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Reviewer: teddybear1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 08:50 am Title: Elf. Set Free

wow is the words to describe the whole thing!

Reviewer: lollita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/10 06:01 pm Title: Zehn. Secrets and Hearts Unfold.

ugh, i just love this chapter, so much emotion in it. I could picture him clearly in my head

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 9

Well, it's about damn time we got some answers other then flashbacks..!

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 01:25 am Title: Acht. Nightmares of the Past

No I dont think you should change it.. As I've said before, I like the story just the way it is..

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 01:07 am Title: Sieben. A Lullabye She Played

Oh boy. Olivia outside. Baad idea...

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 12:56 am Title: Sechs. Reminders of the Past

"Yes, I am. But you're an ass, and you just got fucked."
First off love this///!! And secondly, mabey he is falling to fast, but you know what they say, you can't help who you fall in love with...

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 12:38 am Title: Fünf. Welcome Home

This is fasinating.... I LOVE this story.. I think Bill really is her gardian angel..

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 12:23 am Title: Vier. Dinner Disaster

Yes... Thant's how my grandmother makes me feel... Safe and okay...
I do eat though...

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 12:14 am Title: Drei. Guardian Angel

I really really do like this story..
It's damn good....

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/10 12:00 am Title: Zwei. Comtemplating: Faced With the Facts, What Will You Do?

This is a really good start. It's had me hooked from the fisrt chapter..

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 11:53 pm Title: Eins. Jealously Turning Saints Into the Sea.

WoW.. This is deep. It's almost like you lived it.. I'm not trying to be funny either, I tried to kill myself once. Twice actually.

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 07:19 am Title: Chapter 9

:O mannnn i need more

Reviewer: alexxa88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 03:51 am Title: Chapter 9

noooooooooooooo, i need more,,,please.
sorry i didn't review in the last one, but I've been busy, but this chapter was,,,wow.
please update soon.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 9

tbh i'd be afraid to eat Toms breakfest lol

Reviewer: Sammiecyanide Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/10 03:12 am Title: Acht. Nightmares of the Past

I love I love <3 I really like where you're going with this story, it's sweet and messed up and I love it :3

Reviewer: ForeverWithoutHope Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/10 10:13 pm Title: Acht. Nightmares of the Past

its really good. i want to read more of the story. i hope you update soon! :]

Reviewer: BlueOrchid Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/10 12:33 am Title: Sechs. Reminders of the Past

!!!!!!!!!!
OHMYGOD. While I was reading, I was totally imagining Olivia playing "River Flows in You". AND THAT'S WHAT SHE WAS PLAYING! It's like I have ESP or something. This is too crazy.

That song is so beautiful, by the way. It makes me feel happy...in a sad way. haha
Does that even make sense? lol

Author's Response: It does make sense! Maybe you do have ESP!! -stares- What am I thinking? lol I adore the song too. I learned to play on the piano but I do it no justice, not like Yiruma.. That man has skills!!!

Reviewer: nadia123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 12:31 am Title: Sechs. Reminders of the Past

Bill and Tom's relationship is the best! (: I love this.

Reviewer: lollita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 05:56 pm Title: Sieben. A Lullabye She Played

i absolutely LOVE how you describe everything MOREEE!!!! lol

Reviewer: alexxa88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 08:48 pm Title: Sieben. A Lullabye She Played

like every chapter, i have to say that i loved this one. i could almost fell the terror of olivia.
please update more.

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