Date: 02/01/10 07:29 pm Title: Tom @ 23
-eyes narrow-
I don't trust that bike. I don't trust anything. Not even YOU.
-waits-
Author's Response: :o Do you trust me now?
Date: 02/01/10 06:57 pm Title: Tom @ 23
Great-great-great story, at first it was confusing and I think it's still a little confusing now.. But I'm getting a hang of it, and it's great
Author's Response: I hope you're still enjoying it! It is confusing, but hopefully in a good way!
Date: 02/01/10 05:12 pm Title: Tom @ 23
Oh! Is there by any chance the possibility that in the near future Tom's suffering an accident on his bike? Leaving him phisically damaged or something? That would explain Bill's attitude against it.
See u next chap!
Author's Response: Well, you've seen what happens now - hopefully it wasn't too bad, and I'm sorry I took so long to reply! ♥
Date: 02/01/10 05:06 pm Title: Tom @ 23
LISTEN to Bill for once, Tom! Jeebus. Everyone knows he's dumb enough to crack his head open, it should be obvious that a label be put on Toms head reading, "CAUTION: KLUTZ" and that damn bike be crushed into a tuna can!
Author's Response: LOL, poor Tom. But he just has to make his own decisions ^_~
Date: 02/01/10 04:13 pm Title: Tom @ 23
i cant get this bad feeling to go away...i mean...i was thinking about it for days...like... when other versions of bill kiss tom or even..umm something more:DD...and its like cheating to the curent bill...dont u think???....
i was imagening if i was in billsplace...and caught my curent tomkissin some other version of myself...weird haha...well i would feel hurt...especialy in this chapterwhen bill is in his room sad-hurting because of something that will happend whith tom and the bike and tom at the same time tom is having pleasure not giving a damn...donno...what do u think...do u feelsometimes the same??..haha or explain to me so i wouldnt feel weird..haha
Author's Response: I do understand where you're coming from, but you have to remember that Bill is going to be doing the same thing as Tom - being with younger and older versions of Tom. Also, as they discussed when they saw Dr Wirth at 16, Tom is always his, regardless of age, so there's no real jealousy over it. They'd end up 'alone' a lot more, if they didn't accept every opportunity to be together. This does get semi-addressed much later in the story though ♥
Date: 02/01/10 03:30 pm Title: Tom @ 23
ahh i have a bad feeling about the bike...i hope Tom doesn't get hurt or anything, but judging by how against it Bill was... D: update soon please this is so good! :)
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you - you saw how it turns out now, hopefully I'm forgiven?
Date: 02/01/10 02:00 pm Title: Tom @ 23
Oh my god. Tomi is gonna crash his bike and die. Tom is goona die, you're totally going to do that to us, aren't you?
*is sad*
Author's Response: No, lol. That's one thing I will not be doing to you.
Date: 02/01/10 01:54 pm Title: Tom @ 23
My favorite pairing. ;]
Author's Response: I thought of you when I posted that one!
Date: 02/01/10 12:47 pm Title: Tom @ 23
I just love sexy older Bill. :)
Author's Response: So do I >:D
Date: 02/01/10 01:21 am Title: Tom @ 22
Little Bill's adorable, so weet of him declaring he'll take care of his brother when such brother is at the moment at least 10 years older than he is.
Simone's is showing concern, though I think that will bring somehow a problem to Tom in the future.
Nice chap!
Author's Response: Little Bill is very much adorable. I'm so glad you enjoyed that ♥
Date: 01/31/10 11:30 pm Title: Tom @ 22
AWWWWWW *dies of cuteness* Baby Bill is possibly the cutest thing ever besides a Baby Tom. *squishes them* I looove the interaction between Baby Tom and Older Bill, and vise versa. Maybe you can write a oneshot about it, that'd be so fascinating! Hehehe. I love how Tom 'folds his baby brother in a hug, kissing his hair.'
I just melted in a puddle of goo.
And the last two lines. Just lovely
Author's Response: ♥ I loved writing the big bro/lil bro cutesy interactions so I'm so glad you enjoyed reading them!
Date: 01/31/10 06:01 pm Title: Tom @ 22
Eff, that didn't come out right -___-
I think you know what I mean, though. I'm really visually perceptive so if something doesn't catch my interest in JUST the right way I end up not reading it.
...please know what I meant ;___;
Author's Response: I know what you meant ♥!
Date: 01/31/10 06:00 pm Title: Tom @ 22
This was sweet like...
Like an Oreo ice-cream cake with whipped cream and strawberries. That's how sweet it is.
Like...agh. It's just beautiful how you portray younger Bill when he starts time traveling to the future. How everything is reversing from what it was before, when they were the younger ones. It's all fitting together and I love it.
I'm so glad this was featured because otherwise I don't think I'd have taken the time :3
Author's Response: Haha! Very sweet. Thank you so much - I'm really glad you took the time!
Date: 01/31/10 04:45 pm Title: Tom @ 22
Haha even baby Bill knows. And that is the cutest metal image I've ever seen, baby Bill in Tom's lap. You've successfully put the suspicion that you will shatter my heart into a billion pieces at bay. For now. We'll see when you post again.
Author's Response: Bill always knows the best! No matter the age lol. I hope you don't end up hating me ._.
Date: 01/31/10 12:26 pm Title: Tom @ 22
1 question- what was the name of the book that u wrote this story similiar to ad is it worth it to read it?
Author's Response: It's 'The Time Traveller's Wife' but I haven't read the book, just seen the film. I don't know how good the book itself is!
Date: 01/31/10 12:02 pm Title: Tom @ 22
Awkward... I wonder what Simone would do if she ever found out about them... interesting thought...
Anyway, still incredibly sweet as always. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/31/10 11:25 am Title: Tom @ 22
Awwww!!! Bill is so cute! That was so adorable! I love this story! Every chapter gets more sweeter than the last!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥
Date: 01/31/10 10:06 am Title: Tom @ 22
that was adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/31/10 06:35 am Title: Tom @ 22
Naaawww that is so fucking adorable!!
As soon as Bill apeared I was like 'SQUEEEEE' lol
I suck XD
UPDATE SOON!
I need something to keep me sane during the long school semester ahead :S
Stupid summer, WHY MUST YOU END!!
Stupid Australia -_-
Can't wait to see what happens next!
xx
Author's Response: You do not suck!! I hope school is going well though! Thank you!
Date: 01/31/10 05:42 am Title: Tom @ 22
oh dear..i love tomat this age...and i ALLWAY melt to being a soup whenever thy call each other baby- mostly when one of tem is older...it...is the most beutifull word...waaaaaa loovee...
Author's Response: Heee, I'm really pleased you like the use of 'baby' - I was a little worried about using it.