Date: 04/03/10 06:16 am Title: Off Key
:'D
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/30/10 05:19 pm Title: Off Key
I read it one more time.
[i]Tom smiled. “I know. I love you guys too.” He opened his car door. “Thanks. Again,” he said, getting into his car. He shut the door, pulling out of the cemetery.
“Gustav...” said Georg, watching his car pull out and disappear.
“Yeah.” Gustav's searching hand from Georg's and he held tight. “We should go to Simone.”
“Do you think she....?”
"She does.” [/i]
'You know that I always cry when read it? Beautiful story!
Author's Response: Simone knew it was coming the moment she heard Bill was killed. It was something she really, really tried to prevent, I think. I should have showed that more and I regret not doing so but thank you so much!
Date: 03/29/10 03:33 am Title: Off Key
I haven't read this since the first time, and it still hits as hard as it did then. ;--; I can't believe that you pushed yourself to write this for me, and that it came out so brilliantly. You had me sobbing again, but every moment was amazing, with such heartbreak.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you gave me the idea and that I went with it. It's different than most of what I write because I tend to stray away from death fic and heavy heavy angst but I loved this, loved trying something new and I have you to thank. I'm so happy you still love it and you can still connect.
Date: 03/25/10 02:26 am Title: Off Key
Oh Mein GOTT!
Yeah...I cried lots...that was AMAZING! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it made you cry ;D!
Date: 01/31/10 05:14 pm Title: Off Key
Why haven't I reviewed this before? D:
I put it in my favorites but I forgot to review it? How did that happen? Gosh, I must be REALLY stressed if I forgot that @.@
Anyway. This was so sad. I've also written a fic that has Tom leaving a suicide note at the end and so I could relate to the feelings going into the writing. How Tom just feels so utterly hopeless and he doesn't even think, it's just that he wants to be with Bill.
But yeah. So sad. I applaud you for making me sad ;__;
Author's Response: Haha, you have no idea how excited I got when I read that you put it in your favorites. That means so much to me!rnrnAw, I'll have to read your suicide fic. I hate them normally because I don't like death fics at all but obviously I was able to write one, I should be able to read one! The hopelessness was the hardest part to write 'cause I wanted to do it right.rnrnThank you!
Date: 01/31/10 06:51 am Title: Off Key
mygod! this is so sadd!!
i used ten napkin and i still can't stop myself from crying!
it is so touching! i think that is awful to live without your brother or sister especially when is your twin! i don't know what i would do without my sister!
it was a beautiful story.... thank you so much
Author's Response: No, thank you for commenting. I don't know what I would do without my sister and brother either which made it even harder for me to write this but I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 01/30/10 07:33 pm Title: Off Key
This was a really sad story, though I loved it. I know how hard it is to loose someone so close. I lost my own sister at the age of 3, she died, 10 years old. I loved this story, thank you for writing this. God bless you.
Author's Response: God bless you too, baby. I'm really sorry about your sister, that is so horrible but thank you for reading this.
Date: 01/30/10 11:12 am Title: Off Key
*cries into Kaulitzcest's shoulder*
All the authors on this site want me to cry blood. seriously! I'm running out of tears here!
That was beautiful!!!! I've written something similar to this, but it was NO WHERE near as good as yours!!!!! that was amazing and beautiful :)
Author's Response: Awww, don't cry! Haha, I'm glad you liked it so much but I'm sure yours was beautiful too.
Date: 01/29/10 08:14 pm Title: Off Key
beautiful, just beautiful
i- it's so sad! but beautiful...
you are a wonderful writer, and this is a wonderful story. thank you for writing this piece.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! This put a smile to my face.
Date: 01/29/10 07:32 pm Title: Off Key
Aww...It WAS sad, but ya know, I'd like to think that if I were put in the same place, and lost my twin, I don't think I could make it, either...
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm positive I wouldn't be able to make it without them.
Date: 01/29/10 07:13 pm Title: Off Key
that was good
Author's Response: Why thank you.
Date: 01/29/10 06:54 pm Title: Off Key
*is in tears*
*sniffs*
that was so beautiful and heart wrenching i...i...i cried to my roommate/bestfriend/twinfromanothermother and told him to never ever leave me
it was wonderfully written and to pull that reaction from me it had to be so much love to you
Author's Response: Haha, aw! I'm really, really glad you liked it so much! I tell my friends that all the time because like I tried to show in this story, who knows what will happen in the next hour, the next day.rnrnThank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 01/29/10 06:05 pm Title: Off Key
OMG sooooo sad, crying now... but it was very good, powerful, wow, loved it :) It's sad how the only way a fic where one of the twin dies can have a good ending is if the other commits suicide... but I just can't imagine it any other way... ok dont know if that review made sense.. but yeah, good job !
Author's Response: I don't think I could have ended it with Tom still alive. He was either going to die by an accident or by killing himself, haha. I'm glad you liked it!