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Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 03:14 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

*LMAO* I needed a visual for the kitchen scene and you didn't disappoint. That would be creepy as hell

Author's Response: *giggles* I freaking LOVE that face. I even made it into an emoticon for msn XD

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 02:38 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

Malarkey! I love that word.

Author's Response: It's fantesticle!

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 02:30 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

that was AWESOME. more chapters

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so ^^

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 02:14 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

This just get's better and better-love the ending, too funny! LOL

Author's Response: XD Woot! I'm glad you liked

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/10 03:38 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

that is a creepy smile! XD
lmao

Author's Response: It really is! But it's so epically amazing at the same time lol!

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/10 03:32 pm Title: "Oh my god! You ate my sister's fish!"

XD

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/10 03:22 pm Title: "I've never been so happy to see you and blah blah blah. Now, where are my presents?"

lol cute ^_^

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/10 03:11 pm Title: "This is the only fish I've seen that doesn't have ugly eyes!"

lol

Reviewer: Kenyatta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 09:59 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

kool chapter!Write more soon!

Author's Response: I will! thanks

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 09:03 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

OH my G's!

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 08:50 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

yay!

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 04:49 am Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

You have the most wonderful ideas for story plots. And I like that! :) Like I like this story. Don't know why I didn't read this one before.

I just love Bill in this. I'm sure he has Tom wrapped around his finger, if not yet, soon ;)

xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I try to be original. And of course Bill does... Tom just doesn't realize it lol

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 03:32 am Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

That image at the end made me literally lol, and then I went to reread that part with the image in my mind and I lol-ed even harder. XD Great chapter! It was nice to learn more about Bill. Teehee he's so bubbly cute! :D

Author's Response: XD I'm glad. I DIED while writing it, because the image was in my head the entire time. Poor Tom lol!

Reviewer: 1l0v3t0k10h0t3l Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 12:40 am Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

OMG CUTE!!!!
and yes the beginning was funny *imagines* yup... it was XD

Author's Response: *snickers* I'm glad you thought so

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 11:08 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

Lol loved it.

Author's Response: Woot!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 10:49 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

Oh god, that pic in the chapter end notes makes the kitchen scene even more hilarious! Loved this chapter, it's so hilarious! xD

Author's Response: XD I'm glad you liked it! and that pic is so epic of Bill

Reviewer: Sakura Blizzard Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 08:02 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

Cute picture. I can totaly see Bill. DO that to Tom just to see him freak. :) great story so far.

Author's Response: XD I can see it too. and thanks so much!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 07:08 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

LOL-loved this chapter. I'm trying to picture's Tom's face when he turn's around and Bill is there...

Author's Response: Sadly, I haven't quite found the perfect expression, otherwise I would've added that too

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 07:02 pm Title: "Oh my god! You ate my sister's fish!"

Just catching up...My my, Bill is a liitle snippy thing isn't he? Love him like that! Cannot wait to see what's next...

Reviewer: RetteMichGegenMeinenWillen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 05:48 pm Title: "I live here, remember? In your living room?"

lol at bill face in the morning...lol

Author's Response: XD I swear, anyone that's THAT happy in the morning should be shot - Bill or not, man. lol!

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