Date: 03/04/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 14-The Hidden Truth
NO..... damnit the cheif was just pissed he didn't get a piece of that hot ass... lol
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAAHHAHA! rnrnNo ass for the Chief. Solely reserved for our Officer. <3
Date: 03/04/10 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 14-The Hidden Truth
Some men just don't deserve to be fathers. God! Selling your own child! Now, Chief Jones?? What on earth!? I never saw that coming...huh. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I agree. There are men out there that never should breed. But that's my opinion. Thank you for reading!
Date: 03/04/10 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 14-The Hidden Truth
OMG!!! So Chief Jones was in on this OMG!!!! Now I understood why Tom had to be left off the case OMG!!!!!!! Yup date soon
Author's Response: Yep! the Chief is a baaaaad man.
Date: 03/04/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 14-The Hidden Truth
oh tomi help billa his in it deep right now! so much i want to say but right now i have to head out and im typying really fast sry for mistakes
Author's Response: Thank you for reading..stop by a little later. New info coming!
Date: 03/02/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 13-Please Forgive Me I Know Not What I Do
OH NO! poor bill!You have to write more soon!!!!!
Date: 03/02/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 13-Please Forgive Me I Know Not What I Do
holy shit!!!What is Bill thinking!!!!!!!
Date: 03/02/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 13-Please Forgive Me I Know Not What I Do
Omg!!!!!!!!! Please continue!!! XD
XD I love this story!!!! It is incredible!!!!
Continue!!!! Continue!!!!
Date: 03/02/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 13-Please Forgive Me I Know Not What I Do
damn you bill!!!!!
Date: 03/02/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 13-Please Forgive Me I Know Not What I Do
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? O.O
Date: 03/02/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 13-Please Forgive Me I Know Not What I Do
DAMNIT BILL. how could u! tomi loves u so much.
Date: 03/01/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
i love that Tom wanted to make it special for Bill. that's really romantic
your smut is awesome! its just passionate enough and hot enough
great chapter
Date: 03/01/10 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
I don't know how this story in 2 days become my favorite fic!!!!!!!! Love this!!!!!
Please continue!!! XD
Date: 02/28/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
so sad :(
and i really liked the title of the chapter
Date: 02/28/10 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
aww poor tomi and billa. plz hurry with more and fix it :(
Date: 02/28/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
going to get me to cry aren't you..Damn it! I wanna see if they will find each other again.
Date: 02/28/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
awww...nooooooooooo
Date: 02/28/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 12-You Have To Say Goodbye Before You Can Say Hello Again
uh oh. i hope nothing happens to bill. i want to know whats in the bank boxes! =)
Date: 02/28/10 09:31 am Title: Chapter 11-Breaking the Rules
..Noooooooo.The Chief needs to be bitch slapped!! You can't take Tom off the case, that's just down right mean missy. As my kindred ratbag I demand you fix this!! Please, and soon *Smoosh* *lollipops and leather*
Date: 02/28/10 01:58 am Title: Chapter 11-Breaking the Rules
nooooooooooooooo he can't take Tom off of the case!
this is amazingly good!
can't wait to read more
Date: 02/28/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11-Breaking the Rules
NOOOOOO!!!! *falling off a cliff*