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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 02:22 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

I've been having trouble posting review's-hopefully this one will post!
I am so so happy Bill went to Tom-they are too cute together!

Author's Response: They really are! And what kind of hman being would I be to keep them apart?

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 02:21 pm Title: "I'm. . .touched that you flew all the way out here just to see me, man."

Lmfao Bill's just too funny.

Author's Response: ^^ Bill is amazingly awesome

Reviewer: BillKaulitzLove483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 02:13 pm Title: "I'm. . .touched that you flew all the way out here just to see me, man."


OMTH ONLY ONE CHAPTER LEFT?
eeeeppp, thats so exciting and yet sad at the same timee. I will miss this story ^^

Awww, possessive Bill. So Sexy xDD
I was laughing quite hard when i read the part where Georg's eyes apparently
wandered over Tom too long, and Bill used his voice XD

-----Samantha



Author's Response: I'm going to miss it too! I love Siren!Bill. And dude, I'd so do that if I had the power to lol

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 02:09 pm Title: "I'm. . .touched that you flew all the way out here just to see me, man."

What??? More more more please!!!!! Don't end it with one more!! Bill got Georg good!

Author's Response: Sadly, there is only one more. But damn, I think it's a good ending chapter lol

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 03:57 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Woot! That was awesome.

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 05:43 am Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Oh, whoops, my mistake thinking Sarah was a siren. She's not thankfully!

Author's Response: That might've been a little awkward

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/10 05:35 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

awwww

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/10 12:05 am Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Great chapter!

I'm so glad Bill came back. And Tom said he loved him! How cute =)

Can't wait for more! =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/10 12:01 am Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

After Bill changed form for Tom's family Sarah didn't notice Bill was naked? She must be very young. :p

Love that Jorg knows all the proper terms ( half human half fish sirens as opposed to mermaids).

And the ending scene was very sweet.

Can't wait for next chapter! :]

Author's Response: Or she's just like me lol! I'd totes be noticing he went all fishy LLLOOOONNNGGG before I realized he was naked lmao. But then, I am a little slow

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 10:25 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Awww, I'm so happy Bill is back! I loved to learn a little more about Tom's family and of course, that little scene at the end was made of win! Fantastic chapter.

I hope you feel better soon and RL easer up on you. *hugs* 



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Life is better with Bill in it I think. And thanks so much

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 09:36 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

I'll cheer you up :D I wish it could be with some more of Metamorphose, but...I don't know. I know where I want it to go but not how to get there so I can't promise anything XD

Aw, Bill :) He swam across the entire ocean. How sweet is that? Brings a new meaning to the song "1000 Meere" XD



Author's Response: Aww thanks so much hunny! I feel better already lol. And you know....I totes never thought of 1000 Meere....Ok...well I might have, I just don't rememeber if I did or not lol. *sighs* I'm really slow today

Reviewer: 1l0v3t0k10h0t3l Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 09:29 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

awww *squee* this chappie was so cute!!!
tell tom hes a perv *shakes head*

ZOMG ur not cheery and random-ish!! O.O
hope you get better soon *pats back* *pets*
hope you get lots and lost and lots of review to cheer you up!!!^^

Author's Response: Tom is such a perv! lol And yeah, its scary when I'm not weird and random, isn't it? lol And thanks for the review! I feel a little better actually

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 09:19 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

srry 2 here uv been having a shitty week :
but i hope this helps, this was an awesome chapter :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It very much did help

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 06:55 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Awww this was such a sweet chapter. I'm so glad everything is okay between them. :')

Author's Response: I'm too much of a mushpot not to make them happy lol

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 06:43 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Mwahaha yes! Bill's Return!!!

Author's Response: XD Bill returning is always a good thing

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 05:24 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

OMG, Sarah is a siren too!!! Epic win!!! Wait, does that mean that Bill and Tom are related? Awww! Eh it's alright. Anyway, I love it still!! And I love that Bill finally revealed himself to the family!!!

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 05:22 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Sweet

Author's Response: Danke ^^

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 04:57 pm Title: "Sirens are usually women, and since there aren't really males to reproduce with, they use fish sperm."

Awww!
So lovely!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 04:30 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

:DD yay
Are ya' Ready Muffins!? I am Captain :3

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 11:01 am Title: "Tomi is a little dumb sometimes. He couldn't figure it out on his own."

awww ^^

yay!! go bill's mom! she rocks x) can't wait to read more =D really cute fic ^^

Author's Response: Bill's mom is definitely fantastic XD

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