Date: 02/04/10 05:50 pm Title: Tom @ 27
oh that was so sweet of them it's making me all foggy-eyed! it took me a while to figure out exactly why Bill was so nervous, even after the "plastics" part XD i guess i've just never heard of plastic surgery referred to that way, haha
Author's Response: It is a fairly colloquial way of putting it I guess - I hadn't thought of that! I'm glad you enjoyed it though. The parts with Simone were very enjoyable to write ^_^
Date: 02/04/10 04:41 pm Title: Tom @ 27
Awww..at first I thought Bill was going to spill about their relationship but it turns out to be THIS. *breathes noisily like Bill* God, my stomach is still knotted/twisted from anxiety.
I literally had to force my eyes, GLUE them to the right sentences instead of skipping down immedietely to read what happened. I do that a lot lately but I'm trying to stop. And I nearly killed myself. Wooh. SOOO SWEEET Bill and Tom are like, "I LOVE YOU MAMA, I LOVE YOU!" HEARTHEARTHEARTLOVE aww *cuddles* lol
Author's Response: I didn't mean for it to sound like it was about the relationship, lol. I'm so glad you liked how it really went though! ♥
Date: 02/04/10 11:25 am Title: Tom @ 27
Those are good sons! They are so thoughtful. I can understand perfectly Bill's nerviousness over telling her, it's not easy to tell someone you love something this important and delicate.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: They are good sons - I really enjoyed writing the chapter because of that fact lol.
Date: 02/04/10 10:51 am Title: Tom @ 27
awww :)
Author's Response: It was one of the 'must happen' scenes - the twins do so love their mama.
Date: 02/04/10 09:51 am Title: Tom @ 27
How nice of them!!!
I thought they were going to tell Simone about their relationship. HAHA, that would have probably been a bad idea.
I wonder what else is going on in their lives right now... and the G's?
You're killing me with all this suspense about the 19th birthday thing?! What happens? *pouts*
Love you and your story anyway...
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you again
Date: 02/04/10 08:32 am Title: Tom @ 27
haha reading this chap for the first time, I was sure they were going to tell them about their relationship! Very cleverly written !
Author's Response: See that wasn't intended at all, lol. It was only seeing the reviews to this bit that made me realise how it looked! ♥
Date: 02/04/10 04:03 am Title: Tom @ 27
Naaawwww
They are so sweet to their mama <3
God it's rainging so hard here that my whole school was flooded :S
GAH CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!
Must go have dinner nooowwww
x ILY!!
Author's Response: Flooded?! I hope everything's okay, and I'm glad you're enjoying the fic still!
Date: 02/04/10 02:17 am Title: Tom @ 27
Oh, that's so sweet. I almost forgot she was scarred because you've been writing it perfectly, and I doubt she'd moan and groan about her scars in real life if she got into a car accident.
First one to review [hopefully], w00t :O
This made my day, and it's 2.16 in the morning and so it will make my entire day today :3
Author's Response: ♥ I just have to say thank you so much for being so supportive of the fic and sharing your views!
Date: 02/03/10 11:51 pm Title: Tom @ 26
Oh God! This was no way sad, nevertheless my eyes are watering, I can understand Tom's feeling of joy for being given the chance to be with his brother. Something that at times seems unreachable.
See u soon!
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you!
Date: 02/03/10 11:46 pm Title: Tom @ 25
Someday... what a sweet word full of promises!! I loved the security of Bill saying this to his brother, whether or not he's speking about a possible future, he's thinking of making Tom happy.
**sights**
Author's Response: Someday! *hugs* Thank you!
Date: 02/03/10 07:13 pm Title: Tom @ 26
Maybe they'll go rocky-mountain climbing...or two point seven seconds on a bull named Fu Man Chu! O.o
Bahahaha, excuse my idiocy. As always, wonderful chapter, even if it's short. Your metaphors and imagery are beautiful. I could see Bill in the imaginary scene you painted where Tom is running along the ground trying to touch Bill and Bill is flying and it's truly beautiful ;__;
Author's Response: I think they'll try and do anything and everything. Thank you again - I'm trying to catch up on reviews but I don't seem to be doing very well!
Date: 02/03/10 03:04 pm Title: Tom @ 26
HAHHAA I WANT TO SEE PICTURES OF THIS!
Fat, wind-blown cheeks fluttering, Tom screaming like a girl and clinging to Bill, hahahahaha!
Cool chapter :)
Author's Response: LOL - I'd love to see that, too. Thank you! ♥
Date: 02/03/10 12:24 pm Title: Tom @ 26
Awww thats so cute :) I'm still curious as to why Bill is jumping through time but they are just so cute :) I love it.
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you!
Date: 02/03/10 11:27 am Title: Tom @ 26
"You want to fly with me, right, Tomi?"
Pretty much died of 'awwwwe' during that line. So sweet bby, I'm loving this more and more each day.
Author's Response: ♥ For being the youngest, Bill always is forging the way ahead. I always think of Tom when I hear the line 'in your shadow I can shine'
Date: 02/03/10 08:32 am Title: Tom @ 26
Bill DOES fly doesn't he?
Aw at Tom!
I would never go skydiving! *is chicken*
Author's Response: He does fly *_* And I'm not sure that I'd go skydiving either - I'm also a chicken :D
Date: 02/03/10 04:23 am Title: Tom @ 26
I don't even know what to say about the loveliness of this chapter that Tom hasn't already, but yeah, I do wonder what it's like to be Bill and what the freedom to just fly and soar high in the sky.
And have a Tom beside me for company.
Author's Response: I think it's the having the company that makes it so wonderful *_*
Date: 02/03/10 04:20 am Title: Tom @ 25
And when that someday comes, the stars all are aligned and all is right in the world.
Everything will be as it should be.
Bill is everything Tom ever really needed and vice versa.
Author's Response: I'm looking forward to sharing 'someday' ♥ I'm timing it for a certain day in particular ^_~
Date: 02/03/10 03:26 am Title: Tom @ 26
This is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. It's like the world stops around me when I read and all I can see is the scenes play out before me. It's so real.
I'm very bad at commenting, but I felt the need to say at least something, because you deserve all credit in the world for writing this. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm sorry I've taken so long to reply but I appreciate you saying this. Thank you again! ♥
Date: 02/03/10 02:25 am Title: Tom @ 25
:O THEY HAVE TO GET MARRIED!!!!!!!!
<3 lol
Have to read the next one tooooooo :D
Author's Response: LOL 'Someday'! ♥
Date: 02/02/10 08:58 pm Title: Tom @ 25
Someday..
Thats so beautiful. I wonder how Bill's going to pull it off. AND YAY, GEORG GOT MARRIED! I knew he was always the most sensible of the lot, him after Gustav of course ;) The twins should take him as an example, coughcoughhinthint.
Oohh wonder what'll happen next. Mwah!
Author's Response: The twins should! *hugs!* So glad you're still enjoying it ^_^