the more vulnerable, softer, self-sacrifiying person. I don't know really, something familiar still.

Hmmm, what else... I like Elaine :). I love the struggling and fucked up people, cribble people, broken people. I love the humanity in here instead of perfection. Apparently you never disappoint me :)

Author's Response: Oh, your reviews always make me so giddy! ^_^ Yes, this is the kind of series that doesn't make much sense if you haven't read the previous parts, but thank you so much for letting me know what you think anyway. You're also right in thinking that this is not plot-driven, quite the opposite: it's very character-driven. the thing with RPF is that you can't actually say that this is out of character and this is isn't, which makes writing AUs great. I also always see Bill as the more dominant one, so you're not alone. :) And oh, thank you so much for recognizing that what I'm trying to potray is humanity, not perfection (never perfection, it's so fucking boring), it means a lot to me. Aaaand I'm babbling again. The bottom line is, thank you so very much for your review! (=