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Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 08:45 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

oh fuck yeah! go bill! go bill! *cheerleader dance*

Author's Response: XD Bill is quite awesome, ja?

Reviewer: Sara-ra Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 03:56 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

Simply gorgeous, and man that Bill would be freaky to wake up to! o_o

Author's Response: But you wouldn't turn away even a freaky wake up from Bill, would you?lol

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 02:45 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

Everybody deserves love now when Bill is back! I can't wait for the net chapter when he meets Tom again. Tom was so dumb but what a lovely dumb he is ;)

xx

Author's Response: XD Bill being back is apparently quite a loved thing! lol

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 01:40 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

Soooo glad Bill finally came back to Tom. Silly Tom. Leaving Bill like that.

Love the name of this chapter!

Love this story! Can't wait for next chapter! :]

Author's Response: Lol Tom was rather silly, wasn't he? And I was pleased with the chapter title too

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 12:51 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

so sweet and sad and OMGIGOSH BILL IS BACK...hehe that rhymed xD

Author's Response: Fer totes!

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 12:32 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

:'3

Author's Response: *nodnod* I know, I know

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 12:30 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

O: OMG
What will happen?
*O* Update soon! pleaseee
xoxo

Author's Response: What will happen? You will be nommed by the muffin man...that's what will happen ^^

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 12:10 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

Aw, poor Tomi...poor Bill...

Author's Response: It IS poor them all the way around the board

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 11:20 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Bill as a merman/merperson-that i'd love to see.
Poor Tom, leaving Bill so he can be free...got a feeling Tom hasn't seen the last of "Fishy Bill".
Off to the next to catch up.....

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 10:46 pm Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

OMG MORE

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 10:35 pm Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

He's baaaaack! Huge creepy smile and everything? 8D
The chapter was sad. :( I'm glad you didn't leave it hanging and at least brought Bill back. x)

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 10:10 pm Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

I adore those lyrics at the end. What song is it from? I'm so glad Bill is taking the first step here...lord knows Tom won't! xD Loved this update!

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 09:46 pm Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

Oh yay, Bill is back!!!

Author's Response: Of course he is! XD

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/10 10:13 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

:-)
thank you

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 09:27 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

This chapter was so sad!! D: I mean, I really loved picturing Bill feeling so at home in the sea, but with Tom leaving it was just... :( :(

Author's Response: *nods sadly* Poor Bill, eh? Goes back n Tom's just...gone.

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 11:46 am Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Aww, poor Tom. I love the way he is thinking of Bill's happiness. But maybe it's not the sea Bill belongs to anymore.

xx

Author's Response: Dun Dun Dunnnnnnn XD I think you might be on to something there...

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 11:50 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Oh I see mermaid form, I loves it and Wang more of it, maybe see Billoesia and Tom kissing while Bill is in mermaid form!

Author's Response: Mermaid form appears again, don't worry

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 07:58 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Awww...it was a sweet notion but I have the feeling Billoesia is going to have a very strong opinion about this.

Author's Response: Doesn't he ALWAYS have a strong opinion? XD

Reviewer: dusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 07:47 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Awww, that was so sad. Poor Tomi, it's amazing how much he's matured in this time. And poor Billoesia, he's not going to be so happy when he notices what happened. I'll be looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I don't think Tom actually realizes he has, so don't talk about that too loud lol!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 07:34 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Okay, I got misty-eyed on this one. It's so sweet that Tom would put Bill's happiness above his own and "set him free" as it were. But I think that Bill will actually be very crushed when he sees Tom left him. I have to know what happens next!

Author's Response: I have a feeling your right about Bill.... Next chapter will be up tomorrow!

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