Date: 02/08/10 07:18 pm Title: These Moments...
I really do like this. So far, it definitely deserves that feature. Let me tell you.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: 02/08/10 12:50 pm Title: Is Our Life.
looove love love it ! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/07/10 09:32 pm Title: These Moments...
It was what we needed,a cute Maldives story!Loved it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/07/10 07:05 pm Title: Is Our Life.
I loved this.
It was romatic; yet creative.
You did an awesome job :DD
Author's Response: Thank you! ;)
Date: 02/07/10 06:33 pm Title: Is Our Life.
I LOVED IT.!
Absolutley amazing.!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/07/10 01:17 pm Title: Is Our Life.
Awwwwwww!!!! Okay, this is officially my new FAVORITE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! It is soooooii sweeet and awesome and absolutely romantically fantastic!!! I cried at the end. (in a really happy way, you know) I FREAKING LOVE YOU!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! You're too kind, I'm flattered. :)
Date: 02/07/10 12:17 pm Title: Is Our Life.
I loved it! It was really good! Romantic and just plain beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/05/10 05:40 pm Title: Is Our Life.
very cute story. I enjoyed it immensly
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/05/10 05:38 pm Title: Between Sleep...
really good job w/ the smut!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 02/05/10 05:35 pm Title: These Moments...
Love the beginning. It made me want to take a vacation.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/05/10 11:39 am Title: Is Our Life.
That was simply lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/04/10 05:29 am Title: Is Our Life.
It's like utopia, this story, it's just too... perfect. Everything is described like paradise, and I know that that's where they are in the story but it's a bit too much I think. The setting and unnecessary descriptions and activities take away from the plot IMO. Like that super huge breakfast that Tom cooked- unrealistic. I would have loved to see more real emotion (e.g. fear, apprehension, slyness, etc.) and twin interaction, maybe something that wasn't so sickeningly happy... just seemed like u were beating a dead horse with all that paradise. I think your grammar also needs a double-check.
Other than that, it was a really sweet fluffy story, and what's not to like about first times? :) I particularily like that they seemed to have taken their time until their relationship developed that far.
I think the story was ok, not awesome, but not bad also. So yeah, keep writing- it only gets better. :)
Author's Response: Well, then it's good. Because I wanted it to be a little utopia, I wanted to get all the details and make it a little 'too' perfect, if that's possible. And nothing is unrealistic if you just believe it, or so have I learned. I'm from Europe and English is not my first language, but I have amazing beta help who helps me, so I'm sure I'll get better. Thank you!
Date: 02/02/10 06:29 pm Title: Is Our Life.
I liked this fanfic
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 02/01/10 11:59 pm Title: Is Our Life.
This was very touching. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 02/01/10 10:45 pm Title: Is Our Life.
Omg, that ending was perfect!!! I loved this so much, all of it. I just got back from work and I hadn't had a chance to get online all day, so this was the perfect pick-me-up.
The massage scene was so cute--I loved that they were giving each other crap in German. And then their closeness at the end felt so real--I think you ended it just right with tenderness instead of smut (even though the smut was smokin' hot). This was a beautiful fic! Thank you so much for writing it! *adds to faves*
I'm going to have to check out your other fics now...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it, really! I wanted to try something else, not only smut. You're too kind! Oh, no, all my other stories are so... not good!
Date: 02/01/10 10:14 pm Title: Is Our Life.
Awwwww!! This .. just so AMAZING. I loved it!! Bravo -stands up an applauds-
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Date: 02/01/10 10:11 pm Title: Is Our Life.
:) You already had me, but a little massage never hurts. You did a lovely job with this fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! ;)
Date: 02/01/10 09:02 pm Title: Is Our Life.
Beautiful sentiment and such utter love. Very well done. ♥ And totally romantic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means so much. b29;
Date: 02/01/10 08:46 pm Title: Is Our Life.
"That we can enjoy these simple moments between sleep, together, like this."
[melts] This was BEAUTIFUL! I'm trying to gather up my words, but I'm speechless as of now. I enjoyed reading!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/01/10 07:50 pm Title: Is Our Life.
That was just beautiful *__*
this will go straight to my faves :3
Author's Response: Thank you! Ahh, you're too sweet. :3