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Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.

Oh ok that makes a lot of sense :)

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run

Great story! I'm hooked! More!!!!

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run

interesting..i wonder what will happen.

Reviewer: cleverone Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run

thank you so much for quickly updating. excellent job!

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run

Huh. What's up with bill and the denying of having nghtmares and then getting mad at tom? I still love tom in this story :) can't wait for the next chapter and what we are going to be learning

Author's Response: it's not so much that he's mad at Tom, really. he's realizing that the safety that Tom offers is forcing secrets to spill out that he doesn't know he's buried deep and it frightens him, if that makes any sense. i promise, it won't be long before the truth comes out.

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4-Take One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

this is so good, nice sexual tension. I'm glad to see they are so attracted to each other. :) I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: if it's smut you're waiting on....it won't be long, i promise.

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 4-Take One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

ooo whts going to happen?

Author's Response: hang on....you'll find out very soon ;o)

Reviewer: skl16179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 4-Take One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

ooo....the sexual tension is yummy..

Author's Response: thank you....and the tension is gonna get thicker...trust me :o)

Reviewer: skl16179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.

aww..*feels special thank u...ever need or want another one...just ask :)...and i know its not the greatest...but yeah :)

Reviewer: skl16179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.

um... basically what u do is u open that page on the left side of the page there's a HTML code and u just copy and paste that into the summary part of ur story when u edit it... hopefully u understand my directions if not click on "FAQ" @ the top of the sitepage scroll down until u find it.... :)
i'm glad u like the banner

Author's Response: after tinkering with it a couple of times, i got it to work! once again, thank you SO much for the banner. you have the distinction of being the first person to make a banner for any story i've ever written. <3

Reviewer: skl16179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 Ladies and Gents, Shit just got real.

http://s1009.photobucket.com/albums/af215/skl16179/Story%20Banners/?action=view¤t=police-lights.jpg

ummm kinda got bored and made a banner inspired by this fic, hope u like it!!!

Author's Response: I LOVE IT!! ok, so i need help..how do i add the banner????? THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!

Reviewer: broken2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 3-Up in smoke

I really like this one!!! Cause I totaly love the thougt of Tom being a cop^^
So keep going^^

Author's Response: me too...the idea of Tom with a gun and handcuffs? *shudders*rnrnis it hot in here????

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 3-Up in smoke

oooo *curious* whts going to happen next??

Author's Response: mwuahahahahahaha.....tune in to find out ;o)

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3-Up in smoke

Awwwww I don't know if I should find this chapter utterly adorable but it is. I loved it :D

Author's Response: LOL...it's ok....i kind of went aww too when I wrote it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 3-Up in smoke

wowoow! Moving right along! I love this. So exciting. Tom smelling Bill's scent, Bill's body tingling with Tom on top of him. Ohhellyes.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 3-Up in smoke

O.O damn. these people do not play. but i'm glad Tom's gonna be there for Bill *nodnod*

Author's Response: oh yeah, Tom isn't gonna let Bill out of his sight ;o)

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 3-Up in smoke

Oh my lord, this is getting better by ever chapter. I wonder what will happen next.

Author's Response: hold on to your horses...it's gonna be a wild ride ;o)

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 2-The lines are drawn

aww i like the end

Author's Response: thank you for reading!

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 2-The lines are drawn

Ooooooo, nice. So good, it's like watching the twins on CSI or something. :) I am really getting involved in this story, and I like that fact that Tom held Bill's hand and felt something, not even realizing what it was, so quickly in the story. I'm sure there will be lots of sexual tension here. Very, very nice.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 2-The lines are drawn

tonight!!!!!!!!!!! i want it tonight!!!!

lord, I'm super excited to see how this is gonna pan out. I like the way Tom handled Bill, even if it was a bit harsh.

Author's Response: i'm working on the next chapter as we speak, so it may be a little earlier than tonight..mainly because i have the next part in my head working itself out, so i need to get it down before i forget it. it should be up with the next couple of hours ;o)rnrnand thank you..it's so cool that one of my favorite authors likes one of my stories. i'm in awe. <3

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