Date: 03/27/12 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um... I think that ending begs another one... where Bill perhaps tricks Tom into using another of the little toys he bought at that store...XD The next one doesn't have to be with the guys from Star Trek, though. It could just be at another hotel...XD ANYWAY, well done...although, since it's rated NC17, not R, you really should've included the sex... You might wanna change the rating =)
Date: 03/30/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful! I was overjoyed when I saw that you wrote a sequel! I enjoyed reading this. :]] Nice job, and I look forward to reading more of your work. ^^
Date: 01/29/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I cant help but wonder what Bill bought- you should write more in this series...
Author's Response: ^_^ I'm definitely considering it. There will probably be another one written once I get used to my new schedule. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/25/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was cute and fun and sexy all rolled into one. i adored it xD
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. <3