Date: 01/31/10 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 2-The lines are drawn
Ohhh...... I liked this chapter a lot. You can already see that they are comfortable together....well at least tom is, I'm not quite sure about bill though
Author's Response: thank you...Tom finds himself quite comfortable with Bill, but its going to take Bill some time to warm up to him, though ;o)
Date: 01/31/10 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
*tracking story*
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 01/31/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
I love it already! More!
Author's Response: ask and you shall recieve! chapter 2 is up!
Date: 01/30/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
good start. i really like and i hope you continue with it.
Author's Response: thank you....i don't know how many chapters i'll have but i plan on continuing...it's like a movie in my head XDDDD
Date: 01/30/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
*nodnod* enjoying this, that I am I can't wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: why thank you! i enjoy your work, so it means a lot that you're enjoying this so far..hope i can do you justice!
Date: 01/30/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
This sounds fun/interesting. Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 01/30/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
Awesome story beginning. :) I really look forward to this one! Suspenseful and exciting already.
And I hope Bill's face doesn't scar, lol. He's way to pretty for that. :)
Author's Response: thank you! and don't worry, Bill's face won't scar. I couldn't do that to him. :o)
Date: 01/30/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.
I like it, great start to a interesting story.
Author's Response: thank you very much!