Date: 01/27/10 08:22 pm Title: Tom @ 17
*takes very naughty twins*
:3
So now Tom's Bill is going into the past more, because there's more to visit in the past and because when they were younger, Tom saw older Bill all the time.
*is trying to get her head wrapped around this* xD
Author's Response: He also goes into the future, too. You'll find some of those scenes quite entertaining eventually ^_~
Date: 01/27/10 08:20 pm Title: Tom @ 16
Short but good. It explains stuff :3
...I wish I had more words for this review xD
Author's Response: Lol! Some of the parts are very short so there's not much to say - thank you for commenting though!
Date: 01/27/10 08:19 pm Title: Tom @ 15
I really love how psychological you are in this. How you can make future Bill come and tell Tom about that stuff, and it's hard to keep everything straight with time travel but you did an amazing job while also managing to make it fluffy and sweet. That takes some real talent there ;]
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/27/10 08:08 pm Title: Tom @ 14
Bahahaha, Bill's such a little flirt :3
I have to admit, I do get confused with all these Bills coming and going. But it all works itself out in the end :3
Author's Response: It does eventually - I'm glad you're enjoying it despite the confusion!
Date: 01/27/10 07:47 pm Title: Tom @ 17
*_______* And I know they get even naughtier!
Author's Response: They really do XD ♥
Date: 01/27/10 04:46 pm Title: Tom @ 17
I love naught twins! *smirk*
I also love your story!
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you! And sorry for getting so behind on reviews!
Date: 01/27/10 04:46 pm Title: Tom @ 17
YES! I love me some dirty, filthy twins! And YES, what a perfect message to send himself.
Author's Response: ♥!
Date: 01/27/10 04:26 pm Title: Tom @ 17
i am in love with this. it brightens my day
Author's Response: Aww, thank you ♥!
Date: 01/27/10 04:22 pm Title: Tom @ 17
oh my godddd. my breath is literally taken away, I am loving this so, so much. it's just what I've been waiting for, it's been so long since a twin story has actually moved me this much. :)
Author's Response: You have no idea how much that means ♥!!!
Date: 01/27/10 04:19 pm Title: Tom @ 17
IF I WERE A BOY I'D SQUEE MY PANTS.
Daym. That was hot. I normally hate 'dirty' talk but this fit so perfectly and it was humorous too. Dirty, filthy boys..*recalls zimmer 483 mud photoshoot* I love me some of those! ^_^
Author's Response: LOL ♥ Thank you! I'm glad you felt it worked here ^_^
Date: 01/27/10 06:43 am Title: Tom @ 16
Focus on your Tom! God, it sounded so simple and definitely not hard for Bill to do at all!
This chapter, even if it doesn't give them something conclusive, just gives me such a happy feeling inside.
Keep thinking of your Tom, Bill, and you will always come back.
Just...I just love this chapter!
Author's Response: ♥!!
Date: 01/27/10 02:55 am Title: Tom @ 16
:))))))))
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 01/27/10 02:05 am Title: Tom @ 16
short but soooo good.
Author's Response: There'll be another one later today 'cause of the shortness! <3
Date: 01/26/10 01:08 pm Title: Tom @ 15
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER THE MOST!!(So far, lol) Everything was just right; Toms fear, hesitance, and love. Future Bills love, reassurance, and faith. GOOORGEOUS. Everyone just assumes that Tom is insensitive and a big player but we all know hes soft and cuddly on the inside! LIKE HIS TEDDY BEAR! Hehehehe
Author's Response: Tom is soft in the middle, and so protective of his little brother. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!
Date: 01/26/10 09:47 am Title: Tom @ 15
*wibble* So sweet, these boys. Though Bill's advice is going to come back and bite him later.
Author's Response: ♥
Date: 01/26/10 08:29 am Title: Tom @ 15
I'm a little confused, a think tom is too. Seeing Bill knowing the future but he doesn't.
Author's Response: It is a little confusing in scenes like this, and the concepts give everyone a headache lol. I'm glad you're sticking with me though!
Date: 01/26/10 06:54 am Title: Tom @ 14
I feel that this chapter is the setting of events in motion, because Dr. Wirth helps them understand what's happening more and theorizes how it would help Bill stop jumping so much, to give them a step in the right direction.
Author's Response: This was one of those chapters that doesn't seem to mean much, but does a lot - it connects to both @ 12 and @ 16, and it does explore important issues like Dr Wirth, but it's also one of the only times it directly refers to how it could feel to be Bill - having to wait so long to have an experience. I'm glad you liked those connections ♥!
Date: 01/26/10 06:50 am Title: Tom @ 13
THIS was entirely too sweet.
I can just imagine this discovery for Bill and how he would try so hard not to blush through it when he's in that future. As for Tom in here, it's amazing how even just a kiss made it all click so reasonably in his head. I mean, he loves Bill above all else, so really, why would them being in love terrify him or scare him? However, the thought of sex with BILL at this stage would be a bit daunting and terrifying, mostly because he won't have a proper clue what he's doing! And of course doesn't want to hurt Bill!
But he's totally okay with kissing and being in love.
Author's Response: ♥!!!
Date: 01/26/10 06:45 am Title: Tom @ 12
I remember this part making me teary-eyed, because Tom's thoughts for his mother were so dear to me. The worry for his brother was also there, because you do have to wonder what all this jumping around does to him. Like, if we were to see this story from Bill's POV, it has to be absolutely mind-boggling and at times confusing and I can imagine him thinking that he can't wait to tell Tom when he goes back.
Author's Response: I loved writing this part for Tom's consideration of Simone - and it foreshadows the later parts really well XD And yeah... You can't really write this in Bill's timeline. I tried reordering it and bits like @ 9 appear 3 times XD
Date: 01/26/10 06:39 am Title: Tom @ 15
You know, I totally don't blame Tom for getting to this point, because that's something that even I would wonder about, when everything stopped being my choice if my brother already knew the answer to many things.
I'm glad though, that this slightly older Bill showed up to explain it to Tom fully, to somehow making him understand that having certain futuristic knowledge of events, it doesn't take Tom's free will away at all. Ultimately, he still decides his own future and how he will achieve it, to get to that point where they are both so happy!
LOVE this chapter, because I think it's a pretty important one and shows how Tom is maturing, thinking about these things rather than just go with the flow half the time.
It all comes down to trust and Tom trusts Bill just as much as Bill trusts Tom.
Author's Response: I agree that this is one of those chapters that explores some important issues, and for Tom this would be one of the most important. I'm really glad you saw all of that! ♥ Hope you're doing well hon!