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Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:50 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

OOO! Great update- is Bill a siren and im guessing he doesn't realise what his voice does to people from the 'not again' bit...language is it elvish? or am i way off...? More please...and the eyes on that banner...just wow

Author's Response: You're actually the closest guess I've gotten about Bill! Congrats XD As for the language. . .Is it terrible that I really want to translate it into Elvish just for you? lol. No, it isn't elvish. The eyes in the banner are actually from some kid I found on Google. I never edited them at all

Reviewer: skl16179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:42 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

man i looked it up and i still didnt even get an answer it said irish one said a mixture of english and possibly catalan... i have no idea

Author's Response: You'll find out at the beginning of next chapter then ^^

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:35 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

Is that Welsh? And I can't wait to see Merman Bill!!

Author's Response: Not welsh and as for Bill being a merman....Don't let him hear you call him that lol!

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:34 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

Is that Welsh?

Author's Response: Nope

Reviewer: billxbesitztxmeinxherz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:33 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

Hmmm making us guess? Well Im going to have a few guesses then..Italian? Indian? It kinda looks like Latin but I'm pretty sure it's not. Some middle eastern language maybe? *thinks hard* okay last guesses ur kinda of a history nerd *ducks! Don't hit me I am too!* and your writing Die Watcher right now so I'm going to guess it's either Islandic, Scottish, or Irish.

Author's Response: *Laughs* It's ok, I know I'm a nerd. Your closeR with the last two, but....

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:29 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

Is it Polynesian or Scottish, or...hm, have no clue just looking at the lyric :{ Fun trying to guess though.
Oh man...this is really so different and can't wait to see if Tom is/stay's under Bill's spell!!!
Thank you for the update!

Author's Response: You're kinda right....ish....in a way... XD

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 03:22 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

I know! I know! I know! Not telling because you're not allowing me *pouts* Beautiful language and song, btw, mo beag faolain *giggles*. Loved it. And the 'not again' killed me.

Author's Response: *Giggles* No, you aren't allowed to say because some people read reviews *eyes those readers* And really, given what Bill is, the 'not again' really fits.

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 08:17 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Great story! I'm all excited about seeing where this goes!

Author's Response: ^^

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 07:52 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Ell oh ell.

Tom/Andreas fuckbuddies. That definitely made me laugh. And I'm really excited to see Bill as a...mermaid? I'm assuming. I don't like saying mermen >___> Anyway, this is going to be good. Your stories usually are :3



Author's Response: Mermen is nto a cool word. And I wouldn't be so quick to use the word mermaid either, but that's just me... *blush* Thank you so much for the compliment.

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 05:40 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Is Bill like a mermaid in this and Tom's little sister keeps him as a pet when fishing? I think that's what u meant in the summary, anyway I love it!!!

Author's Response: Not entirely what I had in mind, no. You'll have to just wait and see ;)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 05:20 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Um...more, please. SOOO hooked!

Author's Response: Already? Sweet!

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 05:02 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Nice start- so is Bill like a mermaid or something? Magical? And the banner is beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks! Mermaid? I wouldn't exactly say that. . . Magical? A little ;)

Reviewer: k483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 03:27 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Love the beginig can't wait to meet mermaid bill

Author's Response: *eyes* who said mermaid? lol

Reviewer: AveryKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 02:14 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

MMM MORE! :)

This was too good :) i cant wait until bill comes into the picture! I loved this :D

Author's Response: XD He arrives next chapter

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 02:07 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Oh, but you love it. And I do my best to make you happy, so...

Author's Response: *eyes*

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 01:59 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Oh god, sounds like a good starting. Romps in the sheets are nice, and...YAY! Let's go to candy mountain, charliiiieeee. Yeeeeah, come to candy mountain. We're going to candy mountain, charlieee, come with us. It's a land of sweets, and joy...and joyness. *giggles* (there may even be jelly beans there!)

Author's Response: *glares* the things I endure to make you happy, I swear ^^

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 01:49 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

I'm really excited about this story! It's a very intriguing idea and has great characterizations. So can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: *Squeals and bounces* Thanks so much!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 01:47 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

Why Tom! You make me giggle with your sex-on-the-brain attitude! XD

I can't wait to see where this goes! Sounds like a funny ride ahead!

Author's Response: I certainly hope it will be XD

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 01:36 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

:D -is ready for the rest-

Author's Response: XD I'm glad to hear it hunny

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