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Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 07:20 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

aww so cute :) i love this :)

Author's Response: Goodie!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 06:19 pm Title: "And as for him not wanting me? Psh! I'm irresistible!"

This is the first time I've ever read the word "malarkey" in a piece of literature. Good job :) And I have to admit that I laughted at the Charlie the Unicorn Reference.

The language I think Bill is speaking is either Gaelic or one of the Nordic languages... eh, or maybe even Sweedish. I hope I'm right!!

Author's Response: XD I'm glad you enjoyed those little bits. And yes, Bill spoke Gaelic

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 05:36 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Hehe that was really creative about Bill's eyebrow piercing. Also about how he made a fish decoy, even though I was cringing at the bit of mutilation. D:

The last part was so cute with Bill being so curious and stuff. :3 And YAY the adorably creepy smile returns!! XD

Author's Response: My da always said my piercings looked like fish hooks o.O so I thought meh, lets do that to Bill lol.

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 04:21 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

jussssssssst great! :D tom is such a perv x'D

Author's Response: Of course he is!...That's why we love him

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 04:06 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

I just finished reading all eight chapters and I am really enjoying your story!

Can't wait for more! :]

Author's Response: XD I'm so glad you took the time to read this. Thank you!

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 03:35 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Tom is a horny boy and Bill is clueless...perfect

Author's Response: XD Of course it is

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 03:16 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

yeah bill is touching tom. i think theres gonna be a kiss soon or at least i hope there will be

Author's Response: well, there already has been.....if you include Tom kissing Bill who turned into a fish immediately.... XD

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 03:01 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Wow, good call Billoesia on making a fish made of part of his skin. I can't wait to see the fun he and Tom have together. And I wanna see him in his 'mermaid' form!!!

Author's Response: It was a good call, huh? XD And his mermaid form will be back later

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 02:27 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Haha it's getting real good now.

Man I haven't watched Pinky And The Brain in years.

Author's Response: *sighs* I miss that show so much ^^

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 05:09 am Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

the story is great!!! :D please continue! ^^

Author's Response: I will ^^

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 09:59 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

Lmao love the last bit.

Author's Response: I'm so very glad

Reviewer: Kenyatta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 02:46 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

aww awesome chapter!Write more soon!

Author's Response: I'm posting another chapter today ;)

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 08:18 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

AWESOME

Author's Response: Thank ya!

Reviewer: xXJordaSaurXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 07:32 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

i can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: I'm posting another chapter today

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 07:14 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

Hehe oh I love how almost hyper Bill always is in this fic. XD It's so cute! And I still love that image of that huge smile being incorporated in. It suits him perfectly, especially when he's acting like this. :3

Author's Response: It's such a creepy smile! I'm totes obsessed with it now lol!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 01:39 am Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

Loved it!
Can't wait for more! =)

Author's Response: XD

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 09:05 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

Hahaha, poor Tom xD Bill's so eccentric. I love it <3

Author's Response: Bill's fantastic....But he kind of mellows out later.... *sighs*

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 04:30 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

tomis got a crush tomis got a crush *skips around the room*

Author's Response: *skips n sings with you*

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 03:59 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

"I wasn't staring or drooling," Tom mumbled, but did as Bill told him.

And who do you think Tom believes you? xD That oure sexuality will be your "doom", I'm sure of it ;)

xx

Author's Response: XD Tom TRIES at least

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 03:32 pm Title: "I can't help it you can't keep your face out of the toilet."

Loved it more please!!

Author's Response: Fer totes!

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