Date: 03/05/11 03:40 pm Title: The Files
Did you guys create the story? Or did you get it from somewhere else? Because for some reason It seemed kind of incomplete, especially with the last chapter which was just notes. If so, do you have the link please? thanks :)
Author's Response: St. Hell was originally a role playing site. The storyline amongst the characters grew to be too big to keep to ourselves, so Anony an I attempted to forge it into an actual fic. However, we'd lost the first few scenes and, while we tried to do it from memory, it became too difficult and we copped out. Essentially, since we found ourselves unable to finish it, we tried to sum up what happened in the last chapter. It was a shitty way to do it, but it was either that or leave it entirely unended.
Date: 10/22/10 02:31 pm Title: The Files
@Axel: -flounders- This!:
Lyric glanced over at Tom's stage whisper, following the boy's gaze down to Axel's huddled form on the floor. While all the shouting and violence had gone on, Axel had curled up a little more there on the floor, covering his ears and hiding his face in his knees.
Tom's eyes remained on his brother, the anger quickly drained from his face as he mumbled, "Shit..." again. Anyone who knew the twins knew that Tom hated getting pissed off like that in front of Axel because it usually brought out this same response.
I'm not imagining things. ;_;
@Lyric: YOU NEITHER. ;_; Well, actually that could have just been me being Savannah, or me being tired. It seemed to me like you put up a little bit of a front like you were, you know, tougher than you are. It was probably me being Savannah, though. e.e
And Misery told me about the explanation chapter. I suppose I'll go back and read it when I'm not running on five hours of sleep. XD
Author's Response:
Misery: Alcie had to go clothes shoppin' for her new job =/ but the reason Axel responded like that was because he was on the bring of a panic attack. He hates violence and yelling.. Having read his oneshots in the St. Hell universe, I'm sure you can gather why, but when Nate tackled Lyric out of the deck, Lyr got pissed the fuck off and was about to deck Nate until Tom's voice veered his attention toward Axel. Seeing the younger boy like that, Lyr quickly feigned a sword fight to calm Axel down.
As for Lyric, he did put up a front when it came to the drug deal but, then again, wouldn't you? Considering the way Lyric dressed and typically acted? Any sign of weakness and that dealer would've taken advantage of him. Lyric is NOT physically strong. He needed to be cocky, self assured and calm to get through that. Other than situations like that, unless Lyric was actively trying to hide something at the time, he didn't put up a front. He was just an self involved, spoiled ass at times. XD
Date: 10/22/10 12:05 pm Title: "The end? I don't fucking know.." -Hagen
Holy shit. I did not even know you dedicated a chapter to me. Holy fucking shit. I'm so sorry I haven't read this before because I know I said I would and...gosh, I'm so sorry. ;________;
Lyric makes me want to cry. He's so sweet and has such a good soul even if he tries to look on the outside like he's tough and doesn't care about anything. He needs some love and affection to get rid of that drug problem and start to be normal again. Poor thing. I think he's the one I identified the most with because I put up a front to my family all the time. I'm post-suicidal (obvs, I didn't go through with it) and none of my family members know. Only my dad who is technically my mother's ex boyfriend but the father figure. So yeah, I do understand he's going through a hard time.
What happened to Axe in the second (I think) chapter? Or maybe it was the third. I don't remember. e.e Anyway, did he have like some sort of panic attack or something? I'm sorry if it was explained, I had five hours of sleep last night and my eyes were skipping over certain parts. :( I'll read it again when I have more consciousness. .___.
I'm sad you didn't finish this (technically). I didn't read the seventh chapter because I didn't really want to know through explanation, I wanted to know through the story, so yeah. XD I suppose I'll go check out Distortion and see how it is. It's sad this doesn't have more reviews, though. It's written very well. :) You two are great at writing together. (Oh, and I'm talking to Misery and just found out that you guys are girlfriends. Gee, thanks for keeping it a secret. XD) Although if I'd just looked at either profile page I would have known. e.e
Aaaaand...Nate is fucking sexy. Oh my god. I would tap that. A million fucking times.
Author's Response:
Anony: Weeeeeeeeeeeell, hate to tell ya but you're probably going to be very confused in Distortion since you skipped over the explanation chapter. And since I'm not sure exactly what you were asking about with Axel, I've no clue what happened. And he says you can have Nate cause he doesn't want him. ^^
Axel: she can have him. i don't want him. she can put up with his delusions and forgetting every fucking important thing you ever tell him and being all... nate like -sideglances-
Misery: Yeeeeeeah... do not miss Nate. Miss Rum, though. And Phillip. =/
Lyric: o.O I don't put up a front.. I'm very honest about a lot of shit. *looks to Mis* Did I put up a front?
Mis: Uhm... *shrugs* Fuck if I remember. Anywhore! ^^ Thanks for the lovely review, babes. <3
Date: 10/11/10 02:07 am Title: "We're just a fucked up 'Breakfast Club'." -Tom Kaulitz
that was pure madness and i loved it! i was going to stop at the last chapter for tonight but seeing as someone got murdered in this one i had to stay xD
Date: 10/11/10 01:42 am Title: "Fate is a prissy, vindictive bitch" - Lyric
it only took me five hours thanks to distractions but i made it through this far o/ yay!!
*claps* i enjoy it thus far, ladies :D. And i'm totally reading this just so i can read Distortion :D
Date: 10/03/10 02:36 pm Title: "The end? I don't fucking know.." -Hagen
Sounds so interesting, even when not in story form!
Author's Response: All but the last chapter was in story form *nodnod* Buuuuut, you should check out the sequel! Distortion depicts the triplet's lives after Hell and so far, it's moving along great. ^^
Date: 08/24/10 06:30 pm Title: "The end? I don't fucking know.." -Hagen
xD You gals are crazy xD I thank you for at least giving us a discription of what happened, because I think we would all have been thoroughly screwed if we started to read Distortion without the info x3 And yay for tripcest *frown* That didn't sound as great as it did in my head... Anywhore *loved that one* I can't wait for Distortion :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response:
Lyric: Tripcest? o.O *sloooooowly looks over at Teddy*
Teddy: Don’t look at me. I don’t want anything to do with what you two do in your own time.
Axel: -is actually very disturbed with that thought- ... >.> yeah... next subject please.
Misery: *quietly sings “Scotty Doesn’t Know” while substituting Teddy’s name at odd intervals* Huh, what? Oh! XD So, uhm.. I got noth-
Lyric: I got dis. *grins* Love Teddy like the bear he is, but uhm.. yeah, NO! *snickers* And thanks for the review! *beamwiggles*
Teddy: Yeah... not gonna happen.
Axel: -still totally disturbed by the idea-
Alcie: -too busy gigglefitting to think of anything else-
Misery: Glad you liked the condensed version, babes. Hopefully it’ll simplify things for the continued readers when Distortion goes up. We’re HOPING it’ll be readable as a stand alone, so cross your fingers fooooor... >.> Stuuuuuuuuff! *gigglefits* Lotsa fun in this one, and uhm.. *blinks* S’too early for this! *whines - clinggropesAlcie*
Alcie: -isclinggroped- uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh....... -blinks slowly- bye? :D
Date: 04/14/10 02:05 pm Title: "Our lives are far from rainbows and butterflies." --Tom Kaulitz
woo......... that kind of lifes! sucks right? poor Lyric and tom and probably Axel too [can't wait to read his story!!!!! pls pls pls] to be in that place!
i like Lyric's attitude! he's cool! ... oh god it it would exist another kaulitz [trumper] in real life i would go insane!
Date: 04/14/10 05:06 am Title: "Our lives are far from rainbows and butterflies." --Tom Kaulitz
~huggles Lyric and gives him an industrial sized bag of skittles~ hey, this was great! i love it actually(but you knew that) I wonder if I'll ever get to have Lyric again, even if it's just for another chappie... oh well, i love you all~
Date: 04/14/10 04:39 am Title: "Our lives are far from rainbows and butterflies." --Tom Kaulitz
I loved it :) Bro bond forming!! *jumping up and down* :D *hands you over the drug/skittle/review* :P I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 04/14/10 04:09 am Title: "We're just a fucked up 'Breakfast Club'." -Tom Kaulitz
Awwwww! ~huggles Lyric~ in this chappie, or the next? cos I love this one! sorry I couldnt review sooner, college... ~headdesk~ anyways, yeah.. Lyric, i'll pet you and love you, whatever you want. if youre mine for even a little while, ill make sure youre drowning in love and happiness... ~pets Lyric's hair and cuddles with him, feeding him skittles~
Date: 03/31/10 12:14 pm Title: "You do realize we're all fucked, right?" -Lyric Trümper
ohmygod yae 8D. Dunno how I missed the journal thingy.. unless it was.. yeah but yae! Teddy bears and crap.. love getting a look at their minds
Date: 03/31/10 12:00 am Title: "You do realize we're all fucked, right?" -Lyric Trümper
I freaking love this story!!!....i wonder if lyric and axel will get together?...idk....thnx for the update!!
Date: 03/30/10 09:34 pm Title: "We're just a fucked up 'Breakfast Club'." -Tom Kaulitz
I'm loving this story.
It's so new, different and refreshing.
I'm seriously getting lost in this whole story; the St. Hell world, and I love it!
Date: 03/30/10 02:27 am Title: "You do realize we're all fucked, right?" -Lyric Trümper
Loved It!
Looking forward to the next chapter..
Thanks Muchly for sharing these journal entries :)
Date: 03/29/10 06:28 pm Title: "You do realize we're all fucked, right?" -Lyric Trümper
I loved it ^^ I hope you continue soon, you crazy people x3
xx Chi ^^
*I love it, no worries xP*
Date: 03/28/10 12:51 pm Title: "I already knew." -Bill "Axel" Kaulitz
*resists glomping Lyric*
And you guys need to update -.-
Date: 03/16/10 09:12 pm Title: "I already knew." -Bill "Axel" Kaulitz
I LOVE this. It's really good and I'm excited to see more. C:
Date: 02/27/10 01:06 am Title: The Files
HAHAHAHA im such a looser
daaaah, im supposed to expect madness XDD
Date: 02/25/10 10:28 pm Title: "I already knew." -Bill "Axel" Kaulitz
they finally found out the truth
im sooo waiting to see what happens next