Date: 04/03/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 1
HEY WINTRYAIR!!!
This was super cute! It was nice to read about what the G's do on vacation. now adays the media always focus on where the twins are at on vacay. It was cute to think that they might do this.
My favorite part was when they addmited to having twin withdrawls. soooo funny. keep it up!
Author's Response: hi there. nice to hear from you. i am also wondering whether you are still up for possibly doing a banner for one of the stories? take your pick, of course. however, i recommend the WIP's, since those might attract more readers who will see your work.
Date: 02/26/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is good. Really good. Aside from the lack of paragraphs (huge blocks of text make me cross eyed trying to read them--being slightly dyslexic doesn't really help either) it's pretty flawless...
"Kaulitz Withdrawal"... Genius... I'm sure ANYONE would get that even after spending a few minute with the twins... :)
I enjoyed it. It's good. Keep up with the writing.
Author's Response: I tried placing larger spaces between the paragraphs. Apologies for the inconvenience. I know a little more about how stories appear in their published form on this site now.rnOf course I will keep up with the writing. It's far too much fun.rnThank you.
Date: 01/24/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the premise of this. Very cute. :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I usually end up writing serious, angsty stuff, so I'm happy I succeeded at cute.