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Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 06:52 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

awwnnn...come baaaaack fishy x3

Author's Response: ^^ he will, don't worry

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 05:36 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

aww i can't believe bill is gone

Author's Response: He'll be back ^^

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 04:04 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

You better bring Bill back, and I wanna see him in mermaid form! Please!!

Author's Response: He totes was in mermaid form in this chapter

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 04:01 pm Title: "Can it be a freakishly large river or something?"

Bill's going to be so upset Tom left him there!

Can't wait to find out what happens! :]

Author's Response: Ohhh yeah! lol

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 01:25 pm Title: "Ok, fine. but seriously, you're dragging me along on this trip too?"

>.> update soon D: or im going to like DIE!

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/10 07:05 am Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

Love it Love it

Author's Response: XD YAY!

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 12:30 am Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

"Tom only got a dirty look and a threat that if he kept it up, Bill would bitchslap him."
LOVE IT!!

Very cute when Tom asked Bill to be his boyfriend.

Really looking forward to more! :]

Author's Response: XD I thought so too

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 12:04 am Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

LOl! I LOVED the end of this chapter!

Author's Response: XD me too. Creepy Bill is awesome

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 11:32 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

aww i love this. :) i hope there is an update sooonnn :))

Author's Response: There will be!

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 11:03 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

Here goes trying to type a review on my phone (which just somehow got Internet access even though it's never had it before xD). Anyway.

Tom and Bill are just adorable x3 Tom not being able to sleep because of Bill not being there, and...and...

Author's Response: I feel special that you used your phone to review XD The Tom not being able to sleep part was an RL moment. I couldn't sleep, so I wrote that lol

Reviewer: 1l0v3t0k10h0t3l Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 09:55 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

hell yeah andi! take your filthy hands off his bill!!!!! and god he is creepy!!!! *hides*
now... thanks to you ... i will never look and nathalie or dunja or saki without laughing -.- XD

Author's Response: XD Damn that Andy! And yes! I couldn't help but make Saki a shark. I mean come on...it's perfect lol!

Reviewer: xmoomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 07:48 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

THE SMILE!! I swear I'm in love with that adorably creepy smile, and it makes reading these chapters that much more fun. XD But anyway yay! I'm glad they're going steady now. And it was so cute that Tom needed Bill besides him to fall asleep. :) Oh, and the photo at the end is so cute. Awww... :)

Author's Response: I'm in love with it too! I think that's why it keeps showing up. . .Aside from the fact it's just perfect lol

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 06:52 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

Lol! Great!

Author's Response: Danke!

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 06:32 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

Aww, so cute! Bill in mermaid form, now, please!!

Author's Response: I'll happen in ch 10 or 11

Reviewer: tiff_stuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 05:31 pm Title: "Dude, you're so not hot enough to be steady with Bill."

Sakiton ROFL xDDDDDD

Author's Response: Sakiton is an awesome name.... I think you should change your name to that lol!

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 06:33 am Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Awesome

Author's Response: Danke

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 01:08 am Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Yay for Tom and Bill getting somewhere!
I cannot wait for more!!
=)

Author's Response: Took long enough eh? lol

Reviewer: 1l0v3t0k10h0t3l Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 10:26 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

O.O
the ending was so .... GAH!!!!!!!!1 cant find the words to describe it ._.
its like sooooo cute and so HOT and it makes it HOTTER when im watching tomis come face at the same time .,.

Author's Response: *eyes* why were you watching that? lol

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 08:09 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Aw, Bill had to ask to touch Tom xD How adorable.

That skin chunk was nasty, though. I got a pretty detailed visual from that and it's...ew. Yucky ;P But smart xD



Author's Response: The skin chunk WAS nasty, but it worked. And yesh, Bill's so cute when he's not being wired n creepy lol

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 07:54 pm Title: "Oh, so you want to get romantic with me now?"

Soo good! Please continue soon!
I really liked it :)

Author's Response: I will. Thanks for the r&r!

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