Date: 05/24/13 09:53 am Title: Down the wrong path
I absolutely loved this! Well written ;)
Date: 12/17/11 10:22 am Title: Down the wrong path
That sneaky sunovabitch stole his chocolate, hmph
Date: 05/25/11 06:06 pm Title: Down the wrong path
oh WOW. um, i think i want to go to grandmother's house now, too. that was ridiculously hot. it's amazing how quickly tom was able to get bill to lose himself. i wonder if his mom had warned him against this type of danger.
Date: 10/11/10 01:10 pm Title: Down the wrong path
HAHA. That's an awesome ending. xD
Date: 09/25/10 08:11 pm Title: Down the wrong path
hmm...that was...strange...I thought for sure Bill was either gunna die or not be able to leave...but he just stole the chips...kinda stange but i liked it.
Author's Response: Ahah, I never had any intention of killing Bill...Interesting point of view, however. Thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: 08/11/10 09:08 pm Title: Down the wrong path
Not the chocolate! D: lol
Date: 03/29/10 12:36 am Title: Down the wrong path
Well hot Jesus!
Date: 03/05/10 11:44 pm Title: Down the wrong path
Yummy. =)
Date: 01/31/10 11:26 pm Title: Down the wrong path
Chocolate chips! Oh, gotta love ya, pickle.
Author's Response: Aaaw, danke :3
Date: 01/30/10 10:42 am Title: Down the wrong path
I love retellings of fairy tales, and you did a great job with this! Well written, and definitely hot.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thinking of doing the same with other fairy tales, too :3
Date: 01/27/10 03:07 pm Title: Down the wrong path
lol, wolf with a sweet tooth. (^_^)
Date: 01/26/10 02:19 pm Title: Down the wrong path
:D YES! Nice move, Tom
Author's Response: Tom's a sneaky fella, non? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/26/10 12:09 pm Title: Down the wrong path
LOL-my oh my, what someone will do for choc.chip's! Tom got more than chip's though-and Bill got a little something too--- ^_* Love it!
Author's Response: Ahaha, indeed. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/26/10 11:04 am Title: Down the wrong path
I love how you ended that. The idea that Tom went through all of that just to steal Bill's chocolate chips is just wonderful. Really and truly wonderful. I really like this.
Author's Response: Thank you :3 I'm really glad that you like it!
Date: 01/26/10 09:39 am Title: Down the wrong path
Well, that bightened my afternoon, lol. Tom kind of reminded me of the guy from The Company of Wolves :)
Suprising what you can trade a bag of cookies for, eh?!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I've never heard of The Company of Wolves, though.
Date: 01/26/10 01:38 am Title: Down the wrong path
That was hot. It's rather late here and I've got to run to bed before i'm exhausted in the morn, but STILL this is rather gooddddddd. you had me on the edge of my seat. ^_^
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! So glad you liked it and reviewed, it means a lot to me :3
Date: 01/26/10 01:30 am Title: Down the wrong path
I love it! It was hot and... idk, is cute the right word? Yeah, I think so. The beginning was cute, it reminded me of Little Red Riding Hood, honestly! (I've never seen Into the Woods :P) And the end, with Tom stealing the chocolate chips was really funny. I wasn't expecting it. With the way you described him, with his sharp teeth and wicked grins, I thought he was going to do something a lot worse. I'm glad he didn't; that comic relief immediately after something so sexy was just... idk. Brilliant. I can't wait to read more fics from you. :) (Sorry if I'm not making much sense, btw. It's 1:29 in the morning here, and I'm really tired, but couldn't go to bed before reading this ;))
Author's Response: Eee, I'm so flattered! Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I'm beyond happy that you liked it.
Date: 01/26/10 12:25 am Title: Down the wrong path
*Flutterclaps* I loved this story- most def. added to my favorites!
Ha ha! And the end? Killed meh! You killed TSOA XD
Author's Response: I FLUTTER CLAP IN RETURN! :3