Date: 02/21/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 9-The Pain of Love
awww so sad..I wonder what it is Bill will find in those safety deposit boxes??HMMM got me thinking
Author's Response: we have a couple of chapters to go before the safety deposit boxes reveal their secrets ;o) a little goodness coming though.
Date: 02/15/10 02:17 am Title: Chapter 8-On The Edge Of Something Beautiful
wow! I missed big things last chapter! wonderful writing, very exciting!! Keep up the good work!
Date: 02/14/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8-On The Edge Of Something Beautiful
AWWW SO CUTE!WRITE M0RE SOON
Date: 02/14/10 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 8-On The Edge Of Something Beautiful
This is a very well written story! I like it. =]
Date: 02/14/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 8-On The Edge Of Something Beautiful
awww that was cute!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/14/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 8-On The Edge Of Something Beautiful
YEAH TOM IS OK!!!!!!!!!! a little hurt but still alive....i officially LOVE bill because he helped save tom....wonder whats gonna happen next....
Date: 02/14/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 8-On The Edge Of Something Beautiful
awww.... sex... btw RMGMW = skl16179
Date: 02/09/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 7-Like A Bullet You Can Hurt Me
awww....so sad I hope Tom survives this and they can live happily ever after so sad!!!
Date: 02/09/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 7-Like A Bullet You Can Hurt Me
awwww...thats so fucking cute...yet sad.... poor tom....
Date: 02/09/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 7-Like A Bullet You Can Hurt Me
Is it wrong of me to do a little happy dance right now?
Date: 02/09/10 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7-Like A Bullet You Can Hurt Me
O.O oh lord fix it!!!
Date: 02/09/10 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7-Like A Bullet You Can Hurt Me
omg....poor tomi being shot, but he got shot trying to save the man he loves....and poor billa having to deal with all of this crap....but they have each other which makes it at least a little bit better....can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 02/07/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 6-Leap of Faith
Niiiiiiiice *purrs* very, very nice. :)
Date: 02/06/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 6-Leap of Faith
oooh more
Date: 02/06/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6-Leap of Faith
LOVED IT!!!!!!!! -happy dance- this was the best chapter yet.....hahaha i loved it it was funny and really hot.... i have made up my mind i like both tom and bill :)
Date: 02/06/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 6-Leap of Faith
OMG That was so interesting
I am wondering what will happen next!
Date: 02/06/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 6-Leap of Faith
fuck yeah!!!!!! its not fullout nude smut buts its close enough!!!!! *YAY!!!!
Author's Response: every smut plot line has to have a starting point ;o) trust me......the really hot stuff is coming!
Date: 02/05/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run
great story so far, keep up the good work!
Date: 02/03/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run
Awwwwwwwwwww, so cute! Pwetty pwease update sooon! I like Tom in this story^^
Date: 02/02/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 5-Ready to Run
o... sleep talk... and nipple drool??? lol