Date: 02/16/10 10:38 am Title: A Night To Remember
ugh why can't Tom just be patient and stop being so stupid.
i hope he feels bad after she tells him she loves him
great chapter
Author's Response: thank you!!! :D
Date: 02/15/10 02:09 pm Title: Stranger Things Have Happened
woah, i don't see why she just can't have both of them. everyone can win and have great sex...i'm such a perve for saying that
so did she have sex with Bill while Tomw watched or was it Tom the whole time?
Author's Response: I know I would want both so I guess we're both perves!? haha. Come check for a new update tomorrow or maybe even later today to find out. :D thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/15/10 11:11 am Title: Stranger Things Have Happened
WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!This was just about the best update ever. Great story BTW
Author's Response: Really! thank you! I needed that! haha. V-day was not kind to me :( anyways I'm updating either today or tomorrow! :D (Was this response bipolar?)
Date: 02/14/10 09:33 am Title: Stranger Things Have Happened
OMG!!
All the time I thought it was Bill!!
Is is really Bill or is it Tom?
OMG!!
Can't wait for more!!
Oh mein gott!!
please write more chapters!!
I REALLY LOVE IT!!
AND PLEASE, UPDATE FASTER!!
Author's Response: Haha I'm so glad you love it! and I'm trying to write as fast as I can. thanks! :D
Date: 02/14/10 06:19 am Title: Stranger Things Have Happened
WHat!? More please!! did she sleep with Tom again while he pretended to be Bill?????
Author's Response: I'm trying so hard to give you more! I just need patience! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/07/10 08:58 pm Title: Quality Time
Hahaha Tom and Emma got sooo close, but they HAD to get interrupted! It's alright though, it's cool that Ryle and the guys get along so well. And what was Bill still doing there?? Lol I thought he and Tom would have already left. And I love the bond Emma has with Ryle, it's really fun to read.
Great job! Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: I was trying to get more Emma and Bill time. haha thx I love writing there conversations. I sorta based their bond on my sister and me. :D
Date: 02/07/10 10:19 am Title: Quality Time
nice chapter!!!!
woooo!!!!!!!
more!!!
and faster!!!
weee!!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying!!! thx!
Date: 02/07/10 02:11 am Title: Quality Time
great story so far...cant wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: yay! :D
Date: 02/05/10 11:03 pm Title: The More The Merrier!
WOW!!!!
MORE!!!!
MORE CHAPTERS!!!
FASTER!!!!!!
MORE!!!!
Date: 02/03/10 05:24 pm Title: The More The Merrier!
Ooooh :D:D who whants to talk ?! :D:D when are you going to update :D?
Author's Response: I'll mostly likely update friday. My teachers have all decided to pile up my homework and we only just started new classes! :(.
Date: 02/03/10 12:02 am Title: The More The Merrier!
Who is it?!
Tell me!!
or Update!!
Author's Response: I'll try to update my thrusday lastest friday! but im not telling yet! thx :D
Date: 02/02/10 10:09 pm Title: The More The Merrier!
this story is AWESOME!!! will there be a little threesome going on anytime soon? that would make me happy
can't wait to read more
Author's Response: You know what? I've never thought of that before?! Maybe if I have the balls to write it! haha no promises. and thank you SO much!
Date: 02/02/10 01:53 pm Title: The More The Merrier!
I likey update!
Author's Response: thx ^.^
Date: 02/02/10 01:00 pm Title: The More The Merrier!
:O how could u leave it at that?! its amazing though so thanks veryyy muchh xx
Author's Response: I HAD to leave it like that sry :( (im evil hehe) thx :D
Date: 02/02/10 11:16 am Title: The More The Merrier!
OK this chapter kinda lost me... Not really sure who/why Ryle is here, but I'm sure we'll find out.
Author's Response: Really? I thought I made it clear. Sorry for confusing you. Ryle is Emma's cousin who is visiting their granny and her. I don't want to give to much out but he's a comic relief I guess you can say. thanks for reviewing and I'm sry again! :)
Date: 01/28/10 11:21 pm Title: Fucking Emotions
Love it! Hehehe but I'm really curious as to what Tom was going to tell her when he got cut off and what Bill wanted to tell her at the end. Great job, can't wait until next time! :)
Author's Response: You gotta love suspense! haha thanks!
Date: 01/28/10 05:39 pm Title: Fucking Emotions
uh oh!! more please!!! love it so far! I think there's going to be some trouble in paradise very soon ;)
Author's Response: You may be right...and thank you for reviewing!
Date: 01/28/10 08:55 am Title: Fucking Emotions
:) Oh my, you're maneuvering your narrative in a difficult direction. I'm curious where this scenario might go, in my mind it'd be a set up for a very bad twin confrontation, not to mention the implications of their relationship with the girl.
On a technical note, some of your German is off. You might want to find someone to help you with it, but in this fandom that shouldn't be impossible :)
Also, this story would profit from moving a little slower. Just a thought. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping for some constructive critisim for my german and I apologize. As for the pace of the story I meant for it to build fast in the first few chapters I still don't know if I should keep it at this speed because if I do there will be no need for a sequel but I don't want to speak prematurely on anything. I'll slow it down and see how it works out. xD
Date: 01/27/10 01:52 pm Title: Is This For Real?
HAHA xD OMG love this. how the hell is this going to end xD
Author's Response: Me don't know? *teehee* keep reading and i'll try not to disappoint. :D thanks for reviewing and I really mean it!
Date: 01/27/10 04:19 am Title: Is This For Real?
That was a pleasant reading! Bill so bold? Hm, what's she gonna do?
Author's Response: Yeah, I think if Bill were to fall in love or something I think he would be bold about it. thank you for reading!