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Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 08:15 pm Title: Tom @ 4

I honestly don't know why it's taken me so long to read this wonderful, amazing story. I've had it in my 'tracked stories' for so long, but have been taking my time to actually click on it to read it. Maybe it's partly like 'The Time Traveler's Wife'. (I never was a huge fan of the movie =/ )

I am so glad I clicked on it though. I am so glad it was in my 'tracked stories' and I began to read the wonderful tale of Bill and Tom's lives together. This seriously is the most beautiful, emotional, and heartbreaking story I have ever read on THF. The way you have written the twin's relationship and love for each other hit me hard, deep down in the heart. Their love and connection was so beautiful and I felt every emotion that you were trying to bring to the surface.

This was truly wonderful and I thank you for sharing such a beautiful story with us. I will forever remember the story of Bill the traveller and his love, Tom who he always was there for. The one he always went back to. I will never forget this. Never.

Reviewer: lena163 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 04:33 pm Title: Tom @ 7

I'm crying, crying crying crying, so much I can't see the keyboard anymore (sorry for the mistakes, I'm french, bad start, and the tears doesn't help). My mind is completely upside down, Im' not even sure I will be able to write a coherent review. Your story and your message, just, I don't know, it's so real and beautiful and and *cries even more* God, seriously I don't know if I hate or love you for this end and the epilogue juste killed me because their bond is so beautiful and hearbreaking and breathtaking.

Hum, I think I will stop here, but thank you for this beautiful story, you are really talented.

Author's Response: This made me feel very guilty - sorry about making you cry! I'm glad you could still found the story really good though; I wanted to touch people. Thanks!

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 10:58 am Title: Tom @ 7

I adore this story so much...
it's perfect,
I have re-read it twice now.. and I cried both times..
you are such an amazing writer..
Thank you for writing this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it - it means a lot to know it's still making an impression. Thank you!

Reviewer: Slashmistress Holly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 03:42 pm Title: Tom @ 4

Oh god, I'm in full-on floods of tears RN haha. But this story was just incredible; such an emotional rollercoaster. I laughed, gasped, cried and just FELT the characters so clearly. Truly wonderful fic writing.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I'm really thrilled you were touched by it like that!

Reviewer: AcousticNotes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/11 02:29 am Title: Tom @ 7

Man, how heartwrenching this is? Terminal diseases tend to tear each and every family member apart because you're actually living the experience through with the person and I'm absolutely sure nothing breaks the heart more. I'm in some sort of familiar situation at this moment of my life; I hope with all my heart the person I love the most will get through what she's suffering and believe it or not, reading each instalment brought me back to my senses in a way. How much the twins lived it up until their end. It was truly beautiful (besides, the fourteen year old Bill trying to grab a hold of Tom's backyard back at the amusement part, as well as the multple-Bills scenes were absolutely hilarious!)

Congrats on all the awards this story has given you the opportunity to be bestowed with :)

Reviewer: alysmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 04:47 pm Title: Tom @ 4

Congratulations! You've won an awards at the Tokio Hotel Fan Fiction Awards!



Author's Response: ♥♥♥!!!

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 09:20 am Title: Tom @ 4

I don't beautiful is enough to describe this. I felt like the characters were spot on, and was sweet and heart-wrenching and made me laugh and cry, sometimes at the same time. It was incredibly realistic, despite the "supernatural" settings. It was twins done at their best, twincest aside. And the ending! I was bawling by the time I finished this. It was sad enough on its own but it really touched something in me, seeing as my grandmother passed away from alzheimer just a month ago.
I've felt really privileged to read this, thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and sharing your experience. I'm so sorry about your grandmother :( It's horrible to go through losing someone that way. If this helped at all, even by just making you laugh at times, I'm glad.

Reviewer: residentmuso Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/10 11:49 pm Title: Tom @ 7

the last movie to make me cry this much was titanic. i can't remember the last book. it's the first fanfic that's ever made me cry. god, well done. ;_;

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry ;_; But thank you so much!

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/10 12:43 am Title: Tom @ 4

Very touching story. It's the first one that has made me weep. It makes me want to shower my special people with love the way that Bill does with Tom. There is something truly magical about their bond and you have captured it in this wonderful story. I'm so glad that I discovered it. Love to you and Merry Xmas.

Author's Response: Merry Christmas and thank you! I'm thrilled you thought I captured the bond well. I hope you have a lovely Christmas!

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 06:32 pm Title: Tom @ 30

OMG! I never could have imagined it! You are a genius. ^_^

Author's Response: Lol, aww, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 06:13 pm Title: Tom @ 28

Loving the fluff!

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: Yin Dale Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:09 pm Title: Tom @ 4

This story... Wow. I don't even have the words to describe it, I'm genuinely speechless. This is SO amazingly well-written, and you had such a good hold on all the different events and Bills going through time. Everything went along so smoothly.

I love how even though this story is very, very sad (especially that ending, I cried buckets! ;_;) it still has so many funny parts, some that made me laugh out loud. It's such a wonderful balance!

I read the entire thing in one go before bed, and now I don't think I'll be able to sleep at all. I'll be thinking about this story all night! But that's the kind of effect you want stories to have, yes? :) Thanks for sharing this story with us all!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's definitely the kind of effect I was hoping for and I'm thrilled if it touched you so much. Thank you for sharing your experience of it with me!

Reviewer: Vivacious Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 12:06 am Title: Tom @ 4

I don't have the words to tell you just how much this story touched me and for a wordsmith like me that's really saying something. I can hardly even see the screen because my vision is still blurry from the tears. At age 50, when he referred to Bill as the stranger, my heart broke and I cried my way through the last 4 chapters somewhere between misery and happiness. Absolutely everything about this story is amazing. The short scenes of their life were always informative or touching, meaningful in some way, no matter how short they were in written word. It all came together so beautifully. Even the end. I'm glad you wrote and I'm thankful to have read it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥ I'm so glad you thought it all came together well, and that it touched you. Thanks for sharing your experience of the story with me. :D

Reviewer: aryene Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 04:55 pm Title: Tom @ 4

maybe you have heard said that many times, but I want to tell you this is the most tender, funny, tragic, heart- breaking and yet hopeful history i ever read, i finished reading it in the office and I'm struggling not to sob, but it also let my heart full of the endless love that is so beautifully expressed and that's what I take from here.....thank you soo much for sharing this :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for sharing your experience of it - I keep thinking readers will get bored with it, but then I get another review like this and... just thank you!

Reviewer: T-tribe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 04:02 pm Title: Tom @ 4

I just finished this whole story in one sitting. I couldn't let it go. The ending brought me to tears but not in a sad way. Their lives were full and sweet.
On another note: I totally loved the scenes with the multiple Bill's! Priceless! It must have been such fun to write them!

Author's Response: Multiple Bills were huge fun to write XD Belated thank you for the lovely review!!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 09:13 pm Title: Tom @ 4

ug. the end of this was so so tragically sad. i mean, the symmetry of the story was perfect, it all made sense and fit perfectly. but it was still sad. sweet at times, but sad.

overall a truly wonderful story. i dont know how I missed it up until now. one of the best i've read. thank you so much.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm sorry if it seemed quite so unrepentently sad.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 09:01 pm Title: Tom @ 46

ugg. this is utterly heartbreaking.

Author's Response: :(

Reviewer: Madisoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/10 08:48 am Title: Tom @ 4

I am crying… I’ve never cried so much because of a story, but I am not able to stop it…This story broke my heart. And I really mean it. I will never forget this story, I can‘t even describe what it means to me and what I felt during the reading.

I feel so sorry for Tom, this is such a terrible disease. I was crying practically the whole time since Tom was 47. It was so emotional and I needed lots of tissues.

Bill was absolutely incredible… oh god, I just think about it and I am crying again. But I am not crying only because of the sad end of their lives, I am crying because it was so beautiful, how much they loved each other whole life, how meaningful their life was and how sorry I am because it couldn‘t last forever… that is probably the main reason why I can‘t stop my tears.

Usually I would write more about the whole story, but I am really not able this time. I just wanna say that they had the most wonderful life, they don‘t have to regret anything and that is important. I just wish they‘d have more years without the disease, because it was really cruel, especially to Bill. But life is cruel…

This story is the best (*still crying*)



Author's Response: Aww ;_; I'm really glad the story sucked you in though, and that you could appreciate the amazing life the twins had.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/10 04:37 am Title: Tom @ 4

I just read this entire thing in one sitting. It's taken about two and a half hours. I have seen this around and the only reason I haven't read it till now is because it's not a habit of mine to read fics based on/inspired from movies. I don't know why; I think I subconsciously think it will ruin one of them. But I knew I just had to give this a try. And I thought, hey, it's completed.

I wish I wasn't part of a sea of people when I say I'm crying. But I really am. And I can tell you, I never cry; I'm a very jaded person and it takes things like my mother hacking at my self-esteem (she has anger problems), or our dog being given away to make me cry.

Alzheimer's is truly the most torturous of terminal diseases, I believe. I would go as far as to say I'd rather be euthanized before deteriorating to such a degree, because I just can't take the thought of being a stranger to loved ones. It's painful to everyone. (What's worse is my mom says she suspects she and I are candidates for it since we already have mild memory problems time to time (I'm 19), and I think there's some genes in her side of the family)

I can honestly tell you that I was *this* close to backing out once it was clear what was going to happen to Tom (as you can tell, I'm sensitive to the disease - I cry every time I watch The Notebook), especially because I'm writing this late at night and need to try to sleep soon... but I tensed my mind and plowed through to the end.

I'm happy that it ended on a blissful note; I'd be crying worse if it didn't. The twins will always love and take care of each other, in this world and the next.
And now they're in heaven (I assume Bill died shortly after - killed himself?) and there's no more pain or jumping or forgetting, just love.

b29;

Author's Response: Now your review is making me want to cry, lol! Thank you for reading the fic and giving it a chance; I know exactly what you mean with fics based on movies and I'm really glad you enjoyed this one anyway. I'm sorry for making you cry, but please be reassured that nothing at 19 makes you a candidate for Alzheimer's - I'm not an expert, but I do know a fair bit about it because of my personal experience. It's actually natural not to remember things, because if you remembered everything then it ought to take 24 hours to tell someone how your day was. Unless the things you're forgetting are things where you really made an effort to try and remember them, you don't have a lot to worry about - part of what you see in this fic is that Tom can't be diagnosed right away because everyone has a forgetful day now and then. It's also incredibly rare to get it this early in life, and that was a rare unlucky experience for my family - most people aren't getting it until late 60s, and then it becomes increasingly common as you get into each new decade. Please though, don't let yourself or your mom worry about it too much now. And as far as Bill goes, I think he'd have stayed with Tom. ♥ Thank you again.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 08:32 pm Title: Tom @ 4

That was so beautiful... The epilogue has me crying a little. But yeah, I laughed multiple times while I read this, and there were just as many happy and cute moments, too.

I loved the concept, and you told the story so well. I was wary of this, because I normally avoid Major Character Death, but I'm glad I read it.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much - I'm so glad you tried it despite the warning and that it did make you laugh! I started feeling guilty when people just kept crying and crying @_@

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